LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 12:18pm
23rd Mar 2024 12:18pm
This Is For Kicking Me Out Of Your Life
During her separation
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
#LGBT
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#suffering
#sensual
159 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 3:17am
14th Mar 2024 3:17am
Inside A Hut With David And Whitney
Abigail
woke up and found herself
naked inside a hut with David
and Whitney still sleeping besides her before she
quickly got herself dressed and removed
herself from there before
they woke up.
woke up and found herself
naked inside a hut with David
and Whitney still sleeping besides her before she
quickly got herself dressed and removed
herself from there before
they woke up.
#LGBT
#fiction
#lover
#threesome
#sensual
227 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 1:39am
14th Mar 2024 1:39am
A Dog
He talked about sin and regret,
renouncing same-sex lust like this,
eternities in hell… but it didn’t stop him
taking off my clothes
and when the sin was done,
curling himself in my arms for comfort.
He trembled like a dog in the woods
waiting for its owner’s car to return.
renouncing same-sex lust like this,
eternities in hell… but it didn’t stop him
taking off my clothes
and when the sin was done,
curling himself in my arms for comfort.
He trembled like a dog in the woods
waiting for its owner’s car to return.
#LGBT
147 reads
2 Comments
Casa_Nova
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2024 2:15am
2nd Mar 2024 2:15am
What Is Your Name?
No, I think you misunderstood. I mean the name on your birth certificate.
The name your parents handpicked themselves
When they sat down with that giant book of names imagining what their future child would be like.
So I ask you again, what is your name?
Oh.
It's so similar though.
What's the point in changing your name if you're going to pick one identical?
At that point just stick with your real name
Instead of making up one
I mean I don't like my name but I never tried changing it
Because my mother gave me that name
My...
The name your parents handpicked themselves
When they sat down with that giant book of names imagining what their future child would be like.
So I ask you again, what is your name?
Oh.
It's so similar though.
What's the point in changing your name if you're going to pick one identical?
At that point just stick with your real name
Instead of making up one
I mean I don't like my name but I never tried changing it
Because my mother gave me that name
My...
#identity
#LGBT
#transgender #GenderDysphoria
#transgender #GenderDysphoria
198 reads
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PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Feb 2024 6:58pm
27th Feb 2024 6:58pm
Hypocrites
You say that what LGBTQ people do with their lives is not anybody’s business.
I say you are dishonest persons, and it is clear that you are hypocrites.
We all have the right to express our views publicly about any subject matter.
The matter concerning the activities of LGBTQ people is no exception.
Please let me refresh your minds about some things that you normally do.
You speak against thieves even when they do not steal your possessions.
You speak against rapists even when they do not sexually assault you.
You speak against kidnappers when they do...
I say you are dishonest persons, and it is clear that you are hypocrites.
We all have the right to express our views publicly about any subject matter.
The matter concerning the activities of LGBTQ people is no exception.
Please let me refresh your minds about some things that you normally do.
You speak against thieves even when they do not steal your possessions.
You speak against rapists even when they do not sexually assault you.
You speak against kidnappers when they do...
#LGBT
#morality
#deception #hypocrisy
#deception #hypocrisy
140 reads
2 Comments
neves
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 3:00am
25th Jan 2024 3:00am
In sight, in mind
You have no idea
how colossal
this lit up city
made me feel
until your mouth
filled my thoughts
with stories you
shared with me.
Even in
your absence
I feel your soft
hands running
over my skin
as I lay by
my windowsill
blowing smoke
watching city
lights fading
into morning.
how colossal
this lit up city
made me feel
until your mouth
filled my thoughts
with stories you
shared with me.
Even in
your absence
I feel your soft
hands running
over my skin
as I lay by
my windowsill
blowing smoke
watching city
lights fading
into morning.
#love
#LGBT
#confessional
352 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 2:52pm
24th Jan 2024 2:52pm
Speak For or Against the LGBTQ Issue
Some unreasonable websites only accept favourable opinions about LGBTQ people,
But writing or speaking about the LGBTQ issue should never be a one-sided thing.
Let those who support LGBTQ people and their activities speak in favour of them.
And let those who disagree with LGBTQ people and their lifestyles speak against them.
In some countries, LGBTQ people have the right to live the life they want and say what they want.
Heterosexuals have the same right, and they should be allowed to express themselves freely.
If you only allow people to...
But writing or speaking about the LGBTQ issue should never be a one-sided thing.
Let those who support LGBTQ people and their activities speak in favour of them.
And let those who disagree with LGBTQ people and their lifestyles speak against them.
In some countries, LGBTQ people have the right to live the life they want and say what they want.
Heterosexuals have the same right, and they should be allowed to express themselves freely.
If you only allow people to...
#morality
#LGBT
#humankind
#freedom
#philosophical
143 reads
2 Comments
newbardontheblock
bardy
bardy
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 6:55pm
2nd Jan 2024 6:55pm
Cyber Slut
#lust
#erotic
#technology
#LGBT
#dirty
290 reads
2 Comments
newbardontheblock
bardy
bardy
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 4:28am
2nd Jan 2024 4:28am
Magic Wand
#gay
#LGBT
#rhyming
#dirty
#orgasm
386 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
6th Dec 2023 3:24pm
6th Dec 2023 3:24pm
My Last Post on AP
Hi, to all my fans and supportive readers, I just came back to tell you goodbye.
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of AP is undoubtedly a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I...
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of AP is undoubtedly a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I...
#WritingPoetry
#corruption
#LGBT
#money
#morality
202 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 11:01am
29th Nov 2023 11:01am
After They Took Off The Clothes
After they took off the
clothes drenched by
the summer rain, they
stared at each other
and had a threesome.
clothes drenched by
the summer rain, they
stared at each other
and had a threesome.
#LGBT
#rain
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
203 reads
0 Comments
_Sunshine_
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 2:50am
29th Nov 2023 2:50am
A Journey through Sexuality and Gender
i was taught as a child
Straight was the only way
It was never acceptable
For anyone to decide that they were gay
men who liked men
lived their lives in sin
A disgusting abomination
As time went on
I left my dogma behind
i opened my eyes
expanded my mind
Why should I care if a guy wants a guy?
Once or twice, one even caught my eye
It wasn't wrong
But it still wasn't good
They were often cast out
And always misunderstood
I thought that I believed that it really was alright
But I realized even I was still...
Straight was the only way
It was never acceptable
For anyone to decide that they were gay
men who liked men
lived their lives in sin
A disgusting abomination
As time went on
I left my dogma behind
i opened my eyes
expanded my mind
Why should I care if a guy wants a guy?
Once or twice, one even caught my eye
It wasn't wrong
But it still wasn't good
They were often cast out
And always misunderstood
I thought that I believed that it really was alright
But I realized even I was still...
#LGBT
#transgender
#PersonalGrowth
193 reads
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