Valentines Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#ValentinesDay
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 4:52pm
14th Feb 2021 4:52pm
Valentine's Day So Far .....
Got up same time
Took out the trash
Went to CVS
Bought card and dark chocolate for the wife
Did exercise
Watched Meet the Press
Ate breakfast
Drank coffee
Got a Valentine's kiss
Played scrabble online
Pretty much like any other day
Still special in meaning
Hearts and minds
Wrote this poem
Now what ?
Took out the trash
Went to CVS
Bought card and dark chocolate for the wife
Did exercise
Watched Meet the Press
Ate breakfast
Drank coffee
Got a Valentine's kiss
Played scrabble online
Pretty much like any other day
Still special in meaning
Hearts and minds
Wrote this poem
Now what ?
#ValentinesDay
#holiday
339 reads
12 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 3:06pm
14th Feb 2021 3:06pm
This Valentine's Day
be your own—
know your worth;
arise from the lost world
of swan-song and youth
Honor your growth
because it's your Truth;
allow this dawn to anoint
your violet voice
Indulge in joy
because you deserve;
cast yourself as belief—
silence the bells tolling
for the loneliness of yore;
Love like you've never
swallowed its honey before
~
know your worth;
arise from the lost world
of swan-song and youth
Honor your growth
because it's your Truth;
allow this dawn to anoint
your violet voice
Indulge in joy
because you deserve;
cast yourself as belief—
silence the bells tolling
for the loneliness of yore;
Love like you've never
swallowed its honey before
~
#love
#kindness
#ValentinesDay
785 reads
30 Comments
marina2020
Rain Woman
Rain Woman
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 5:23am
14th Feb 2021 5:23am
Happy Valentine's Day
When it comes to you, my love
I am overflowed with feeling
But when it comes to writing
Words send my head reeling
I can never put my love for you
Into a cohesive rhyme
Because ever time I look at you
I loose track of all space and time
And even though I dislike this holiday
I just want you to know
You make me feel ecstatic
With all the love you show
My love for you is ever growing
In every single way
You are my world, my everything
Happy Valentine's day
I am overflowed with feeling
But when it comes to writing
Words send my head reeling
I can never put my love for you
Into a cohesive rhyme
Because ever time I look at you
I loose track of all space and time
And even though I dislike this holiday
I just want you to know
You make me feel ecstatic
With all the love you show
My love for you is ever growing
In every single way
You are my world, my everything
Happy Valentine's day
#love
#ValentinesDay
#holiday
546 reads
5 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
14th Feb 2021 3:17am
14th Feb 2021 3:17am
Valentine's Day
GRABBING YOUR HEART
FROM THE WOODEN FLOOR
Getting a good grip
ON YOUR LOVELY HEART
CAUGHT MYSELF
A SPLINTER ON MY RIGHT THUMB
SUCKING MY POLLEX
FOR PAIN RELIEF
STEALING YOUR HEART
LIKE A TRUE THIEF
GROWING NUMB
FOR INCREDIBLE FEELING OF REAL LOVE
INTIMACY
can be A REAL PRISIÓN
IN MY LATÍN HEART
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY
FROM THE WOODEN FLOOR
Getting a good grip
ON YOUR LOVELY HEART
CAUGHT MYSELF
A SPLINTER ON MY RIGHT THUMB
SUCKING MY POLLEX
FOR PAIN RELIEF
STEALING YOUR HEART
LIKE A TRUE THIEF
GROWING NUMB
FOR INCREDIBLE FEELING OF REAL LOVE
INTIMACY
can be A REAL PRISIÓN
IN MY LATÍN HEART
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY
#love
#women
#ValentinesDay
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
566 reads
3 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
10th Feb 2021 8:12pm
10th Feb 2021 8:12pm
AT FIRST SIGHT
February
the fourteenth be
day of first see.
On meeting she,
the chemistry
overcame he
so easily,
unfoldingly.
Sweet poetry
filled memory.
the fourteenth be
day of first see.
On meeting she,
the chemistry
overcame he
so easily,
unfoldingly.
Sweet poetry
filled memory.
#ValentinesDay
#rhyming
#FallingInLove
679 reads
2 Comments
shannonJane
Poem Published
21st Feb 2020 10:38pm
21st Feb 2020 10:38pm
If love could be true like stars an moons , my fantasy , betrays me but a lover shall always love
If Poetry was an eternity
You would write every line
Past infinity and into the beyond.
If love was forever
You would always be the star.
Light years can't measure this heart.
If night became my life
It would always be you to carry the light.
If I died tonight
I know in love I tried.
You would write every line
Past infinity and into the beyond.
If love was forever
You would always be the star.
Light years can't measure this heart.
If night became my life
It would always be you to carry the light.
If I died tonight
I know in love I tried.
