Poems About Long Distance Relationships Seeking Honest Critique
#LongDistanceRelationship
Poems about long distance relationships seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mikash
Poem Published
26th Jan 2023 7:22am
26th Jan 2023 7:22am
You -- Gone for So Long
#love
#sex
#confessional
#LongDistanceRelationship
#SelfDiscovery
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Callistoxo
Callisto
Callisto
Poem Published
18th Jan 2023 7:54am
18th Jan 2023 7:54am
The yearning ink
The ink you read bleeds through me, the words that are my yearning for you, become a part of me. I sink into my sheets, without the warmth that is you.
A long winter's day into a warm summer evening is all the more satisfying than without the prior.
You'll be here for the shine and glow that you will always accentuate.
I could never read the future before you, i can’t know what might eventuate, but as long as its with you…ill see that as true
A long winter's day into a warm summer evening is all the more satisfying than without the prior.
You'll be here for the shine and glow that you will always accentuate.
I could never read the future before you, i can’t know what might eventuate, but as long as its with you…ill see that as true
#love
#strength
#confessional
#lover
#LongDistanceRelationship
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Nilknarfar
Poem Published
13th Nov 2022 10:52pm
13th Nov 2022 10:52pm
Did You Find Me
Did you find me?
I’m there with you, or at least you’re here with me.
As I moved closer to your voice, the vibration got stronger.
And now, you’re always here with me.
But just out of reach.
Like a lost thought that plagues the mind hopelessly trying to retrieve it.
I hope you found me there when you unpacked your belongings.
Did you invite me to help you populate your new space?
Did I burst into your room like a spirit being released.
Maybe you nodded to me as you put each thing in it’s new place, reassembling your life.
I’m there...
I’m there with you, or at least you’re here with me.
As I moved closer to your voice, the vibration got stronger.
And now, you’re always here with me.
But just out of reach.
Like a lost thought that plagues the mind hopelessly trying to retrieve it.
I hope you found me there when you unpacked your belongings.
Did you invite me to help you populate your new space?
Did I burst into your room like a spirit being released.
Maybe you nodded to me as you put each thing in it’s new place, reassembling your life.
I’m there...
#love
#lover
#LongDistanceRelationship #ForbiddenLove
#LongDistanceRelationship #ForbiddenLove
213 reads
2 Comments
Carnal
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 7:00pm
28th Oct 2022 7:00pm
Publication
This book doesn’t come fully assembled, it’s just a book. I have to take time to fold and create. My focus is all into this book.
And once it’s finished I was proud and appreciative of how it turned out. You think I just say things to you just to say it? Do you ever think out of anyone in this world, why I’m stuck on you?
Does that scare you, depress you, annoy you? I feel it in me and that’s all I can say. I feel emotions that moves me in any direction positive or negative.
I say I want you and I mean it. I can’t force you to feel the same way or make it...
And once it’s finished I was proud and appreciative of how it turned out. You think I just say things to you just to say it? Do you ever think out of anyone in this world, why I’m stuck on you?
Does that scare you, depress you, annoy you? I feel it in me and that’s all I can say. I feel emotions that moves me in any direction positive or negative.
I say I want you and I mean it. I can’t force you to feel the same way or make it...
#relationships
#marriage
#lover
#LongDistanceRelationship
#obsession
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REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
19th Oct 2022 1:09am
19th Oct 2022 1:09am
V.I. P. Room!!
So enticing an enchanting entering, a mystical mist. How inviting and exciting, an erotic eruption into a sensual bliss!!
Such a wicked an sinister devilish kiss 💋 full of temptation tempting in every step, so keep it up an move with pep!!
Open up to avenues that haven't been explored yet! Discovering unlimited possibilities an abilities that haven't been tapped!! Filled with lust hard to control overwhelmed to bust, what a rush,
Thrust into a world of decadent debutantes turned out from the touch, taste of sin what a dream so it seems soaking wet screams, up in the...
Such a wicked an sinister devilish kiss 💋 full of temptation tempting in every step, so keep it up an move with pep!!
Open up to avenues that haven't been explored yet! Discovering unlimited possibilities an abilities that haven't been tapped!! Filled with lust hard to control overwhelmed to bust, what a rush,
Thrust into a world of decadent debutantes turned out from the touch, taste of sin what a dream so it seems soaking wet screams, up in the...
