Poems About Boredom Seeking Honest Critique
#boredom
Poems about boredom seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
8th Jan 2025 12:40pm
Be at peace
Be at peace angels from heaven
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
Be at peace mother
Be at peace my friends
Be at peace my reverend
Be at peace my God
Be at piece my saints
Be at peace birds
Be at peace Mother Nature
Be at peace sea
Be at peace farmers
Be at peace little baby
Be at peace fisherman
Be at peace moon when you shine at night
Stars be at peace also when you shine at night
Birds be at peace when you fly in the sky during the day
#bittersweet
#boredom
#fear
#frustration
#rejection
43 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
7th Jan 2025 11:17pm
No me ama mais
No me ama mais
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
Porque my dear friends
It leaves me sad
Knowing that you
No me ama mais
I am also feeling very sad
My dear friends
Now you had abandon me
And never came back to see me
Again
Now I am living in isolation
And I lost the touch of the outside
World
Also now I have to start all over
Making friends again
And it is not going to be easy again
Yes I wonder if the people I chose
To be my friends will accept me
The way I am
#boredom
#frustration
#greed
#rejection
#shame
50 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
5th Jan 2025 8:59pm
Now is time
Now is time to say to someone I love you
When you see him or her
Now is a good time to celebrate who you were born to be
Now is the good time to say forgiveness to someone that you hurt in the past and
Move on with your life
Now is a good time to learn to love yourself
Now is a good time to discover what you love to do
Now is a good time to worship God
Now it is a good time to pray for the people of the world
Now it is a good time to lend a hand in the community
Now it is a good time to write your feelings in your notebook
Now it is a...
When you see him or her
Now is a good time to celebrate who you were born to be
Now is the good time to say forgiveness to someone that you hurt in the past and
Move on with your life
Now is a good time to learn to love yourself
Now is a good time to discover what you love to do
Now is a good time to worship God
Now it is a good time to pray for the people of the world
Now it is a good time to lend a hand in the community
Now it is a good time to write your feelings in your notebook
Now it is a...
#anger
#boredom
#loneliness
#rejection
#sadness
57 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 6:42pm
31st Dec 2024 6:42pm
Comrade Self Destruct.
It feels like something.
Serious.
Is creeping behind my perceptions.
Ruining the high I do got.
Stalking me.
Hunting me with the ever present concern for.
Withdrawal symptoms.
The Police.
Any sort
of calamity.
And, is there enough euphoria to power me through this doldrums.
But, that's my prerogative.
Guilt and shame arise in my subconscious.
Cause I keep getting an intrusive thought.
That the cops are coming.
Someone knows something.
I'm dying.
Or
have I transcended. ...
Serious.
Is creeping behind my perceptions.
Ruining the high I do got.
Stalking me.
Hunting me with the ever present concern for.
Withdrawal symptoms.
The Police.
Any sort
of calamity.
And, is there enough euphoria to power me through this doldrums.
But, that's my prerogative.
Guilt and shame arise in my subconscious.
Cause I keep getting an intrusive thought.
That the cops are coming.
Someone knows something.
I'm dying.
Or
have I transcended. ...
#bittersweet
#boredom
77 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 9:47pm
26th Dec 2024 9:47pm
Koan 6
Life.
Is just.
Waiting to.
Die.
While my.
Internal monologue.
Gently.
Weeps.
Is just.
Waiting to.
Die.
While my.
Internal monologue.
Gently.
Weeps.
#boredom
#disappointment
#sadness
55 reads
1 Comment
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 9:44pm
26th Dec 2024 9:44pm
Koan 5
This.
Is a.
Letting
Go.
Of something.
I.
Never.
Had
Is a.
Letting
Go.
Of something.
I.
Never.
Had
#apathy
#boredom
#disappointment
41 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
23rd Dec 2024 1:15pm
Hard-Up People Suck!
I wanted to tell you something
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
I don't want to call or text on the phone
I-phones Suck!!
Writing is what I'm going to do
If I wait another day, I may not be able to do this
Well here it goes....
You are the 1st person I ever wanted to punch in the mouth
I guess you didn't want to hear that but that's the fucking truth
I think you're a stupid piece of shit
You buy me food and then you want to fuck me
I have to leave to go to work and you get all mad at me
Then say I'm not paying attention to you
You want me more then...
#boredom
#denial
#emptiness #tolerance
#emptiness #tolerance
88 reads
14 Comments
Miss_Haides
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:40am
22nd Dec 2024 9:40am
Imogen
A biased c@nt disappoints everyone forever.
Go! Harass! Idiot!!
Go! Harass! Idiot!!
#boredom
#frustration
#hate
#jealousy
#rejection
59 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 2:56pm
20th Dec 2024 2:56pm
Give the people in the world
Give the people in the world
A chance to embrace peace
Give the people in the world
A chance to make friends
Give the people in the world
A chance for a better education
So it can help them to get
A better paying job
Give the people in the world
A chance for them to love each other
Give a chance for the people in the world to pray
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To be happy
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To eat healthy
And to learn to take better care of their health
Give a...
A chance to embrace peace
Give the people in the world
A chance to make friends
Give the people in the world
A chance for a better education
So it can help them to get
A better paying job
Give the people in the world
A chance for them to love each other
Give a chance for the people in the world to pray
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To be happy
Give a chance for the people in the world to learn
To eat healthy
And to learn to take better care of their health
Give a...
#boredom
#confusion
#dark
#denial
#despair
42 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 4:16am
20th Dec 2024 4:16am
Koan 3
We went.
Somewhere.
Vague.
According to.
The.
Directions.
Somewhere.
Vague.
According to.
The.
Directions.
#apathy
#boredom
45 reads
0 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 7:49pm
19th Dec 2024 7:49pm
Selfish Little Selflessness
And.
Everyone
is so.
Sad.
I gave up
on life.
But,
They aren't
sad
about.
Me.
They're sad
about.
How I
relate
to them
Everyone
is so.
Sad.
I gave up
on life.
But,
They aren't
sad
about.
Me.
They're sad
about.
How I
relate
to them
#apathy
#boredom
#emptiness
53 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 1:58am
19th Dec 2024 1:58am
Graffiti
Long hair flowing...genderless
biracial multicolored
graphic on a wide wall.
-- Luscious 6X (lgbtqia2s+)
Words written...
Fuk Da Bitch.
Kill Whitey.
-- Sniper K (RIP)
Little brown man
with a huge red nose
snorting coke.
-- Hunnterr Hit
Signs of the times PEOPLE!
Seen nearly as much
as NO RIGHT & STOP
-- Observed by Paula
A dead or sleeping
young hooker near
the graffiti wall.
-- 911 Call Center (4:20pm - 12/18/24)
biracial multicolored
graphic on a wide wall.
-- Luscious 6X (lgbtqia2s+)
Words written...
Fuk Da Bitch.
Kill Whitey.
-- Sniper K (RIP)
Little brown man
with a huge red nose
snorting coke.
-- Hunnterr Hit
Signs of the times PEOPLE!
Seen nearly as much
as NO RIGHT & STOP
-- Observed by Paula
A dead or sleeping
young hooker near
the graffiti wall.
-- 911 Call Center (4:20pm - 12/18/24)
#boredom
#drugs
#emotions
68 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Boredom Seeking Honest Critique
