Poems About I Miss You Seeking Honest Critique
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Just-Rob
Poem Published
25th Jul 2024 2:20pm
25th Jul 2024 2:20pm
Distancing
Sometimes I distance myself
Because I'm hoping that people will back off
Because I need space
I wonder if people respect me enough to give me that
Sometimes I distance myself
Because Im hoping that people will come closer
Because I need reassurance
I wonder if people love me enough to give me that
Because I'm hoping that people will back off
Because I need space
I wonder if people respect me enough to give me that
Sometimes I distance myself
Because Im hoping that people will come closer
Because I need reassurance
I wonder if people love me enough to give me that
#honesty
#IMissYou
#ImSorry
#love
#respect
349 reads
4 Comments
Madcinder
Poem Published
19th Jul 2024 8:23pm
19th Jul 2024 8:23pm
Signed Letter
I remember walking with you in the sun.
Dawn looked like a new world begun.
The air was always fresh and clean.
And I had a shoulder I could lean on.
But now you’re gone.
And I’m still here.
Still waiting for you to come back, dear.
The sun still shines.
The days will get better.
I’m left behind alone.
It’s in my mind.
I sign this letter.
And mail it to the unknown.
Wind and rain came again just like before.
But now I don’t know what is in store.
Only now I know that I cannot pretend.
And that in...
Dawn looked like a new world begun.
The air was always fresh and clean.
And I had a shoulder I could lean on.
But now you’re gone.
And I’m still here.
Still waiting for you to come back, dear.
The sun still shines.
The days will get better.
I’m left behind alone.
It’s in my mind.
I sign this letter.
And mail it to the unknown.
Wind and rain came again just like before.
But now I don’t know what is in store.
Only now I know that I cannot pretend.
And that in...
#IMissYou
#loneliness
#lyrics #spiritual
#lyrics #spiritual
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 9:39pm
15th Jul 2024 9:39pm
Love Locked In (With Monovox128)
Is it possible you can get any deeper within my skin
the moment our eyes locked you're sealed within
Beneath my ribs
Stirring with my mind...
I didn't know what it was about you on that day
now I can't even breathe without you I'm ashamed to say.
You have gotten under my skin
I purposely stayed away from you
you wanted this romance to begin
I didn't want you to leave me too
Keep me awake at night
Slipping In and out of my dreams
You are under not just under my skin
but now...
the moment our eyes locked you're sealed within
Beneath my ribs
Stirring with my mind...
I didn't know what it was about you on that day
now I can't even breathe without you I'm ashamed to say.
You have gotten under my skin
I purposely stayed away from you
you wanted this romance to begin
I didn't want you to leave me too
Keep me awake at night
Slipping In and out of my dreams
You are under not just under my skin
but now...
#IMissYou
#love
#passion
82 reads
10 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 9:40pm
11th Jul 2024 9:40pm
Help You Unwind
Nine days seems like an eternity
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
Without your presence near
Living feels like some absurdity
I’m not thinking very clear
Time can’t pass by fast enough
I’m on pins and needles
You know it’s been so rough
I even consulted The Beatles
Nothing seems to fill the void
Binge writing love poetic
Talking to me till I’m annoyed
Not even close to copacetic
Sunday is etched in my mind
I promise to help you unwind
#IMissYou
226 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 9:46pm
18th Jun 2024 9:46pm
i have kindled a candle
It is better to light a candle than curse the
darkness.”―Eleanor Roosevelt
i have wearied the night
with my sitting-up,
and troubled the stars with my pain;
i have longed for the light,
so my bitter cup
may give me life’s sweetness again.
i have fluted your name
in my lonely bed,
and longed for your voice in my ear;
i have swallowed the blame
that has left me dead,
where silence has grown into fear.
i have gathered the slush
of my broken dreams,
whose carcase of lost hopes is weaned
by...
darkness.”―Eleanor Roosevelt
i have wearied the night
with my sitting-up,
and troubled the stars with my pain;
i have longed for the light,
so my bitter cup
may give me life’s sweetness again.
i have fluted your name
in my lonely bed,
and longed for your voice in my ear;
i have swallowed the blame
that has left me dead,
where silence has grown into fear.
i have gathered the slush
of my broken dreams,
whose carcase of lost hopes is weaned
by...
#dreams
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#passion
#UnrequitedLove
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TellyLace88
I_Am_Her
I_Am_Her
Poem Published
18th Jun 2024 7:32am
18th Jun 2024 7:32am
Sick
I miss you and it's making me sick
Yes, I realize the fact that I'm missing you at all
Means I'm simply fucked in the head
I keep asking myself what the fuck is so wrong with me
I plead with myself to get a goddamn grip already
How could I possibly miss someone who has done what you've done to me
Ache for someone who has brought me so low
I end up at the same excuse as always .. that I'm on drugs
Mind altering, game changing drugs
Heavy drugs
I also like to blame it on serotonin, dopamine and good old basic physics
I crave you...