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay #FallingInLove
#ValentinesDay #FallingInLove
473 reads
1 Comment
StaveleyJ
Poem Published
20th Feb 2020 11:38pm
20th Feb 2020 11:38pm
Valentine's Day
When you've opened your card from hallmark,
And eaten your breakfast in bed,
When you've shared out the last of the chocolates
And all the roses are dead,
When the stars in the heavens are lost to our sight
And the churches have washed away,
You will still own my heart completely
And today will be Valentine's Day.
For our love is not made out of paper
Nor cocoa, nor petals, nor light.
Our love is composed of an infinite force
Which occurs when I hold you tight.
That love will outlast any doctrine
Any hymns or...
And eaten your breakfast in bed,
When you've shared out the last of the chocolates
And all the roses are dead,
When the stars in the heavens are lost to our sight
And the churches have washed away,
You will still own my heart completely
And today will be Valentine's Day.
For our love is not made out of paper
Nor cocoa, nor petals, nor light.
Our love is composed of an infinite force
Which occurs when I hold you tight.
That love will outlast any doctrine
Any hymns or...
#love
#ValentinesDay
583 reads
4 Comments
David_Macleod
14397816
14397816
Poem Published
19th Feb 2020 5:38pm
19th Feb 2020 5:38pm
Lord Of The Ance
went along to a valentines dance
wore my traditional kilt: No pants
looking for a loving glance
perchance a little romance
internal meditational chants
positivity I tried to enhance
not worried by extra finance
doing doughnuts on the dance floor expanse
Like a gigolo hailing from France
who could resist my charming advance?
EVERBODY!!
I have a memory like elephants
and a mind as sharp as a lance
no need for memory transplants
in life only suffering it grants
live the life of old maiden aunts
in my mind...
wore my traditional kilt: No pants
looking for a loving glance
perchance a little romance
internal meditational chants
positivity I tried to enhance
not worried by extra finance
doing doughnuts on the dance floor expanse
Like a gigolo hailing from France
who could resist my charming advance?
EVERBODY!!
I have a memory like elephants
and a mind as sharp as a lance
no need for memory transplants
in life only suffering it grants
live the life of old maiden aunts
in my mind...
#sadness
#romantic
#ValentinesDay
#despair
#dance
549 reads
5 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
17th Feb 2020 5:10pm
17th Feb 2020 5:10pm
blue balls dried up c**ts
#love
#hate
#ValentinesDay
501 reads
1 Comment
cabcool
Poem Published
14th Feb 2020 6:08pm
14th Feb 2020 6:08pm
pour toujours le vôtre (forever yours)
♪a rhymed, mirrored octet for my valentine wife♪
§
yours
a l o n e
f o r e v e r
i pledge my h e a r t
to y o u r h a p p i n e s s
rain may drench our f l o w e r s
greys may s o m e t i m e s cloud our sun
but the pieces of love’s p u z z l e
will not shred us to a f r a z z l e
we h a v e o n l y j u s t b e g u n
l u s c i o u s april s h o w e r s
spring shall soon c o n f e s s
and p e a c e impart
f o r e v e r ...
§
yours
a l o n e
f o r e v e r
i pledge my h e a r t
to y o u r h a p p i n e s s
rain may drench our f l o w e r s
greys may s o m e t i m e s cloud our sun
but the pieces of love’s p u z z l e
will not shred us to a f r a z z l e
we h a v e o n l y j u s t b e g u n
l u s c i o u s april s h o w e r s
spring shall soon c o n f e s s
and p e a c e impart
f o r e v e r ...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
566 reads
5 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Feb 2020 11:36am
14th Feb 2020 11:36am
My Chosen Valentine
Protecting ourselves
is the natural response
to a Universe of experience:
stories we don’t tell—
scars we won’t reveal
hidden vulnerabilities
Choose Love anyway;
it purges negativity—
not that of a judge or critic
taking offense at storms
blowing back in their face;
but, from your own heart
Empty your innermost coffers
as a gift to others—
then refill for yourself
Balance is the footpath
of Universal Love
~
is the natural response
to a Universe of experience:
stories we don’t tell—
scars we won’t reveal
hidden vulnerabilities
Choose Love anyway;
it purges negativity—
not that of a judge or critic
taking offense at storms
blowing back in their face;
but, from your own heart
Empty your innermost coffers
as a gift to others—
then refill for yourself
Balance is the footpath
of Universal Love
~
#love
#ValentinesDay
#Taoism
#philosophical
#wisdom
1114 reads
40 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
14th Feb 2020 6:53am
14th Feb 2020 6:53am
POEM INSPIRED BY 'I'M LOST...AND WISH NOT TO BE FOUND'
#sex
#erotic
#ValentinesDay #rhyming
#ValentinesDay #rhyming
647 reads
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