Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers
#admiration
Poems about admiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
First Touch
Each day brought on that familiar smile.
Like rays of sunshine so warm and tactile
Every morning the dream got closer to reality
Knowing some exchanges are a mere formality
Beauty and elegance seem to have a smolder
Especially in the eyes and mind of the beholder
And when attraction brings two strangers nearer
They can reflect each other’s emotions like a mirror
Until one day just like it has been envisioned
Each breath will synchronize with precision
Hearts beat as one with a rhythm of pure elation
While ravenous...
Like rays of sunshine so warm and tactile
Every morning the dream got closer to reality
Knowing some exchanges are a mere formality
Beauty and elegance seem to have a smolder
Especially in the eyes and mind of the beholder
And when attraction brings two strangers nearer
They can reflect each other’s emotions like a mirror
Until one day just like it has been envisioned
Each breath will synchronize with precision
Hearts beat as one with a rhythm of pure elation
While ravenous...
#admiration
#love
184 reads
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Wailing Notes And The Quiet Beyond Them
I stretch in crisp air
it’s so sharp it burns
I’m here haunting the grove
sun cutting through trees
in an elegant arc of beautiful
I watch phone-screen-zombies
lurch through the cascade of light
hunkered against the glow
as if it alone provides warmth
locks on the case pop
the first note cries out
the sax’s curves as familiar
as walking
like sex beneath my
calloused fingers
I wait in the preternatural silence
drama in the scattered...
it’s so sharp it burns
I’m here haunting the grove
sun cutting through trees
in an elegant arc of beautiful
I watch phone-screen-zombies
lurch through the cascade of light
hunkered against the glow
as if it alone provides warmth
locks on the case pop
the first note cries out
the sax’s curves as familiar
as walking
like sex beneath my
calloused fingers
I wait in the preternatural silence
drama in the scattered...
#admiration
#beauty
#crush
155 reads
6 Comments
Purple Sex Halo
Often, after her pleasure pinnacle,
milady says there's a glow 'round my head
which she states, in her manner clinical.
And I know to trust all that she has said,
even if the utterance is bizarre
since love is nought, if not oddly wired,
to see a lover's face like some bright star
which shone where satisfaction transpired
with a margined glow from ardent bearings,
forevermore reverentially prone,
to fondly dwell on our earnest pairings...
where jubilation's angel flights have flown
from me to her,...
milady says there's a glow 'round my head
which she states, in her manner clinical.
And I know to trust all that she has said,
even if the utterance is bizarre
since love is nought, if not oddly wired,
to see a lover's face like some bright star
which shone where satisfaction transpired
with a margined glow from ardent bearings,
forevermore reverentially prone,
to fondly dwell on our earnest pairings...
where jubilation's angel flights have flown
from me to her,...
#admiration
#love
161 reads
14 Comments
Limp Sound Display (Collaboration with Vision_of_insanity)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#funny
#respect
126 reads
10 Comments
Familiar Voices
trapped in a crowd of faces and hands
chattering words and making demands
tired of smiling, I need to get away
(wrap me in inky black velvet)
my only strength is my will to breathe
(reach for me in the shadows)
I’m waiting, lonely in the empty dark
waiting for their songs
to touch me
familiar voices pull me off the ledge
familiar voices soothe my weary soul
familiar voices sing me back to the light
familiar voices bring me back to whole
chattering words and making demands
tired of smiling, I need to get away
(wrap me in inky black velvet)
my only strength is my will to breathe
(reach for me in the shadows)
I’m waiting, lonely in the empty dark
waiting for their songs
to touch me
familiar voices pull me off the ledge
familiar voices soothe my weary soul
familiar voices sing me back to the light
familiar voices bring me back to whole
#friendship
#music
#support #admiration
#support #admiration
855 reads
17 Comments
Warrior Poetess Priestess
Each tome embedded in my soul
In standing stone standing beautiful
Geometrically over my desk blessed
Anointed by a fingertip caress
Appointed to take a poetic stand
Render the whirling world into words
In an innovated philology at the command
Of a soul taken through the storms of swords
Baptizing the battlefield in blood
Cleansed with tears charged with fears
Pride relief joy sorrow comprising a flood
Across increments of minutes hours days years
Distilled into distinct ink impressed into parchments ...
In standing stone standing beautiful
Geometrically over my desk blessed
Anointed by a fingertip caress
Appointed to take a poetic stand
Render the whirling world into words
In an innovated philology at the command
Of a soul taken through the storms of swords
Baptizing the battlefield in blood
Cleansed with tears charged with fears
Pride relief joy sorrow comprising a flood
Across increments of minutes hours days years
Distilled into distinct ink impressed into parchments ...
#angels
#PowerOfWords
#magic
#admiration
#respect
356 reads
5 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Visual Expression Series X
#admiration
#respect
#spiritual
513 reads
18 Comments
ReturningTo Graceland
In the window of start dust we shall blow upon the elevation of immortality
Whispers sailing the high seas and the vastness of faraway lands
Tasting the silhouette of your presence in the afterlife
Venerating in the chasm of doleful caress upon my skin from above
You will always be a part of my young dreams of love
Whispers sailing the high seas and the vastness of faraway lands
Tasting the silhouette of your presence in the afterlife
Venerating in the chasm of doleful caress upon my skin from above
You will always be a part of my young dreams of love
#admiration
#Fanfiction
#passion
293 reads
Wayward Poets
Someone goes out early, every morning
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
#admiration
#happiness
#motivational
293 reads
16 Comments
SURPRISED BY THE TASTE (2)
I
had heard comments
both positive and negative;
had actually been present
while others enjoyed it
and lauded its taste.
TO
look at it there wasn't
much to be excited about;
yet, I was frequently encouraged
to taste it and I'd like it.
THEN
one evening I gave in and
tasted Caviar. Yes, it was
different and I was surprised
by the taste. In time it grew
on me. Expensive but worth it!
MEET
me at the Kissing Place
and we'll share Caviar.
OKAY? My mouth is watering!
had heard comments
both positive and negative;
had actually been present
while others enjoyed it
and lauded its taste.
TO
look at it there wasn't
much to be excited about;
yet, I was frequently encouraged
to taste it and I'd like it.
THEN
one evening I gave in and
tasted Caviar. Yes, it was
different and I was surprised
by the taste. In time it grew
on me. Expensive but worth it!
MEET
me at the Kissing Place
and we'll share Caviar.
OKAY? My mouth is watering!
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
103 reads
4 Comments
@anna
anna_grin @ me
until I bleed
I'm whitewashed noise
broken bones lie to you
they crunch
under steel toed truth
I was dead anyway
until I bleed
I'm whitewashed noise
broken bones lie to you
they crunch
under steel toed truth
I was dead anyway
#dark
#admiration
901 reads
7 Comments
Written in the Stars
Lying on a soft fragrant meadow
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
Under the diamond studded sky
In a warm summer night
Vibrating with magic
I read your story
Written in the stars
A rising star
Newly born and bursting with ideas
Highly intelligent and creative
A revolutionary mind
A fresh wind of change blowing
To renew and improve society
A celestial star
Coming from the universe
Following a higher calling
Embarking on a journey to
Bring justice and peace to
Planet earth and her inhabitants
A flickering star ...
#admiration
#emotions
#motivational
168 reads
5 Comments
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