Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 4:09am
24th Dec 2024 4:09am
dimly cloaked
the obsidian
night, dimly
cloaked,
seeped down
coarsely,
collecting
gossip
of her
affairs,
hard to
believe it
approves
and displays
such coldness,
diminishing
what we
held
together,
once to
a higher
standard.
night, dimly
cloaked,
seeped down
coarsely,
collecting
gossip
of her
affairs,
hard to
believe it
approves
and displays
such coldness,
diminishing
what we
held
together,
once to
a higher
standard.
#anger
#betrayal
#breakup
#disappointment
#secrets
59 reads
4 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 12:57pm
11th Dec 2024 12:57pm
Mixing It Up
#abuse
#breakup
#sex
157 reads
7 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
5th Nov 2020 8:38pm
5th Nov 2020 8:38pm
Deadwood
Deadwood in water
Drifting out of memory
Nothing to no one
Drifting out of memory
Nothing to no one
#breakup
#friendship
#senryu #disappointment
#senryu #disappointment
443 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Dec 2023 11:23am
29th Dec 2023 11:23am
Heavy Cross
was it you
or was it the wind
that turned off
the flame of desire?
who's the one that
by distraction
lost you
was lost from you
never came back
to ask for
forgiveness
I don't even ask you
that much
I just want
half-open mouth
waiting
for forgiveness
for none
of my sins
the hand begging
a solution
that cools me down
the stigmata
You are a crown of thorns
and I don't know where
I left my
sacred Heart...
or was it the wind
that turned off
the flame of desire?
who's the one that
by distraction
lost you
was lost from you
never came back
to ask for
forgiveness
I don't even ask you
that much
I just want
half-open mouth
waiting
for forgiveness
for none
of my sins
the hand begging
a solution
that cools me down
the stigmata
You are a crown of thorns
and I don't know where
I left my
sacred Heart...
#regret
#breakup
#conflict
#mirror
#confessional
146 reads
4 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
16th Mar 2023 00:22am
16th Mar 2023 00:22am
Just The Tip
(Ten thousand times)
_______________________
"We should talk about this"
"We've talked enough. It's time to heal"
"How?"
"I have an idea"
...
"Paring knives? You're stabbing me?"
"Not exactly. You get one"
"A knife fight?"
"No. We're going to stick each other with just the tips. See who
flinches the worst. Sit down...
_______________________
"We should talk about this"
"We've talked enough. It's time to heal"
"How?"
"I have an idea"
...
"Paring knives? You're stabbing me?"
"Not exactly. You get one"
"A knife fight?"
"No. We're going to stick each other with just the tips. See who
flinches the worst. Sit down...
#heartbroken
#breakup
#escape
607 reads
20 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:09pm
2nd Nov 2024 11:09pm
Beginning To End
I can't stop this fall
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
234 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
8th Dec 2021 4:35am
When Will I See You Again...
#breakup
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
694 reads
6 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 3:38pm
14th Sep 2024 3:38pm
I Actually Said This To An Ex
No _____ it's not you
It is totally all me
I just can't stand you
It is totally all me
I just can't stand you
#breakup
#freedom
287 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Dec 2022 4:34am
19th Dec 2022 4:34am
Phases of the Moon
I felt after you
In the darkness
You not there
Though the sigh of your song remained
Silvered by moonlight
Pale
Echoing the curves of my dreams
My wants and my needs
But shadows don't speak
Lost in their mingling with night
Muffling
Into that peculiar nocturnal silence
I know the dark well
You
In the remembrance of dreams
That celestial
From which you are drawn
Who no longer come on your own
Nor answer when called
I try to touch you ...
In the darkness
You not there
Though the sigh of your song remained
Silvered by moonlight
Pale
Echoing the curves of my dreams
My wants and my needs
But shadows don't speak
Lost in their mingling with night
Muffling
Into that peculiar nocturnal silence
I know the dark well
You
In the remembrance of dreams
That celestial
From which you are drawn
Who no longer come on your own
Nor answer when called
I try to touch you ...
#love
#relationships
#breakup
460 reads
10 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
Death by Love
I have cast the stone
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
#anger
#love
#women
#breakup
#power
457 reads
4 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
19th Jun 2021 7:55pm
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
The Vacation Chapter 2 part2
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
"Thank you! Thank you! Tha-"
Kimberly! Enough! You're very welcome! I do not need to hear you say it anymore. I am glad the upgrade did not go to waste, Kyle said firmly but with a smile and the woman grinned back, nodding.
The remaining members of their group arrived, and Vivian got their attention.
Just leave your bikes with us but take your helmets with you. Your bags have been taken to your rooms. Check in with registration to get your keys.
Dinner tonight is in the chateau's dining room and is covered except...
#breakup
286 reads
3 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
24th May 2023 9:28pm
24th May 2023 9:28pm
If I Knew Then (with song)
If I knew then what I know now
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
I wonder what I would do..
Would I still believe that I was fat?
Would I think I wasn’t cool?
Would I spend more time just having fun
or would I focus more on school?
It’s hard to say... but one thing’s for sure…
If I knew then what I know now
I never would have been with you.
I never would have kissed those ashtray lips
or let you make me feel blue.
I wouldn’t have waited around so much
while you tried out someone new.
Yeah, if I knew then what I know now
I never would...
#relationships
#breakup
#lyrics #memories
#lyrics #memories
369 reads
16 Comments
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