Valentines Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#ValentinesDay
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Feb 2024 2:14am
15th Feb 2024 2:14am
The Other VD
Today is the day
Valentine's Day everyone
Grab your partner and have a great time
When ordering at that fancy restaurant
Make sure when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
There's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
To all at DUP, have a great evening.
Valentine's Day everyone
Grab your partner and have a great time
When ordering at that fancy restaurant
Make sure when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
There's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
To all at DUP, have a great evening.
#love
#ValentinesDay
#illness
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cabcool
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 9:16pm
14th Feb 2024 9:16pm
valentine
"It wasn't love at first sight. It took a full five minutes."—Lucille Ball
spare me the shallow red balloons
that wither with dead afternoons,
when sunlight fades
and pulls the shades
o'er cupid's festive morning runes.
spare me the i-love-yous that fly
like cumulus across the sky
only to weep
into the deep,
when valentine whispers goodbye.
spare me the to-do and alarm
whose flippancy brings far more harm
than nothing said
over my bed
that wears the guise of fickle charm.
spare me...
spare me the shallow red balloons
that wither with dead afternoons,
when sunlight fades
and pulls the shades
o'er cupid's festive morning runes.
spare me the i-love-yous that fly
like cumulus across the sky
only to weep
into the deep,
when valentine whispers goodbye.
spare me the to-do and alarm
whose flippancy brings far more harm
than nothing said
over my bed
that wears the guise of fickle charm.
spare me...
#relationships
#romantic
#ILoveYou #ValentinesDay
#ILoveYou #ValentinesDay
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 8:39pm
14th Feb 2024 8:39pm
Love In a Barrel
Decades ago a man was in love with a woman
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
#love
#marriage
#ValentinesDay #travel
#ValentinesDay #travel
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4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 1:03pm
14th Feb 2024 1:03pm
Love Can Be Anything Or Anyone
#love
#mother
#girlfriend #ValentinesDay
#girlfriend #ValentinesDay
81 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 12:12pm
14th Feb 2024 12:12pm
A Bloodthirsty Vision With Love
A peaceful world is not what I see,
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though all those thoughts disappear,
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more fighting, no more wars.
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though all those thoughts disappear,
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more fighting, no more wars.
#love
#ILoveYou
#war #ValentinesDay
#war #ValentinesDay
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3 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 00:25am
14th Feb 2024 00:25am
Trend Setting Fashion Statements
Trust compromised and repaired
Holistic bonds give sight to the otherwise impaired
Uniformed in motion gradually instep and unaware
Nuanced of the imperfect and yet automatic sense of care
Deviances redeemed on the altars of our swear
Experience refined by self sacrificial love, in every joy and burden that we bear
Romances of routine and revelry re-pronounces love so rare
Sedated yet awakened, our hearts in fashion that we wear
Torn to be reborn from the past and knit in the wonder of a full gaze from a blank stare
Roses...
Holistic bonds give sight to the otherwise impaired
Uniformed in motion gradually instep and unaware
Nuanced of the imperfect and yet automatic sense of care
Deviances redeemed on the altars of our swear
Experience refined by self sacrificial love, in every joy and burden that we bear
Romances of routine and revelry re-pronounces love so rare
Sedated yet awakened, our hearts in fashion that we wear
Torn to be reborn from the past and knit in the wonder of a full gaze from a blank stare
Roses...
#love
#marriage
#romantic
#ValentinesDay
#faith
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ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 00:20am
14th Feb 2024 00:20am
Never Ending
Taken in, enraptured at a glance
Honing in on this romance
Usurping my heart through my eyes
Novice hopes called to light
Dreams come alive where fantasy dies
Enduring beyond a moment, a lifetime’s promise, a lover’s fight
Revolutions of palpitations
Stirring up passions to relive first sensations
Tried and true, a vows kiss beyond infatuation
Rendered undone by love satisfied by in-satiation
Under the influence of what brings both clarity and chemical inebriation
Cadence set in harmony to imbue
Kinetic collisions...
Honing in on this romance
Usurping my heart through my eyes
Novice hopes called to light
Dreams come alive where fantasy dies
Enduring beyond a moment, a lifetime’s promise, a lover’s fight
Revolutions of palpitations
Stirring up passions to relive first sensations
Tried and true, a vows kiss beyond infatuation
Rendered undone by love satisfied by in-satiation
Under the influence of what brings both clarity and chemical inebriation
Cadence set in harmony to imbue
Kinetic collisions...
#love
#relationships
#marriage
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
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Kinkpoet
Poem Published
13th Feb 2024 3:46pm
13th Feb 2024 3:46pm
Cupid
powers similar to kamadeva,
hindu god of love
(could they be cousins?)
valentine's day icon
cupid, god of desire,
erotic love,
attraction and affection
cupid, offspring
of goddess of love
and god of war
(no wonder
he’s such
a mischievous sprite)
cute chubby winged boy
chastity,
and virgin goddess of the hunt,
sworn enemies of cupid
both say they hate his stiff little
passion-provoking arrows
(but we know better)
people, and...
hindu god of love
(could they be cousins?)
valentine's day icon
cupid, god of desire,
erotic love,
attraction and affection
cupid, offspring
of goddess of love
and god of war
(no wonder
he’s such
a mischievous sprite)
cute chubby winged boy
chastity,
and virgin goddess of the hunt,
sworn enemies of cupid
both say they hate his stiff little
passion-provoking arrows
(but we know better)
people, and...
#ValentinesDay
#mythology
#passion
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3 Comments
Ivory
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 7:01pm
10th Feb 2024 7:01pm
Valentine's Day
Today my lover gave me flowers:
A bouquet of delicate red roses,
A symbol of his undying affection
I hold them gently, caressing their velvety petals
I'll set them in a glass vase, and display them in a window
And for a while, they'll still be beautiful;
But you can't stop time from withering them-
Flowers die, and so do we.
A bouquet of delicate red roses,
A symbol of his undying affection
I hold them gently, caressing their velvety petals
I'll set them in a glass vase, and display them in a window
And for a while, they'll still be beautiful;
But you can't stop time from withering them-
Flowers die, and so do we.
#love
#death
#ValentinesDay
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4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2024 12:39pm
3rd Feb 2024 12:39pm
I Have A Real Valentine's Day Surprise For You
My friend had an
embarrassing first
day of February in
which his girlfriend
came in and smiled.
Then, she let herself
open her coat and
flash that naked bod
in front of everybody
in that entire store.
That made the poor
guy wrap a nearby
blanket around that
giggling cuckoo.
embarrassing first
day of February in
which his girlfriend
came in and smiled.
Then, she let herself
open her coat and
flash that naked bod
in front of everybody
in that entire store.
That made the poor
guy wrap a nearby
blanket around that
giggling cuckoo.
#ValentinesDay
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#sensual
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Ald
Poem Published
16th Aug 2023 4:25am
16th Aug 2023 4:25am
The Robins.
Dear Mr Pigeon.
Sparrow's eggs
Are outside.
Because
Mr and Miss
Sparrow
Are
Enjoying
Springfield
With Mrs Pigeon.
Sparrow's eggs
Are outside.
Because
Mr and Miss
Sparrow
Are
Enjoying
Springfield
With Mrs Pigeon.
#ValentinesDay
#holiday
#MothersDay #FathersDay
#MothersDay #FathersDay
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2023 00:13am
23rd Feb 2023 00:13am
Viewing pleasure
#lust
#ValentinesDay
#sexy
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4 Comments
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