Poems About Animals by Top Critiquers
#animals
Poems about animals by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Feeding time at the zoo

#animals
#fiction
#sex
#ShortStory
#violence
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natural connection
languid day, contempt with boredom
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
moving in slow motion
still moments of life caught in black and white
An old photograph, quiet but poignant
bittersweet in its presentation
The gentle flower blowing in the wind
The grass blades reach for the sun
The trees gossip among each other
talking about the girl with sunshine hair
wondering, could I see the beauty in the long day
With grumblings of nothingness and sorrow I languish
Then the day reached for me
inviting me in
I contemplate her graciousness
Humanity...
#animals
#flowers
#happiness
#nature
#trees
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From a different perspective
Question about what you think and believe that what you see 👁️👁️ For have you ever seen through the eyes of nature, as it sometimes is a reflection of life, told from a different perspective of a mother and child 🙏 For sure there are some similarity that really reflects, the deepness of the moments of birth, from a WOLF mother's eyes watching over her young child, supporting them and to teach them how to survive 😔 in life. But yet it's here in the nature zone, in the mountains and tree's in the forest life is very different. HERE from the outside...
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#motherhood
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Morbid Curiosity

#animals
#death
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~of a 2 random flashed paradisiacal poetic symbolisms.. of an otherwise prosaic day
1.
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
the messy mosquito window mesh
loaded with immortally chamfering
dusts over their each tiny squaring in
portals.. today had a surprise guest
not just knocking its door .. but falling
vertically flat & stuck..in a 90 degree
‘sashtanga namaskaram’ over the
waiting portal doors.. its iridescence
was a killer nacreous shine.. though
a dorsal beauty, away from my direct
visions.. only
her horrific ventral side.. of a boggy
brown muddiness.. in a nauseating
thoraxo-abdominal...
#animals
#flowers
#nature
#symbolism
#trees
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Rats.... An Observation
I call them King and Queen
2 rats that live near me
Been seeing them for a year
Mornings when I walk my dog
They don't bother anyone
They just forage for food
Big but not scary
They startle when you cross paths
They are part of my neighborhood
Live under the Chinese Laundry
Funny how they became a poem
Think I should name them
Good Morning Marlon
Good Morning Audrey
Wonder if you were humans past ?
Payback in the afterlife
2 rats that live near me
Been seeing them for a year
Mornings when I walk my dog
They don't bother anyone
They just forage for food
Big but not scary
They startle when you cross paths
They are part of my neighborhood
Live under the Chinese Laundry
Funny how they became a poem
Think I should name them
Good Morning Marlon
Good Morning Audrey
Wonder if you were humans past ?
Payback in the afterlife
#animals
#food
#LifeAsAWriter
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
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Wolf
When the full moon adorns the sky
i get lost in a vortex of endless desire
hungry to bare my heart wild and free
Eager to taste all your secret delights
i search for you in this mystifying night
longing to quench my deep inner needs
Greedy and thirsty we start to mate
feasting and feeding on carnal sweets
driving ourselves into primordial waves
Flying on wings of passion and greed
forceful and brutal in desires we crave
growling like animals in far away...
i get lost in a vortex of endless desire
hungry to bare my heart wild and free
Eager to taste all your secret delights
i search for you in this mystifying night
longing to quench my deep inner needs
Greedy and thirsty we start to mate
feasting and feeding on carnal sweets
driving ourselves into primordial waves
Flying on wings of passion and greed
forceful and brutal in desires we crave
growling like animals in far away...
#animals
#erotic
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beauty in chaos
the roaring sky cried in joy
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
#animals
#beauty
#birds
#hope
#nature
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And on top of it all,
the dog
won't stop
shitting
on the carpet.
They say animals can sense distress.
won't stop
shitting
on the carpet.
They say animals can sense distress.
#grief
#animals
#TruthOfLife
#frustration
#minimalist
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High Noon Noel
Clean the gutters
hang the lights
watch the flutters
in jaybird flights
squirrels and Yule nuts
by the frosty yard
wiggle wee furry butts
in stashing them so hard
and then the little tits
come and go so fast
it's hard to scan the plumage flits...
wherever they've amassed.
hang the lights
watch the flutters
in jaybird flights
squirrels and Yule nuts
by the frosty yard
wiggle wee furry butts
in stashing them so hard
and then the little tits
come and go so fast
it's hard to scan the plumage flits...
wherever they've amassed.
#animals
#birds
#fall #sky
#fall #sky
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8 Comments
Some berries and a giraffe's kiss
Let me take you to a divine place
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
where strawberries blush and interlace.
In the heart of the savannah they bloom
soft whispers of life in nature’s room.
The rain falls warm, like a lover's sigh.
A tender caress from a generous sky.
Its drops linger embracing the earth
feeding the fields where beauty finds birth.
The light, so cool, shimmers and plays,
casting shadows in intricate arrays.
A gentle balm to the heat’s embrace
illuminating dreams in this secret space.
Feel the pulse of the land, its steady...
#animals
#birds
#flowers
#love
#nature
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9 Comments
Spider Webs
Spider Webs
In sun light
Hung
A spider web
Whose lines
Were yet
Unknowns,
And though
Those threads
Were very
Thin
The sunlight
Found
Their bones.
In sun light
Hung
A spider web
Whose lines
Were yet
Unknowns,
And though
Those threads
Were very
Thin
The sunlight
Found
Their bones.
#animals
#nature
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DU Poetry : Poems About Animals by Top Critiquers