#LongDistanceRelationship
#ForbiddenLove
#obsession
151 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Oct 2022 12:36pm
11th Oct 2022 12:36pm
200 Miles to your Loving Arms
Coming down the home stretch
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
#love
#home
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
240 reads
27 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 1:37am
28th Sep 2022 1:37am
Pen Pals
although
we’ve never met
except through
words on a page
in my dreams
we’ve experienced bliss
together
in my heart
i love you
although
we’ve never met
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
we’ve never met
except through
words on a page
in my dreams
we’ve experienced bliss
together
in my heart
i love you
although
we’ve never met
(C)2022 Raibeart Bruis
#LongDistanceRelationship
#crush
239 reads
6 Comments
shad00n
Poem Published
11th Aug 2022 11:13am
11th Aug 2022 11:13am
St George
A 4 hour drive doesn’t sound so bad
But we’re two young kids who can’t afford the gas
And I try to write you letters but I don’t know what to say
Just circling, hoping you’ll come up through the page
Maybe I wish we had more photographs
Like of when we chased the rain at your mom & dad’s
Or of the morning light in your tired eyes
When you lean down to kiss me in the early thrift store lines
When I drive, I drown in the pink streaked skies
But it feels unsaturated and I ask myself why
I’ve got the smell of cigarettes...
But we’re two young kids who can’t afford the gas
And I try to write you letters but I don’t know what to say
Just circling, hoping you’ll come up through the page
Maybe I wish we had more photographs
Like of when we chased the rain at your mom & dad’s
Or of the morning light in your tired eyes
When you lean down to kiss me in the early thrift store lines
When I drive, I drown in the pink streaked skies
But it feels unsaturated and I ask myself why
I’ve got the smell of cigarettes...
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
#separation
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shad00n
Poem Published
9th Aug 2022 9:28am
9th Aug 2022 9:28am
Fine
link to this being sung at the end of poem*
Your place is empty, the paint’s faded thin
For a few weeks you’re twenty, then the bars’ll let you in
And are you alone? Have you made any friends?
I’m not all that busy. Sometimes I just pretend
I try to go out, bought tickets for a show
but at the last minute decided I don’t want to go alone
How much I love’s always so disproportionate
If you made me yours would it be so unfortunate?
How many me’s
Do I have to be
Til life decides I’m ready
For the you that...
Your place is empty, the paint’s faded thin
For a few weeks you’re twenty, then the bars’ll let you in
And are you alone? Have you made any friends?
I’m not all that busy. Sometimes I just pretend
I try to go out, bought tickets for a show
but at the last minute decided I don’t want to go alone
How much I love’s always so disproportionate
If you made me yours would it be so unfortunate?
How many me’s
Do I have to be
Til life decides I’m ready
For the you that...
#music
#lyrics
#UnrequitedLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
197 reads
0 Comments
Carnal
Poem Published
23rd Jul 2022 7:37pm
23rd Jul 2022 7:37pm
Ownership
I possess you, that’s why this feeling which is new to you is unexplainable
You yearn for my physical presence, yet your mind betrays your eyes that’s full of disappointment
I’ve imprinted myself upon you so much, every thought and speech is connected to me
You’re willing submission to unexplained feelings only confirm my intentions for you
I alone control your everything and that’s how you love my dominance
Obsessed with my voice, sex, laughter, pain, generosity, wickedness, identity
Everything about me you...
You yearn for my physical presence, yet your mind betrays your eyes that’s full of disappointment
I’ve imprinted myself upon you so much, every thought and speech is connected to me
You’re willing submission to unexplained feelings only confirm my intentions for you
I alone control your everything and that’s how you love my dominance
Obsessed with my voice, sex, laughter, pain, generosity, wickedness, identity
Everything about me you...
#relationships
#LongDistanceRelationship
#ForbiddenLove #obsession
#ForbiddenLove #obsession
295 reads
2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
22nd Jul 2022 7:08pm
22nd Jul 2022 7:08pm
Are We
are we destined
to meet someday
would there be chemistry
would we connect
or feel uncomfortable
to know each other
would we find
each other fascinating
or boring
would we settle immediately
comfortably into embrace
making passionate love
are we destined
to know each other
are we kindred spirits
connected energetically
soulmates
or would we be
awkward strangers
are we destined to share
the same
space-time...
to meet someday
would there be chemistry
would we connect
or feel uncomfortable
to know each other
would we find
each other fascinating
or boring
would we settle immediately
comfortably into embrace
making passionate love
are we destined
to know each other
are we kindred spirits
connected energetically
soulmates
or would we be
awkward strangers
are we destined to share
the same
space-time...
#WritingPoetry
#LongDistanceRelationship
#passion
324 reads
3 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
14th Jun 2022 10:35pm
14th Jun 2022 10:35pm
WE ARE OLD HABANA AND NEW DRESDEN
You stroll along my Malecón
Bass thumping from an alley
Muffled by decaying buildings
And the sea
My wandering eyes
Meander the clean avenues
Of your glittering German
Bloom of renewal
We exist this way
Hand in hand
Together and across the world
From each other
Bass thumping from an alley
Muffled by decaying buildings
And the sea
My wandering eyes
Meander the clean avenues
Of your glittering German
Bloom of renewal
We exist this way
Hand in hand
Together and across the world
From each other
#LongDistanceRelationship
#IMissYou
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0 Comments
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