Valentines Day Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#ValentinesDay
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 7:49pm
14th Feb 2025 7:49pm
VD on VD
Today is the day
Valentine's Day you fool
Grab your partner and have a great time tonight
If he or she is taking you out to some exclusive restaurant,
Don't forget when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
That there's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe, so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
Don't forget the flowers, the candy and some Trojan...
Valentine's Day you fool
Grab your partner and have a great time tonight
If he or she is taking you out to some exclusive restaurant,
Don't forget when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
That there's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe, so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
Don't forget the flowers, the candy and some Trojan...
#dating
#inspirational
#satirical #ValentinesDay
#satirical #ValentinesDay
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16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 7:31pm
14th Feb 2025 7:31pm
Don't f**k With His Girlfriend
He was planning a big day for him & his girlfriend
today was Valentine's Day
he went to the nearest store and purchased some flowers and candy
he wanted today to be a really special day
when the evening arrived, he was feeling really horny and wanted to have sex with her
she's always willing and able when he wants it
she never says no
he tries all his moves with her
the room was dimly lit for a moonlighting type of ambience
they moved to the bedroom
he washed up, brushed his teeth and put on his best cologne
she looked...
today was Valentine's Day
he went to the nearest store and purchased some flowers and candy
he wanted today to be a really special day
when the evening arrived, he was feeling really horny and wanted to have sex with her
she's always willing and able when he wants it
she never says no
he tries all his moves with her
the room was dimly lit for a moonlighting type of ambience
they moved to the bedroom
he washed up, brushed his teeth and put on his best cologne
she looked...
#girlfriend
#love
#MentalHealth
#mother
#ValentinesDay
77 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 3:55pm
14th Feb 2025 3:55pm
Valentines Day
Here we are upon another day but what makes this so special is a blessing in disguise for so many people's lives 🙏 for it's a a day that we show your affection and love man to woman and woman to man. For sure it doesn't matter if you are alone, give thyself the same kind of love no matter how you wish to spend this day, treating yourself with kindness and love for you deserve it too have a blessed Valentine's Day. For sure for those that have someone to share this day with you, deserve to have a blessed and beautiful Valentine's Day, with love and honor and happiness and respect for...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#ValentinesDay
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2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
Things I Love
I love the smell of fresh wind.
And the colors of red roses.
I love the feeling of happiness.
That not always decomposes.
A memory I had long ago.
That to this day I don't feel foul.
I love the taste of sweet cheesecake.
A cup of juice and a breakfast pancake.
I love the way the wind blows.
The way the leaves rustle.
And the night sky shows.
Maybe his laughter or smile.
That you can listen for a while.
I love the way my pen feels in my hand when I write my poems.
Or with the feather of a hen.
...
And the colors of red roses.
I love the feeling of happiness.
That not always decomposes.
A memory I had long ago.
That to this day I don't feel foul.
I love the taste of sweet cheesecake.
A cup of juice and a breakfast pancake.
I love the way the wind blows.
The way the leaves rustle.
And the night sky shows.
Maybe his laughter or smile.
That you can listen for a while.
I love the way my pen feels in my hand when I write my poems.
Or with the feather of a hen.
...
#motivational
#uplifting
#ValentinesDay
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
14th Feb 2025 11:03am
Massacre On St. Valentines Day
Month's before the "Wall Street Crash"
There was a bloody fight
Between two rival gangs in Chicago
It was a cold and snowy day in 1929
A celebration day for many lovers
Killers, thugs and mobsters
Running wild all over the streets
Spreading death everywhere in the city
G-Men had their hands full
There was a trap on North Clark Street
Seven men waiting for a truck load that never came
As Moran's gang was ordered to line up against the wall
Two phony police officers opened fire with Thompson...
There was a bloody fight
Between two rival gangs in Chicago
It was a cold and snowy day in 1929
A celebration day for many lovers
Killers, thugs and mobsters
Running wild all over the streets
Spreading death everywhere in the city
G-Men had their hands full
There was a trap on North Clark Street
Seven men waiting for a truck load that never came
As Moran's gang was ordered to line up against the wall
Two phony police officers opened fire with Thompson...
#corruption
#historical
#murder
#nonfiction
#ValentinesDay
83 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 10:57am
14th Feb 2025 10:57am
A Romantic Tale
Decades ago a man was in love with a woman
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
he would do crazy acts to seek her attention
he was a daredevil
he's faced death numerous times
he's played chicken with trains,
jumped off bridges and survived the plunge,
climbed skyscrapers,
and even imitated some of Houdini's work
nevertheless he was crazy, but good at what he did
one day he told his girlfriend that he was going to go over Niagara Falls in a barrel
she told him you're insane
if you do this you could die and we'll never have a life together
his mind was made up and told...
#lover
#marriage
#ShortStory
#ThrillSeeking
#ValentinesDay
81 reads
13 Comments
PunkPoe
Poem Published
14th Feb 2025 5:25am
14th Feb 2025 5:25am
Cabernet Valentine
Cabernet Valentine”
Oh my sweet silent Valentine veins flowing life
Secrets are meant to be kept my obedient wife
Luscious ruby mouth perked open for kissing
Shouldn't be too many acrylics inside missing
Most special day of the year celebrated lovers
Jack-o'-lantern face that is loved by mothers
You were stunning under your sexy lace negligee
If you hadn't screamed maybe you wouldn't be ugly
Silken raven strands stained in cherry hemoglobin
Pink blush cheeks smeared in tears, eyes bulging
...
