Poems About Long Distance Relationships by Top Critiquers
#LongDistanceRelationship
Poems about long distance relationships by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 10:10pm
10th Apr 2024 10:10pm
Siren's Call
Do you hear that?
It calls to me across the sea
With every rolling wave
The melody whispers to me
I fear to a watery grave
It's so sad you can't hear,
the song of desperate love.
The siren plea,
Heard internally.
Resonate in the sky above.
Do you feel it?
If you cannot hear.
It pulls you to come near.
I can see in your eyes,
What you cannot hide.
It only calls to those,
Who are willing to hear.
The song has stopped.
A salty tear fell.
The love she called to,
Had Never...
It calls to me across the sea
With every rolling wave
The melody whispers to me
I fear to a watery grave
It's so sad you can't hear,
the song of desperate love.
The siren plea,
Heard internally.
Resonate in the sky above.
Do you feel it?
If you cannot hear.
It pulls you to come near.
I can see in your eyes,
What you cannot hide.
It only calls to those,
Who are willing to hear.
The song has stopped.
A salty tear fell.
The love she called to,
Had Never...
#romantic
#LongDistanceRelationship
141 reads
9 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Oct 2023 6:59pm
5th Oct 2023 6:59pm
TO UNDERSTAND THE WORDS
Through each life there are somethings, that we will have to honor and appreciate the what if's and the when and asking the question. WHY ME WHY WAS I THE CHOSEN ONE DISTANT TO BE A FATHER. For sometimes we must understand what it is deeply, rooted in someone eles eyes and heart and spiritual soul and mind. Just because of what they have in their belief, in the Future pass tomorrow and beyond. For it's not everyday you meet someone, who with time and conversations began with creating, a special bond with love and honor and respect for what you two share together. For how much they takes to...
#friendship
#uplifting
#LongDistanceRelationship
#emotional
#metaphor
297 reads
6 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 8:00pm
13th Jun 2024 8:00pm
MY QUEEN OF PASSION
My Queen of Passion,
let us get it on.
I feel I belong
where you wear your thong.
Time to book a suite
in hotel discreet,
where you can show me
your best lingerie.
I know you feel same:
a tiger to tame,
needs some releasing,
room for unleashing!
Be ready for me:
we'll both be horny,
at it like rabbits
in bedroom habits.
Up high in New York
we'll share pillow talk,
our hands be applied...
fully occupied!
If we find the time
to out of bed...
let us get it on.
I feel I belong
where you wear your thong.
Time to book a suite
in hotel discreet,
where you can show me
your best lingerie.
I know you feel same:
a tiger to tame,
needs some releasing,
room for unleashing!
Be ready for me:
we'll both be horny,
at it like rabbits
in bedroom habits.
Up high in New York
we'll share pillow talk,
our hands be applied...
fully occupied!
If we find the time
to out of bed...
#erotic
#LongDistanceRelationship
#lust
#rhyming
#sex
391 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
11th Oct 2022 12:36pm
11th Oct 2022 12:36pm
200 Miles to your Loving Arms
Coming down the home stretch
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
2 weeks on the road
Makes the strongest man
Bend at the knees a bit
200 miles to your loving arms
Black coffee, petal to the metal
Till I round the corner
Into your smile I call home
#love
#home
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
#travel #LongDistanceRelationship
599 reads
27 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2023 12:52pm
22nd Feb 2023 12:52pm
Deep
You penetrate my existence.
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
Sweetly barging into
my empty places.
Waltzing into my mind.
For a thousand eternities,
I would lead you into my deep.
But you already know the way....
#love
#LongDistanceRelationship
475 reads
10 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
11th Jun 2022 1:53am
11th Jun 2022 1:53am
Aubade for Nyx
Rain laden clouds are clearing out
and there's a bluing in the east
where morning skies seem like they shout...
"Begone midnight! You are deceased!".
And scattered puffs are turning pink
or that old fashioned rosy gold
when solar beams are on the brink
of darkness in its casket, cold,
where it sleeps on native soil
to rise once more within hours
when night again shuffles coil
with dark matter and strange powers...
in constant rotation, there and here,
like verse within a sonneteer.
and there's a bluing in the east
where morning skies seem like they shout...
"Begone midnight! You are deceased!".
And scattered puffs are turning pink
or that old fashioned rosy gold
when solar beams are on the brink
of darkness in its casket, cold,
where it sleeps on native soil
to rise once more within hours
when night again shuffles coil
with dark matter and strange powers...
in constant rotation, there and here,
like verse within a sonneteer.
