Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
moon_bather
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 3:55am
24th Sep 2024 3:55am
A Jester's Restraint
Just letting you know I
Got fucked up and
Smoked all the weed
Choked all the cigarettes
But I did not
Absolutely
Did NOT
Go back to the liquor store
Did not indulge in
Her ultimate grandeur
I stayed put inside
Got a little more high
Then the screen
Reflected back at me
And I laughed out loud
Got fucked up and
Smoked all the weed
Choked all the cigarettes
But I did not
Absolutely
Did NOT
Go back to the liquor store
Did not indulge in
Her ultimate grandeur
I stayed put inside
Got a little more high
Then the screen
Reflected back at me
And I laughed out loud
#alcohol
#confessional
#drugs
#funny
#MentalHealth
143 reads
2 Comments
mel44
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 5:44am
23rd Sep 2024 5:44am
Settling the Score
It was inevitable
I had to come undone
to process the battles
I should have won
seeing now the price I paid
to become this woman
that trauma made
ill prepared to cope
numbing without care
this wretched disease
my cross to bear
a sense of resilience
motives are pure
fighting for survival
settling the score
I had to come undone
to process the battles
I should have won
seeing now the price I paid
to become this woman
that trauma made
ill prepared to cope
numbing without care
this wretched disease
my cross to bear
a sense of resilience
motives are pure
fighting for survival
settling the score
#alcohol
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfReflection
116 reads
6 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 10:00am
22nd Sep 2024 10:00am
Zastavas and Rakija
In twilight’s hush, I sit and muse
Of Zastava’s grip, a sturdy fuse
A rifle born from lands of old
Where stories linger, brave and bold
The weight of metal, cold and true
A bond with history, proud and new
In catechumen days, I learned to see
The strength in faith, the sanctity
With rakija poured, its warmth in hand
I tasted life, a foreign strand
A spirit bright, with flavors deep
Awakening memories I wished to keep
In the company of those I’d met
We gathered close, no hint of regret
Each toast a...
Of Zastava’s grip, a sturdy fuse
A rifle born from lands of old
Where stories linger, brave and bold
The weight of metal, cold and true
A bond with history, proud and new
In catechumen days, I learned to see
The strength in faith, the sanctity
With rakija poured, its warmth in hand
I tasted life, a foreign strand
A spirit bright, with flavors deep
Awakening memories I wished to keep
In the company of those I’d met
We gathered close, no hint of regret
Each toast a...
#alcohol
#friendship
#happiness
#memories
#SelfReflection
65 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st Sep 2024 1:29pm
21st Sep 2024 1:29pm
Jet Set Excess
The glory days of love and wine
are all too soon undone
when Dionysus and the sun
to winter will resign.
Maybe they hole up somewhere nice
whereto the wine to mull
in a mug fashioned from a skull
and warmed up in a trice.
Could be they go to Tokyo
or maybe old Rangoon
where they observe a tropic moon
until it's time to go...
returning back up north again
or to some southern hills
where Aussies with some vineyard skills...
host Bacchus now and then 🍷
are all too soon undone
when Dionysus and the sun
to winter will resign.
Maybe they hole up somewhere nice
whereto the wine to mull
in a mug fashioned from a skull
and warmed up in a trice.
Could be they go to Tokyo
or maybe old Rangoon
where they observe a tropic moon
until it's time to go...
returning back up north again
or to some southern hills
where Aussies with some vineyard skills...
host Bacchus now and then 🍷
#alcohol
#LifeCycle
142 reads
23 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 1:31am
20th Sep 2024 1:31am
hungover
only get up of a morning to see if I
still actually exist
in bed only as a bit of a dreamer
and last night I was pissed
still actually exist
in bed only as a bit of a dreamer
and last night I was pissed
#alcohol
75 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 11:17am
18th Sep 2024 11:17am
Supply & Demand
You can try & shout for change
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
Higher officials suck
Day to day life drains you dry
Nobody gives two fucks!
Professional Castigation
A disbelieving eye
Drug Free America won’t occur
Supply & demand until you die
People here are dazed
Epidemic of handling life
Drunk to remember tomorrow
Buried five feet under tonight
#addiction
#alcohol
#corruption
#drugs
#ignorance
80 reads
4 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 11:51pm
9th Sep 2024 11:51pm
breakfast
fried bacon roll
of the drums, please!
usually it’s just a
cuppa tea
and a cig,
but today I am making a real
effort, in my own way, admittedly, to
just look
at how I live ..
of the drums, please!
usually it’s just a
cuppa tea
and a cig,
but today I am making a real
effort, in my own way, admittedly, to
just look
at how I live ..
#alcohol
#food
#tea
79 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 4:10pm
8th Sep 2024 4:10pm
Not The Right Way To Start The New Year
Kendrick woke up naked and with a
hangover in someone else's room
before seeing Dakota
still asleep and also
naked which made Ken
place both hands on
his forehead
and say
"Damn!"
hangover in someone else's room
before seeing Dakota
still asleep and also
naked which made Ken
place both hands on
his forehead
and say
"Damn!"
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
156 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 00:24am
5th Sep 2024 00:24am
all that ancestry entails
my family came from ireland,
but the ones I knew were
in south east london,
and I myself was born in kent
and now I live in wales, and as a
bit of an old romantic I often
wish that I
was french
but the ones I knew were
in south east london,
and I myself was born in kent
and now I live in wales, and as a
bit of an old romantic I often
wish that I
was french
#alcohol
76 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 11:57am
4th Sep 2024 11:57am
Beer, Bleach & A Skateboard
These guys were beer-bonging at a party
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 4 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 4 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
#alcohol
#anger
#fiction
#ignorance
#satirical
67 reads
10 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 00:51am
28th Aug 2024 00:51am
oh me, oh my
he passed away one
afternoon in the pub on a
desultory afternoon in the pub
no one noticed him die
afternoon in the pub on a
desultory afternoon in the pub
no one noticed him die
#alcohol
77 reads
2 Comments
Grae
Bryan Gray
Bryan Gray
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 3:22am
27th Aug 2024 3:22am
the last ambulance
end of eyes
and of a dusk drawl
civil twilight for hair
sodium rain
when a day is done
destroyer in vein
watching the same car crash
over and over
and although you are still here
you teach me how to mourn your passing
one ambulance
at a time
and of a dusk drawl
civil twilight for hair
sodium rain
when a day is done
destroyer in vein
watching the same car crash
over and over
and although you are still here
you teach me how to mourn your passing
one ambulance
at a time
#addiction
#alcohol
169 reads
4 Comments
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