Poems About I Miss You Seeking Honest Critique
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 12:32pm
21st Apr 2025 12:32pm
Life Carries On
I can't believe your lying there
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
Silent,
my tears can't cry
You left the life we shared
Endless days after you died
Stars glisten in the night
Please come back to me
I need a sign from you
I miss you, can't you see
One last look at you
As I think back to our lives
I touch your face
Where your spirit lies
They close the coffin
I can't accept your gone
I'll see you on the other side
Silence beckons me, life carries on
#death
#IMissYou
#lover
#rhyming
#silence
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6 Comments
13
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 10:59pm
16th Apr 2025 10:59pm
Stricken
I think of you often
for all the wrong reasons
and maybe a couple of right ones
the right ones that you discarded
because they felt insincere
have never stopped haunting me
if my obsession wasn't obvious
my affections should have at least
been spared your anxious pruning
the mortal fear of believing love
could bloom in the dankest of crevices
that, years of friendship could outlive
the conspiracy in your head, instead.
I was heart broken
truly felt like the knife couldn't go
any deeper even if i...
for all the wrong reasons
and maybe a couple of right ones
the right ones that you discarded
because they felt insincere
have never stopped haunting me
if my obsession wasn't obvious
my affections should have at least
been spared your anxious pruning
the mortal fear of believing love
could bloom in the dankest of crevices
that, years of friendship could outlive
the conspiracy in your head, instead.
I was heart broken
truly felt like the knife couldn't go
any deeper even if i...
#IMissYou
#love
#rejection #sadness
#rejection #sadness
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AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 7:57am
23rd Mar 2025 7:57am
Weiner
You don't need to hide.
I wasn't hiding from you.
I let you do what you do.
It helps, if you're here too.
Ill help you out.
I have secrets to shout out.
Come hear the symphony,
Of me crying out loud.
I sit and brood.
Wishing you were here, too.
There's no privacy as you intrude.
With your calm, quiet attitude.
I find you like the truth.
Come out of hiding and introduce.
Your distance is abuse.
Don't cut me off of this noose.
I like to sway in the nude.
The weather decays as they view....
I wasn't hiding from you.
I let you do what you do.
It helps, if you're here too.
Ill help you out.
I have secrets to shout out.
Come hear the symphony,
Of me crying out loud.
I sit and brood.
Wishing you were here, too.
There's no privacy as you intrude.
With your calm, quiet attitude.
I find you like the truth.
Come out of hiding and introduce.
Your distance is abuse.
Don't cut me off of this noose.
I like to sway in the nude.
The weather decays as they view....
#IMissYou
#loneliness
95 reads
9 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 6:28pm
22nd Mar 2025 6:28pm
Our song made me hide in a taco joint
You called me
your beloved
as your misty
body broke my
reservations
and my granite soul
melted
at your tender
generosity
and the honest way
you wanted me to heal
my heart.
my whole fucking heart
I need you
I walked Savannnah
and found a taco joint
in the middle of a suburb
and our song came on
the muzac speaker
some 1990s
ballad with quavering
voices singing trite
notes to words
that somehow
became a vow
...
your beloved
as your misty
body broke my
reservations
and my granite soul
melted
at your tender
generosity
and the honest way
you wanted me to heal
my heart.
my whole fucking heart
I need you
I walked Savannnah
and found a taco joint
in the middle of a suburb
and our song came on
the muzac speaker
some 1990s
ballad with quavering
voices singing trite
notes to words
that somehow
became a vow
...
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#love
248 reads
7 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 5:27pm
20th Mar 2025 5:27pm
Savannah dreams
Something languid
rolls through
blue skies
while cumulus clouds
dig rails in my mind
A shoeless man in
Forsythe park
plays a Bob Marley
gospel medley
on a guitar with
surfer stickers
as pairs of
Junior WASPs
court on a
checkered blankets
And his polo is just so,
And her pink bow
and blond hair fall
like shampoo commercials
I smile
and watch the way a
woman in a red wig
twists balloons into animals
while the fountains
run post-parade green
...
rolls through
blue skies
while cumulus clouds
dig rails in my mind
A shoeless man in
Forsythe park
plays a Bob Marley
gospel medley
on a guitar with
surfer stickers
as pairs of
Junior WASPs
court on a
checkered blankets
And his polo is just so,
And her pink bow
and blond hair fall
like shampoo commercials
I smile
and watch the way a
woman in a red wig
twists balloons into animals
while the fountains
run post-parade green
...
#happiness
#IMissYou
201 reads
8 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
15th Mar 2025 8:02am
15th Mar 2025 8:02am
Waysiders
If you don't mind I'll stop here, you've still far to go.
Little more than something to destroy, for you to grow.
It won't matter, some here don't get peace.
Afforded painful memories of the gifts they must release.
It's where they stay, they're not here to belong.
Merely breaths exhaled singing someone elses song.
Not worth pity, they're here to leave behind.
You don't miss the shadows when the light you seek is shined.
Keep going, don't waste the love you've kept reserved.
Though I truly love you, yours in return is undeserved.
Little more than something to destroy, for you to grow.
It won't matter, some here don't get peace.
Afforded painful memories of the gifts they must release.
It's where they stay, they're not here to belong.
Merely breaths exhaled singing someone elses song.
Not worth pity, they're here to leave behind.
You don't miss the shadows when the light you seek is shined.
Keep going, don't waste the love you've kept reserved.
Though I truly love you, yours in return is undeserved.
