Poems About Admiration by Top Critiquers
#admiration
Poems about admiration by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Purple Sex Halo
Often, after her pleasure pinnacle,
milady says there's a glow 'round my head
which she states, in her manner clinical.
And I know to trust all that she has said,
even if the utterance is bizarre
since love is nought, if not oddly wired,
to see a lover's face like some bright star
which shone where satisfaction transpired
with a margined glow from ardent bearings,
forevermore reverentially prone,
to fondly dwell on our earnest pairings...
where jubilation's angel flights have flown
from me to her,...
milady says there's a glow 'round my head
which she states, in her manner clinical.
And I know to trust all that she has said,
even if the utterance is bizarre
since love is nought, if not oddly wired,
to see a lover's face like some bright star
which shone where satisfaction transpired
with a margined glow from ardent bearings,
forevermore reverentially prone,
to fondly dwell on our earnest pairings...
where jubilation's angel flights have flown
from me to her,...
#admiration
#love
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Impressive
you got to admire
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip ...
#admiration
#respect
107 reads
20 Comments
Limp Sound Display (Collaboration with Vision_of_insanity)
Unwind the clock
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
there far beyond the beyond
where there is no one else
the world's on fire
on the waters he walks
humanity also walks...
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
Mouse falls into a trap
volcanoes explode islands
birds in my tree
birds destroy their nests
a rainy day, wash the hate away
like seahorse cowboys
singing their song
mushroom clouds dissipate
strawberries mean love
Let your body go with the wind
let your body free from your mind
Find...
#admiration
#art
#collaboration
#funny
#respect
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10 Comments
we are, you know...
we are more than poetry
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
more than our words
spread so elegantly...
...so carefully...
...across the page
consider them merely stains
...of tears
& bloodtrails...
showing the outline of our pain
but these sentiments are tempered
allowing only the briefest glimpse
miniscule peeks at the agony within
we are giants trapped inside thimbles
struggling & straining
...for more space
& these fragmented offerings shared
barely scratch the surface
of the vastness within
we are deeper...
#admiration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#honesty
#respect
#WritingPoetry
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14 Comments
Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
#admiration
#lust
#seductive
#temptation
#romantic
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23 Comments
Wayward Poets
Someone goes out early, every morning
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
#admiration
#happiness
#motivational
262 reads
16 Comments
Cendra's Birthday Parties
Cendra had an unusual last name
Skin shades darker than mine
Parents years older than most.
No siblings.
She was confident and self-assured.
Additional qualities I found exotic.
I liked being around her.
Her 11th (12th?) birthday was at Gooney Golf
There was a giant dinosaur at the entrance.
The last hole was an igloo.
Even if you missed, it captured your ball at the end.
Gone.
After miniature golf, we went back to Cendra's house for cake.
At her decree, we smeared frosting on our faces.
When her...
Skin shades darker than mine
Parents years older than most.
No siblings.
She was confident and self-assured.
Additional qualities I found exotic.
I liked being around her.
Her 11th (12th?) birthday was at Gooney Golf
There was a giant dinosaur at the entrance.
The last hole was an igloo.
Even if you missed, it captured your ball at the end.
Gone.
After miniature golf, we went back to Cendra's house for cake.
At her decree, we smeared frosting on our faces.
When her...
#childhood
#friendship
#birthday
#WritingPoetry
#admiration
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8 Comments
I don't write poems (with Reading)
I don't write poetry ...
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and...
They spell Me,
They lead me to themselves,
They are my teachers ...
Obediently lying down under my mind,
They carry words from somewhere ...
And I take off like a bird every time,
not afraid to fall. ..
Listening to the azure silence,
I lose myself somewhere in it
And I find in myself
That heaven or hell which lay in my soul,
That gave itself to me
And gave those words -
They are like raindrops
From the heart falling on the leaf.,.
Drawing the world,
Love and hate, darkness and...
#WritingPoetry
#support
#admiration
#respect
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
1135 reads
64 Comments
Ma!
Simple and complex words and chords are never enough to express or address you mum
A virtuous woman strong and so bold
You cuddled me to prevent me from catching any cold
With you on my side, I can conquer this world
Whenever you hold my hands, it's my safety gloves
If you unleash me in motion, I can go flying around the globe
The safest place is inside your womb
You are my one and only nuclear bomb
You see, me and you...
A virtuous woman strong and so bold
You cuddled me to prevent me from catching any cold
With you on my side, I can conquer this world
Whenever you hold my hands, it's my safety gloves
If you unleash me in motion, I can go flying around the globe
The safest place is inside your womb
You are my one and only nuclear bomb
You see, me and you...
#admiration
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4 Comments
Thank You Mom
Happy Mother's Day
to all the mom's
who push and pull
who give and take
always here
always there
never quitting
never doubting
Mamma Mia we love you
♥ Thank You for loving us ♥
to all the mom's
who push and pull
who give and take
always here
always there
never quitting
never doubting
Mamma Mia we love you
♥ Thank You for loving us ♥
#love
#kindness
#gratitude #admiration
#gratitude #admiration
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2 Comments
she is nude
her bare
flesh
contrasting
in blue
water,
but she
blends in
with
the desert,
and
her eyes
joining
like sky,
while her
dark hair
is night,
and her
smile, my
morning.
flesh
contrasting
in blue
water,
but she
blends in
with
the desert,
and
her eyes
joining
like sky,
while her
dark hair
is night,
and her
smile, my
morning.
#admiration
#happiness
#inspirational
#kindness
#love
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8 Comments
Soul Song of the Forbidden Keeper
I’m not here to hurt you, but free you
Before your short life is through,
“Baby it is what it is-and death will be here
But if you let me I’ll take away all your fear,
“With me you will rule instead and not be the one who’ll serves
Let me give you a taste-as I remove pain from your nerves,
“I don’t need you unconditional love or obedience
Just your sweet soul for all of existence,
“See as I keep away the heat from the fire
Blissful comfort is what you desire,
“There are others who will feast on your soul like a lunch
But to...
Before your short life is through,
“Baby it is what it is-and death will be here
But if you let me I’ll take away all your fear,
“With me you will rule instead and not be the one who’ll serves
Let me give you a taste-as I remove pain from your nerves,
“I don’t need you unconditional love or obedience
Just your sweet soul for all of existence,
“See as I keep away the heat from the fire
Blissful comfort is what you desire,
“There are others who will feast on your soul like a lunch
But to...
#hope
#dark
#admiration #denial
#admiration #denial
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6 Comments
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