Poems About Long Distance Relationships by Top Critiquers
#LongDistanceRelationship
Poems about long distance relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Use the Damn Turn Signal
Our first argument
You didn’t use the turn signal
While switching lanes
On the highway
In a snow storm
You’ve never driven in snow before
And I lost my shit
You drove on
Patiently
As my eyes burned fire
I stopped spewing cuss words
And zipped my mouth
However, I do believe
The word irrational was said
Maybe
Not maybe
More than once
Not one to use traumatic experiences
As an excuse
I kept my zipped mouth
Zipped
And seethed
...
You didn’t use the turn signal
While switching lanes
On the highway
In a snow storm
You’ve never driven in snow before
And I lost my shit
You drove on
Patiently
As my eyes burned fire
I stopped spewing cuss words
And zipped my mouth
However, I do believe
The word irrational was said
Maybe
Not maybe
More than once
Not one to use traumatic experiences
As an excuse
I kept my zipped mouth
Zipped
And seethed
...
#love
#LongDistanceRelationship
#relationships #conflict
#relationships #conflict
181 reads
16 Comments
Deep
You penetrate my existence.
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
#love
#LongDistanceRelationship
380 reads
10 Comments
ORGASMIC BLISS
#love
#sex
#rhyming
#LongDistanceRelationship
#bittersweet
318 reads
2 Comments
Secret Lover
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
#separation
#sex
241 reads
10 Comments
200 Miles to your Loving Arms
Coming down the home stretch
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
#love
#home
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
515 reads
27 Comments
V.I. P. Room!!
So enticing an enchanting entering, a mystical mist. How inviting and exciting, an erotic eruption into a sensual bliss!!
Such a wicked an sinister devilish kiss 💋 full of temptation tempting in every step, so keep it up an move with pep!!
Open up to avenues that haven't been explored yet! Discovering unlimited possibilities an abilities that haven't been tapped!! Filled with lust hard to control overwhelmed to bust, what a rush,
Thrust into a world of decadent debutantes turned out from the touch, taste of sin what a dream so it seems soaking wet screams, up in the...
Such a wicked an sinister devilish kiss 💋 full of temptation tempting in every step, so keep it up an move with pep!!
Open up to avenues that haven't been explored yet! Discovering unlimited possibilities an abilities that haven't been tapped!! Filled with lust hard to control overwhelmed to bust, what a rush,
Thrust into a world of decadent debutantes turned out from the touch, taste of sin what a dream so it seems soaking wet screams, up in the...
#LongDistanceRelationship
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
390 reads
2 Comments
In the End
It was not enough time.
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
38 reads
22 Comments
Evening's Come
The sun's last long rays have descended and are lost in the lengthening shadows
And evening's come,
That dusky twilight before the night when all things ease,
Then quiet,
Gathered in before the dark.
There is a stillness now
Within which all things seem balanced to a common end.
Evening,
And half dreamt thoughts gentle nudge the corners of my mind
And I grasp at them even as they dance away again.
Recollections which whisper to the spirit and tease the soul.
...
And evening's come,
That dusky twilight before the night when all things ease,
Then quiet,
Gathered in before the dark.
There is a stillness now
Within which all things seem balanced to a common end.
Evening,
And half dreamt thoughts gentle nudge the corners of my mind
And I grasp at them even as they dance away again.
Recollections which whisper to the spirit and tease the soul.
...
#love
#fate
#LongDistanceRelationship #passion
#LongDistanceRelationship #passion
565 reads
2 Comments
Aubade, for Sweet Nyx
Rain laden clouds are clearing out
And there's a bluing in the east
Where morning skies seem like they shout...
"Begone midnight! You are deceased!"
And scattered puffs are turning pink
Or that old fashioned rosy gold
When solar beams are on the brink
Of darkness in its casket, cold,
Where it sleeps on native soil
To rise once more within hours
When night again shuffles coil
With dark matter and strange powers...
In constant rotation, there and here,
Like love within a sonneteer!
And there's a bluing in the east
Where morning skies seem like they shout...
"Begone midnight! You are deceased!"
And scattered puffs are turning pink
Or that old fashioned rosy gold
When solar beams are on the brink
Of darkness in its casket, cold,
Where it sleeps on native soil
To rise once more within hours
When night again shuffles coil
With dark matter and strange powers...
In constant rotation, there and here,
Like love within a sonneteer!
#LongDistanceRelationship
373 reads
0 Comments
Thinking That
Thinking That
Perhaps
While you,
My Mystic Muse,
So graciously,
In words,
Adorn
The thought
Of being
You,
As might our
Natures do,
One flower
And one thorn,
Please
Contemplate
Just this,
That hearing
Motions
In your heart,
The syllables
To sweep,
Just a thought,
Our windings
Sought
May then allow
Some hum
Harmonic oscillations
For our spirits
In the deep.
Perhaps
While you,
My Mystic Muse,
So graciously,
In words,
Adorn
The thought
Of being
You,
As might our
Natures do,
One flower
And one thorn,
Please
Contemplate
Just this,
That hearing
Motions
In your heart,
The syllables
To sweep,
Just a thought,
Our windings
Sought
May then allow
Some hum
Harmonic oscillations
For our spirits
In the deep.
#LongDistanceRelationship
541 reads
4 Comments
Spiritual Home (a Villanelle)
Soul of Catalonia's pride and art
whose enchantment mere photos can’t capture
Barcelona, city dear to my heart
Atop Montjuic, one her beauty can chart
canvas for Gaudi’s architecture
Soul of Catalonia's pride and art
Spaniards, immigrants, tourists from all parts
humanity’s fascinating mixture
Barcelona, city dear to my heart
The Magic Fountain’s musical spell starts
my conversion to a Spanish creature
Soul of Catalonia's pride and art
Eating churros from kiosk or street cart ...
whose enchantment mere photos can’t capture
Barcelona, city dear to my heart
Atop Montjuic, one her beauty can chart
canvas for Gaudi’s architecture
Soul of Catalonia's pride and art
Spaniards, immigrants, tourists from all parts
humanity’s fascinating mixture
Barcelona, city dear to my heart
The Magic Fountain’s musical spell starts
my conversion to a Spanish creature
Soul of Catalonia's pride and art
Eating churros from kiosk or street cart ...
#happiness
#humankind
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
323 reads
2 Comments
XX
I miss you more
Than I can bear to feel.
Than I can bear to feel.
#love
#LongDistanceRelationship
#PopCulture
229 reads
0 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Long Distance Relationships by Top Critiquers