#depression
#IMissYou
#loneliness #love
#loneliness #love
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BlackBox
Black Box
Black Box
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
10th Mar 2025 8:24pm
Love Evanesce
No eloquent way to express
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
All the feelings I have for you
A messy assortment of sadness and love
I miss you.
I break down in tears
From the despair
Crying deeply, the insurmountable pain
Causes me to begin laughing in the midst of my grief
How can she have such a profound impact?
Greeting me in the morning,
Waiting for me to awake
From my life with you
You live in my can of beer
Thrive in my flower;
But you’re not there
Not there
There. In my thoughts
Reminding me of my loneliness ...
#apathy
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#sadness
143 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 9:23am
9th Mar 2025 9:23am
What Am I Waiting For?
Waiting for someone,
Who doesn't talk.
Hiding behind,
Writer's block.
I'll brew you up,
Like chicken stock.
I'll be waiting for you;
Watching the clock.
If clocks could watch,
And watches can clock....
I'd add them to my,
Wifi Hotspot.
Open to the public.
I kid you not.
Unfamiliar faces,
And connecting the dots.
I know you well,
But I don't know your thoughts.
Just expressions of strangers,
While I'm on the clock.
You hide in my mind,
As I carefully...
Who doesn't talk.
Hiding behind,
Writer's block.
I'll brew you up,
Like chicken stock.
I'll be waiting for you;
Watching the clock.
If clocks could watch,
And watches can clock....
I'd add them to my,
Wifi Hotspot.
Open to the public.
I kid you not.
Unfamiliar faces,
And connecting the dots.
I know you well,
But I don't know your thoughts.
Just expressions of strangers,
While I'm on the clock.
You hide in my mind,
As I carefully...
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#loneliness
181 reads
4 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 7:35pm
26th Jan 2025 7:35pm
Friendship...poof!
The Cycle of Friendship...
We played dolls every Friday while her Mom babysat me. Then our mothers fought and I never saw her again. I don't remember her name!
Lisa sat in front of me in 1st grade. We sat together at lunch. Then, my mother moved us across the city.
At the new school there was Chuckie. He made funny faces. The end of the school year was the last I saw him.
Kids came and went. I expected it. Then I married Fat Boy and I wasn't allowed friends. There were a couple women here and there that were almost friends until Fat Boy...
We played dolls every Friday while her Mom babysat me. Then our mothers fought and I never saw her again. I don't remember her name!
Lisa sat in front of me in 1st grade. We sat together at lunch. Then, my mother moved us across the city.
At the new school there was Chuckie. He made funny faces. The end of the school year was the last I saw him.
Kids came and went. I expected it. Then I married Fat Boy and I wasn't allowed friends. There were a couple women here and there that were almost friends until Fat Boy...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#IMissYou
#MovingOn
#sadness
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10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:20am
19th Jan 2025 1:20am
Attention K-Mart Shoppers
Jennifer, who would ever think that your trail would end at K-Mart
Did anyone tell you?
If you were alive right now
I mean if your brains hadn't been blown out of your skull with that shotgun you put to it
Would you have believed you would have done such a thing?
Jennifer, you didn't see what I saw
Oh girl,
Some kid had a hunk of your brains in a cheeseburger wrapper and was showing it to people
I went to the place where you shot yourself
You know the place I'm talking about
You were there about 26 hours before me
Jennifer, I searched...
Did anyone tell you?
If you were alive right now
I mean if your brains hadn't been blown out of your skull with that shotgun you put to it
Would you have believed you would have done such a thing?
Jennifer, you didn't see what I saw
Oh girl,
Some kid had a hunk of your brains in a cheeseburger wrapper and was showing it to people
I went to the place where you shot yourself
You know the place I'm talking about
You were there about 26 hours before me
Jennifer, I searched...
#horror
#IMissYou
#memories
#ShortStory
#suicide
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13 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
4th Jan 2025 7:14pm
What Love Is
I lied when I said it was infatuation
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
I knew you was a fragment of my imagination
Was it love?
Was it lust?
You never had no patience
Gave you the most praise
I feel humiliated, never appreciated
Always opinionated, never communication
Different sides of the fence, call it segregation
When it came to me and you, I felt so separated
All the time I put in, All the love that I give
I can’t see myself falling ever again
I took it all to the chin
Can’t let my heart break again
Its so hard to pretend
So let me...
#FirstLove
#IMissYou
#sadness
#shame
#women
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2 Comments
EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2025 11:52pm
3rd Jan 2025 11:52pm
unrequited
Your affections
are a one night stand
with unrequited love
you talk a big game, babe
but you disappear
like a post-fuck smoke
leaving nothing but memories
and the scent of you behind
I fuck myself into dreams of you
wake up with a sex toy between my legs
and the disappointment of being alone
No scalding hot shower has ever
washed away the lingering heat inside
but I still try
a pointless punishment
that leaves me wet
in too many ways
I half wish you'd never
whispered...
are a one night stand
with unrequited love
you talk a big game, babe
but you disappear
like a post-fuck smoke
leaving nothing but memories
and the scent of you behind
I fuck myself into dreams of you
wake up with a sex toy between my legs
and the disappointment of being alone
No scalding hot shower has ever
washed away the lingering heat inside
but I still try
a pointless punishment
that leaves me wet
in too many ways
I half wish you'd never
whispered...
#dirty
#erotic
#IMissYou
#sex
#UnrequitedLove
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4 Comments
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