Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
8th Feb 2025 12:02pm
It is so hard to live without you my father
It is so hard to live without you
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
My father
I just can't live without you my father
I need you to be a part
Of my everyday life
I could never
live without father
I know that you
Also love me
Without limits
And I am your son
And I will always be your son
You have created me
59 years ago with your
Holy hands
And you have placed me
Here on earth to live
I just love the life you
Gave to me father
I never complained to you
About my life
Thanks to you father
I live a very good life ...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 12:01pm
8th Feb 2025 12:01pm
A friend for life
A friend for life
You had been for a
Long time
I am so happy to have
Known you for a lifetime
Also we both have
Some respect for each other
Also thanks god we are
Born Christians
And the day we die I hope
We will die as Christians
Yes we are fanatic religious people
And I don’t care about what the rest of
The world thinks about us
We don’t see nothing wrong
About being religious fanatics
We never miss a day praying for
Our father and we let him know
That we love our father
It was our father that...
You had been for a
Long time
I am so happy to have
Known you for a lifetime
Also we both have
Some respect for each other
Also thanks god we are
Born Christians
And the day we die I hope
We will die as Christians
Yes we are fanatic religious people
And I don’t care about what the rest of
The world thinks about us
We don’t see nothing wrong
About being religious fanatics
We never miss a day praying for
Our father and we let him know
That we love our father
It was our father that...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#shame
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
Dear friend
Dear friend
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
Always remember
That you are a child of God
He is the one that
Created you in his image
A long time ago
So you are beautiful
In God’s eyes
And if you don’t agree
It is ok because God
Has his own opinion
#anger
#disappointment
#loneliness
#regret
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
7th Feb 2025 10:25pm
I am waking up now
I am waking up
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
Now
The time is 8:00 am
I am starting to get ready
For the day
First I am shaving my
Face the old fashion away
It is very hard to do
I have to do it
Slowly
If I do it fast
I will cut my face
It takes me 20 minutes
To shave
When it is over
I will go into my shower
And have a shower
When my shower is over
I will turn the shower off
Then I will dry my body
With a bath towel
Now is the time for me
To get dress
In to my casual clothes
I will put my pajama and my ...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
7th Feb 2025 1:38am
Cómo Foi?
Cómo Foi?
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
This beautiful sunny day
During the Summer
It was a very hot day
For us
That made us
Sweat like pigs
Nonstop
The only way to get
Relief from this hot day
Is to go to the beach
Where it is cooler
We will have to swim
For a few minutes
Then when we come out
We will feel relieved
Cómo Foi?
I was the only one
Who had taken a look
At the blue sky
With white clouds
Also, I didn't see any sign
Of rain in the sky
Now this day was coming to
An end
We saw the sun going...
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#regret
#sadness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 7:44pm
5th Feb 2025 7:44pm
It is YOU I Admire
It is YOU who I admire
I praise you for being a scumbag since you were a kid
You never took into account all the wrong doings you have done to people
The love that you gave has left it's mark on numerous "loved ones" that trusted you
Your affection has been an infection to most girls you've fucked
The enjoyment you looked at with high value has left many scarred for life
Perfection is what you strive for, manipulating and taking advantage of others...shame on you
Appreciation is what you'll never find amongst people
You have no redeeming...
I praise you for being a scumbag since you were a kid
You never took into account all the wrong doings you have done to people
The love that you gave has left it's mark on numerous "loved ones" that trusted you
Your affection has been an infection to most girls you've fucked
The enjoyment you looked at with high value has left many scarred for life
Perfection is what you strive for, manipulating and taking advantage of others...shame on you
Appreciation is what you'll never find amongst people
You have no redeeming...
#anger
#hate
#lies
#manipulation
#identity
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13 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
5th Feb 2025 11:08am
Don't go around
Don't go around
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
Talking behind my back
To you
Snobbish friends
Because I hate
When you do that
You have no right
To do that
Also when you do that
You also hurt me badly
And I must
Tell you that
I hate that very much
Tell me what I supposed
To do with you
Because I don't trust you
At all
I want to break our friendship
Please go and live your
Life alone
And I will also
Live my life alone
Also, I don't need a friend
Like that
#anger
#disappointment
#jealousy
#rejection
#sadness
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NoQuarter
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 9:26am
5th Feb 2025 9:26am
Breaking Point
Lately,
I've been bursting at the seams,
a raging pit of anger.