Oh my sweet silent Valentine veins flowing life
Secrets are meant to be kept my obedient wife
Luscious ruby mouth perked open for kissing
Shouldn't be too many acrylics inside missing
Most special day of the year celebrated lovers
Jack-o'-lantern face that is loved by mothers
You were stunning under your sexy lace negligee
If you hadn't screamed maybe you wouldn't be ugly
Silken raven strands stained in cherry hemoglobin
Pink blush cheeks smeared in tears, eyes bulging
...
#bittersweet
#horror
#lover
#tragedy
#ValentinesDay
88 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 11:47pm
13th Feb 2025 11:47pm
~04:14, the 14th (with 414 madnesses posted in du.), l o v e
eyes & ears bury & burn sleepless
from the overnight whirring bikes
in roaring ruthless silencers .. in
such nonstop criming sound sin
is it some formula racing or just
the racing hearts of the riding
Valentines .. whatever
its 04:14 .. it’s 14 the Valentine
Feb.. What more logic . Happy
rashly polluting these pure
cosmically auspicious hours
of Brahmamuhurta
this crazy owlish sleepless
me .. a pretty nocturnal specie
I...
from the overnight whirring bikes
in roaring ruthless silencers .. in
such nonstop criming sound sin
is it some formula racing or just
the racing hearts of the riding
Valentines .. whatever
its 04:14 .. it’s 14 the Valentine
Feb.. What more logic . Happy
rashly polluting these pure
cosmically auspicious hours
of Brahmamuhurta
this crazy owlish sleepless
me .. a pretty nocturnal specie
I...
#healing
#love
#night
#spiritual
#ValentinesDay
96 reads
8 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 10:43pm
13th Feb 2025 10:43pm
007 Heaven!
I will take you out tonight, baby.
I will look my best, just like James Bond -
007 heaven...
I want heads to turn,
Curiosity to surround us,
Envious men, jealous women -
Wondering what we might get up to,
My loaded gun;
Knowing it's you I end up fucking,
And not them...
Later... much later at the hotel!
I will protect you, flirt -
Give you what you need!
Can't say too much right now,
Cos I'm on a secret mission...
To seduce you.
You'll be surprised by my spontaneity,
Amazed, not only at my stiff...
I will look my best, just like James Bond -
007 heaven...
I want heads to turn,
Curiosity to surround us,
Envious men, jealous women -
Wondering what we might get up to,
My loaded gun;
Knowing it's you I end up fucking,
And not them...
Later... much later at the hotel!
I will protect you, flirt -
Give you what you need!
Can't say too much right now,
Cos I'm on a secret mission...
To seduce you.
You'll be surprised by my spontaneity,
Amazed, not only at my stiff...
#lover
#romantic
#sex
#ThrillSeeking
#ValentinesDay
176 reads
14 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 9:42pm
13th Feb 2025 9:42pm
~no need for any google translate tool.. in this our kissing hardcore a love~tonguing lang
a clubbing one bridge.. in an instant
magnetic pull .. in an intense pulsing
ever.. series of electric crabbing bites
…
a genuinely pure
violence, as an accumulating weapon
.. your emboldened bloody caterpillar
lips .. make first a slight feather touch
tease.. over mine as a narrowly nude
lying apart.. as benumbed train-wreck
tracks.. in an still stunned unbelieving
an astral gape..
… you quickly usher in a starter of teasers
a lowly spark though.. but potentially...
magnetic pull .. in an intense pulsing
ever.. series of electric crabbing bites
…
a genuinely pure
violence, as an accumulating weapon
.. your emboldened bloody caterpillar
lips .. make first a slight feather touch
tease.. over mine as a narrowly nude
lying apart.. as benumbed train-wreck
tracks.. in an still stunned unbelieving
an astral gape..
… you quickly usher in a starter of teasers
a lowly spark though.. but potentially...
#erotic
#love
#sensual
#spiritual
#ValentinesDay
132 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 9:36pm
13th Feb 2025 9:36pm
My Vision of Love & Peace
A peaceful world is not what I see,
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though, all those thoughts disappear
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more corruption, lets end all wars.
#CallToAction
#love
#rhyming #ValentinesDay
#rhyming #ValentinesDay
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12 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 9:51pm
12th Feb 2025 9:51pm
~eye.. this I of the eye
eye, this i of the eye- virally grown
overnight .. into a swollen spongiform
salty lachrymation sac..
slowly
lash out their thousand curled in
millipede appendages..so long
lying idly brittle as if a wasted
vestigial.. now
arch out
in sturdy yet curling flexibly
as bows .. in a sultry beauty
of a smudged smeary
kohling mascara .. uncensored
to be wetted
beyond threshold::
(till immemorial until...
overnight .. into a swollen spongiform
salty lachrymation sac..
slowly
lash out their thousand curled in
millipede appendages..so long
lying idly brittle as if a wasted
vestigial.. now
arch out
in sturdy yet curling flexibly
as bows .. in a sultry beauty
of a smudged smeary
kohling mascara .. uncensored
to be wetted
beyond threshold::
(till immemorial until...
#love
#sadness
#spiritual #ValentinesDay
#spiritual #ValentinesDay
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2 Comments
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