Yes, I realize the fact that I'm missing you at all
Means I'm simply fucked in the head
I keep asking myself what the fuck is so wrong with me
I plead with myself to get a goddamn grip already
How could I possibly miss someone who has done what you've done to me
Ache for someone who has brought me so low
I end up at the same excuse as always .. that I'm on drugs
Mind altering, game changing drugs
Heavy drugs
I also like to blame it on serotonin, dopamine and good old basic physics
I crave you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#sadness
472 reads
3 Comments
VictorDLopez
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 7:03pm
14th Jun 2024 7:03pm
Unsung Heroes Part V: Felipe (dad)
You were born five years before the Spanish Civil War that would see your father exiled.
Language came later to you than your little brother Manuel. And you stuttered for a time.
Unlike those who speak incessantly with nothing to say, you were quiet and reserved.
Your mother mistook shyness for dimness, a tragic mistake that scarred you for life.
When your brother Manuel died at the age of three from meningitis, you heard your mom
Exclaim: “God took my bright boy and left me the dull one.” You were four or five.
You never forgot those words. How could you?...
Language came later to you than your little brother Manuel. And you stuttered for a time.
Unlike those who speak incessantly with nothing to say, you were quiet and reserved.
Your mother mistook shyness for dimness, a tragic mistake that scarred you for life.
When your brother Manuel died at the age of three from meningitis, you heard your mom
Exclaim: “God took my bright boy and left me the dull one.” You were four or five.
You never forgot those words. How could you?...
#death
#father
#grief
#IMissYou
#respect
140 reads
2 Comments
VictorDLopez
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 5:22pm
14th Jun 2024 5:22pm
Requiem for Mom (sonnet)
You were only seven when you went blind,
But could see again in less than two years,
Two years later you were seeking to find,
Full time work to help your mom ease her fears.
Eight brothers and sisters home, and dad dead,
From fascists' caresses in dark, dank cells,
You rolled up your sleeves without tears or dread,
Worked full time packing fish and working wells.
At sixteen you left for a foreign shore,
Worked hard, learned to read, saved all that you could,
To pay mom’s passage and two brothers more,
Keeping a promise as you...
But could see again in less than two years,
Two years later you were seeking to find,
Full time work to help your mom ease her fears.
Eight brothers and sisters home, and dad dead,
From fascists' caresses in dark, dank cells,
You rolled up your sleeves without tears or dread,
Worked full time packing fish and working wells.
At sixteen you left for a foreign shore,
Worked hard, learned to read, saved all that you could,
To pay mom’s passage and two brothers more,
Keeping a promise as you...
#death
#grief
#heartbroken #IMissYou
#heartbroken #IMissYou
167 reads
5 Comments
The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
28th May 2024 4:01am
28th May 2024 4:01am
Sweet Agony
Sitting in a darkened room thinking about you
Thinking about us and the history we have
Theres a part of me that loves you
Im feeling lost without your presence
My constant excuse and driving force has always been you
Everything that has gone bad in my life is your fault
Still I find myself in this moment wondering what you're doing
I want to know who you're with and have I lost you for good
I have found a real chance at happiness and peace
But its you that consumes my thoughts
If I dont have you then...
Thinking about us and the history we have
Theres a part of me that loves you
Im feeling lost without your presence
My constant excuse and driving force has always been you
Everything that has gone bad in my life is your fault
Still I find myself in this moment wondering what you're doing
I want to know who you're with and have I lost you for good
I have found a real chance at happiness and peace
But its you that consumes my thoughts
If I dont have you then...
#dark
#identity
#IMissYou
#secrets
#SelfReflection
409 reads
3 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
25th May 2024 3:23pm
25th May 2024 3:23pm
Recapturing
Christmas has passed,
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
and the new year approaches.
I encroach upon you
with a belated text.
The pretext is the weather
to remind you
of everything we have been through.
The snow was our serenity.
Snowflakes fall, and I
want you to know that I walk
for blocks in the symphony
of the busy streets alone.
I have a bittersweet
but upbeat feeling reading your reply.
You have established roots
where it does not snow.
Still, I hope the fruits of your labor
are savored and receive water from the oasis.
I...
#BestFriend
#betrayal
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
#IMissYou #TimeHeals
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16 Comments
Ambiensse
Richard G
Richard G
Poem Published
16th May 2024 11:05am
16th May 2024 11:05am
Joined
Joined
How have we found this
c-o-n-n-e-c-t-i-o-n?
Not just in time but
as if the universe was
made just for us.
Not just love but
something more
something deeper
something mystical.
We know each other
somehow as if we are
already and have always
been together. Are we
fused into a single
E
N
T
I
T
Y
We were made to be
together and we always
will be
F
O
R
E
V
E
R
How have we found this
c-o-n-n-e-c-t-i-o-n?
Not just in time but
as if the universe was
made just for us.
Not just love but
something more
something deeper
something mystical.
We know each other
somehow as if we are
already and have always
been together. Are we
fused into a single
E
N
T
I
T
Y
We were made to be
together and we always
will be
F
O
R
E
V
E
R
#IMissYou
#love
200 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 11:12am
3rd May 2024 11:12am
Life filled with silence
I can't believe your lying there
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
#death
#IMissYou
#lover
#rhyming
#silence
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6 Comments
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