Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AddisonLee
Poem Published
29th Dec 2024 10:40am
29th Dec 2024 10:40am
A new beginning
A new beginning is what I need, feeling less pressure and a little less paranoid. Fixing life's mistakes while having a little fun. People can change, only if they put their mind to it. Having fun with family and friends,never feeling suicidal and feeling less afraid. A new beginning doesn't hurt, just gotta leave the silly mistakes behind .
A new beginning is what I need , it's past Christmas but ho-ho-ho . A new beginning is what I need.
Thank you 🥺💍🙌🏻
A new beginning is what I need , it's past Christmas but ho-ho-ho . A new beginning is what I need.
Thank you 🥺💍🙌🏻
#TimeHeals
47 reads
1 Comment
s0_obscen3
s0_Obscene
s0_Obscene
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 1:31pm
28th Dec 2024 1:31pm
Suffering from apathy
Even if we don't speak,
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
you hold a place no one can seek.
A space you made, deep and true,
that only ever belonged to you.
Though time has pulled us far apart,
you'll always live within my heart.
#emotions
#forgiveness
#happiness
#love
#TimeHeals
96 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
28th Dec 2024 4:37am
The One You Won't Forget
You won’t forget me
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
I am amnesia’s worst enemy
#bittersweet
#loneliness
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
89 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 11:53pm
23rd Dec 2024 11:53pm
Regular / Irregular/ Regulated
Giving thanks this holiday season
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
#friendship
#healing
#LifeCycle
#MentalHealth
#TimeHeals
235 reads
37 Comments
BeautifulDisaster7
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 10:31am
22nd Dec 2024 10:31am
Shadows of Strength
Amidst agony, beauty breaks; calming distant echoes.
Faith grows, healing in joyful kindness; love mending deep, endless wounds.
Faith grows, healing in joyful kindness; love mending deep, endless wounds.
#SelfDiscovery
#TimeHeals
75 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
These Scars Wont Define Us
Heartfelt, this goes out to all the poets here
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
#gratitude
#healing
#support #TimeHeals
#support #TimeHeals
60 reads
3 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
15th Dec 2024 3:34am
Let Go.
I just put my hand over my head and thought,
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
There's so much to the hand than the hand itself,
What if it was cut off and grief sets in,
Consumed by anger and succumbed to sadness,
All the days you took it for granted, now it is separate from your body,
You yearn for the attachment...you take a look at it, taking it closer,
Touching yourself, smelling it, seeing it for what it is, the softness,
The uniqueness of each finger, the beauty of your nails, femininity of your thumb,
The feeling is intense than when it was intact.
In your memories, the...
#gratitude
#grief
#regret
#strength
#TimeHeals
66 reads
2 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 6:06am
14th Dec 2024 6:06am
Sleepless Lunatic
burnt offerings sacrificed to the full moon
a childhood memory evoked
stepping into Opas study (grandfather for those unfamiliar)
smelling of old musty books and stale cigarettes
a tremendous scent to be sure
his ashtray as piled up as mine is becoming
just thinking about what he saw as a boy during world war two
causes me to light up another burnt offering
even as the last smoulders and dies
a childhood memory evoked
stepping into Opas study (grandfather for those unfamiliar)
smelling of old musty books and stale cigarettes
a tremendous scent to be sure
his ashtray as piled up as mine is becoming
just thinking about what he saw as a boy during world war two
causes me to light up another burnt offering
even as the last smoulders and dies
#memories
#PTSD
#TimeHeals
76 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 9:37pm
11th Dec 2024 9:37pm
Mental Health
The tossing and turning at every sound
The rolling emotions the dream would bring
Every fiber of your being
Had picked up the broken pieces
All the spaces you were afraid to dwell
In your mind
All the lines you’ve heard over and over
Your thoughts that led you to dread
Right before bed
The closet you was afraid to open
Now a light is shown
You are not alone
Your inner demons,
made peace
It’s the least
You can do, for it is all brand new
You knew yourself little
And was not as...
The rolling emotions the dream would bring
Every fiber of your being
Had picked up the broken pieces
All the spaces you were afraid to dwell
In your mind
All the lines you’ve heard over and over
Your thoughts that led you to dread
Right before bed
The closet you was afraid to open
Now a light is shown
You are not alone
Your inner demons,
made peace
It’s the least
You can do, for it is all brand new
You knew yourself little
And was not as...
#emotions
#TimeHeals
69 reads
1 Comment
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
Wise Moments In The Wild
Around The Future
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#summer
#TimeHeals
72 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:28am
8th Dec 2024 11:28am
The balance of life
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For let's take a a minute to answer, that question 🤔 in the depth of just understanding, what is the balance of life. 🤨 For example for with everything having to deal with situations, that we shall go through in life there are somethings. That are involved in creating a solid attitude in other ways, to be able to navigate through the process of life. Now let's go even deeper than deep into the deepness of your mind and heart ❤️ For example sometimes we might have to learn, to agree or disagree with...
#healing
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
65 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
Just Wait
You’re a devil running through heaven,
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
#hurt
#LifeCycle
#love #TimeHeals
#love #TimeHeals
85 reads
1 Comment
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