Gears grinding, smoking, danger,
a heart attack in a chokehold,
my own filthy, sadistic beast of burden,
looking for somebody to hold.
Teeth clenched tight like a vice,
knuckles white, blood cold as ice.
A furnace fed with old regrets,
burning bridges, no safety nets.
Torn between the urge to break
or let the madness ricochet.
A ticking bomb, a loaded gun,
no turning back, the fuse is run.
Echoes of battles fought alone,
shattered glass...
I've been bursting at the seams,
a raging pit of anger.
Gears grinding, smoking, danger,
a heart attack in a chokehold,
my own filthy, sadistic beast of burden,
looking for somebody to hold.
Teeth clenched tight like a vice,
knuckles white, blood cold as ice.
A furnace fed with old regrets,
burning bridges, no safety nets.
Torn between the urge to break
or let the madness ricochet.
A ticking bomb, a loaded gun,
no turning back, the fuse is run.
Echoes of battles fought alone,
shattered glass...
#anger
137 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 00:10am
5th Feb 2025 00:10am
direct: like a arrow through the head of a tsunami
"hey,
buddhakitty
want to come
over and hang?"
"NO THANKS.
IM FEELING ILL."
"what's
wrong?"
"IM SICK OF
YOU."
buddhakitty
want to come
over and hang?"
"NO THANKS.
IM FEELING ILL."
"what's
wrong?"
"IM SICK OF
YOU."
#anger
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8 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 1:51am
4th Feb 2025 1:51am
Friends I am afraid to lose you
Friends I am afraid to lose you
Any day that God will shorten your life
So please continue to live your life to the fullest
Because life is a beautiful gift that God Gave you
And also he had created you with his holy hands
Many years ago
Also, God is your father
And you are all his children
You also need to take good care of your health
Friends I hope that you will not smoke any cigarettes
Because you will die of lung cancer
Also, I hope that you will stay sober
But if you choose to drink you will destroy your liver
You also...
Any day that God will shorten your life
So please continue to live your life to the fullest
Because life is a beautiful gift that God Gave you
And also he had created you with his holy hands
Many years ago
Also, God is your father
And you are all his children
You also need to take good care of your health
Friends I hope that you will not smoke any cigarettes
Because you will die of lung cancer
Also, I hope that you will stay sober
But if you choose to drink you will destroy your liver
You also...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#hate
#heartbroken
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 2:32pm
2nd Feb 2025 2:32pm
~the red revolutionary turban poet
his revolutionary verses
implodes heartmindsoul
in red & radical realization
in an inner & more innards
of this a probing midnight
lightness amidst a tranquil
darkness, the cosmic abyss
truth dies a neverdeath, an
eternity reign & infinitely
sprawling realm
beyond your
such dust & dirt stinking
sticky stacks of #SoothuTheEvil
& moreso
much & much beyond
all your venomously culturing
cyanic mastermind gangrene
in ruthless graveyard of generations
from, but...
implodes heartmindsoul
in red & radical realization
in an inner & more innards
of this a probing midnight
lightness amidst a tranquil
darkness, the cosmic abyss
truth dies a neverdeath, an
eternity reign & infinitely
sprawling realm
beyond your
such dust & dirt stinking
sticky stacks of #SoothuTheEvil
& moreso
much & much beyond
all your venomously culturing
cyanic mastermind gangrene
in ruthless graveyard of generations
from, but...
#admiration
#anger
#CallToAction #love
#CallToAction #love
128 reads
5 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 5:37am
2nd Feb 2025 5:37am
Void
I am void of passion
And starved of daydreams.
I am trapped by the mundane
And the sober.
I miss the willingness to burn
For what I loved
Even if it was terribly wrong
The only feeling I feel
So starkly
That there is nothing else
Is anger
My ever constant companion
Soldering under layers
Of facade so thick
I do not even remember
Why I am this way
And starved of daydreams.
I am trapped by the mundane
And the sober.
I miss the willingness to burn
For what I loved
Even if it was terribly wrong
The only feeling I feel
So starkly
That there is nothing else
Is anger
My ever constant companion
Soldering under layers
Of facade so thick
I do not even remember
Why I am this way
#anger
#sadness
#SelfReflection
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2 Comments
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