#LongDistanceRelationship
422 reads
0 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
18th Sep 2019 11:18pm
18th Sep 2019 11:18pm
Evening's Come
The sun's last long rays have descended and are lost in the lengthening shadows
And evening's come,
That dusky twilight before the night when all things ease,
Then quiet,
Gathered in before the dark.
There is a stillness now
Within which all things seem balanced to a common end.
Evening,
And half dreamt thoughts gentle nudge the corners of my mind
And I grasp at them even as they dance away again.
Recollections which whisper to the spirit and tease the soul.
...
And evening's come,
That dusky twilight before the night when all things ease,
Then quiet,
Gathered in before the dark.
There is a stillness now
Within which all things seem balanced to a common end.
Evening,
And half dreamt thoughts gentle nudge the corners of my mind
And I grasp at them even as they dance away again.
Recollections which whisper to the spirit and tease the soul.
...
#love
#fate
#LongDistanceRelationship #passion
#LongDistanceRelationship #passion
622 reads
2 Comments
Styxian
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 1:49am
27th Nov 2024 1:49am
Not Yet Swans
We were fooled last week
when so many things outside
were tipped in green
And though darkness is
your favorite color,
you disrobed from it
and kicked it under the bed
As you accepted Spring
to your bosom
as you shook your hair back
and offered your throat
to the kiss of something
renewing
all of your tips to pink
At first, I felt like a bird
fidgeting upon your window ledge
(edge of the bed)
I suffered the settling
for at least bread crumbs
Two pieces, ...
when so many things outside
were tipped in green
And though darkness is
your favorite color,
you disrobed from it
and kicked it under the bed
As you accepted Spring
to your bosom
as you shook your hair back
and offered your throat
to the kiss of something
renewing
all of your tips to pink
At first, I felt like a bird
fidgeting upon your window ledge
(edge of the bed)
I suffered the settling
for at least bread crumbs
Two pieces, ...
#bittersweet
#LongDistanceRelationship
#separation
312 reads
30 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
28th Mar 2023 10:46am
28th Mar 2023 10:46am
In the End
It was not enough time.
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
39 reads
22 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
17th Nov 2020 00:54am
17th Nov 2020 00:54am
Unknown Joey at The Troubadour
.. ... ...
Seated by myself at the counter
The Troubadour Club ... Coca Cola, Coke, soda ...
West Hollywood looked like a postcard
John Legend and The Roots singing...
*So dark when I see sparks, if we don't snuff 'em out*
My mind clapped out verses of a new song...
As music ejaculated unknown people
A voice said :*Hello, man... How have you been doing?...
I'm Joey... What have you been up to?... *
And I answered: *Nothing much...
I've been trying to recognize you... ...
Seated by myself at the counter
The Troubadour Club ... Coca Cola, Coke, soda ...
West Hollywood looked like a postcard
John Legend and The Roots singing...
*So dark when I see sparks, if we don't snuff 'em out*
My mind clapped out verses of a new song...
As music ejaculated unknown people
A voice said :*Hello, man... How have you been doing?...
I'm Joey... What have you been up to?... *
And I answered: *Nothing much...
I've been trying to recognize you... ...
#relationships
#LongDistanceRelationship
400 reads
8 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
13th Oct 2022 2:33am
13th Oct 2022 2:33am
blue nightingale
she
sings
the blue nightingale
of
an autumn
bride
sings
the blue nightingale
of
an autumn
bride
#wife
#birds
#fall
#music
#LongDistanceRelationship
356 reads
2 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
10th Jan 2019 8:46pm
10th Jan 2019 8:46pm
Thinking That
Thinking That
Perhaps
While you,
My Mystic Muse,
So graciously,
In words,
Adorn
The thought
Of being
You,
As might our
Natures do,
One flower
And one thorn,
Please
Contemplate
Just this,
That hearing
Motions
In your heart,
The syllables
To sweep,
Just a thought,
Our windings
Sought
May then allow
Some hum
Harmonic oscillations
For our spirits
In the deep.
Perhaps
While you,
My Mystic Muse,
So graciously,
In words,
Adorn
The thought
Of being
You,
As might our
Natures do,
One flower
And one thorn,
Please
Contemplate
Just this,
That hearing
Motions
In your heart,
The syllables
To sweep,
Just a thought,
Our windings
Sought
May then allow
Some hum
Harmonic oscillations
For our spirits
In the deep.
#LongDistanceRelationship
586 reads
4 Comments
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