Poems About I Miss You Seeking Honest Critique
#IMissYou
Poems about i miss you seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 5:31am
27th Nov 2024 5:31am
Johnny Joe Gonzales
It's just another day sitting in the rain, wondering why life always has to change.
If I could turn these hands of time, I'd set them back to when it was just the two of us drinking crown and getting high.
But those days were years ago. Sadly now I'm here trying to piece back this broken soul.
I know it's not your fault that you passed away, but I do miss the encouraging words that you use to say.
Like keep your head up and never change.
Fuck'em all and look towards the brighter days.
I still have your words ringing in my ears, but I no longer have your...
If I could turn these hands of time, I'd set them back to when it was just the two of us drinking crown and getting high.
But those days were years ago. Sadly now I'm here trying to piece back this broken soul.
I know it's not your fault that you passed away, but I do miss the encouraging words that you use to say.
Like keep your head up and never change.
Fuck'em all and look towards the brighter days.
I still have your words ringing in my ears, but I no longer have your...
#death
#grief
#IMissYou
#loneliness
#sadness
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2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 10:00am
23rd Nov 2024 10:00am
Slow Jams
What happened to Jimmy Hendrix?
What happened to Genuine?
What happened to back in the day where love songs played like "Bump and Grind"?
What happened to 112 "Let's get married" or "Let's get up on a room"?
What happen to the real slow jams that made me want to make love to you.
What happened to Maxwell, Escape, 702?
What happened to Color Me Bad, Mint Condition or "Knockin Da Boots"?
Give me some Soul For Real or All For One.
Take me back when laying you down in bed was just for fun.
Bring me...
What happened to Genuine?
What happened to back in the day where love songs played like "Bump and Grind"?
What happened to 112 "Let's get married" or "Let's get up on a room"?
What happen to the real slow jams that made me want to make love to you.
What happened to Maxwell, Escape, 702?
What happened to Color Me Bad, Mint Condition or "Knockin Da Boots"?
Give me some Soul For Real or All For One.
Take me back when laying you down in bed was just for fun.
Bring me...
#historical
#IMissYou
#love
#memories
#music
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2 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 8:45pm
20th Nov 2024 8:45pm
Baiting The Wind
She came as a cool autumn breeze, blowing about wildly and free.
Her presence touched every inch of me, from my head down to my feet.
She whispered in my ear, faint sounds that I could barely make out.
Other than the words I love you, that, I felt without a doubt.
She easily moved everything around me, from the tallest trees to the smallest blades of grass.
But it all stopped suddenly, so I sit here pondering and I ask,
"Where did my wind go? Why did it have to go by so fast?
I've contemplated plans of capture to perfection, baiting a kite for the next...
Her presence touched every inch of me, from my head down to my feet.
She whispered in my ear, faint sounds that I could barely make out.
Other than the words I love you, that, I felt without a doubt.
She easily moved everything around me, from the tallest trees to the smallest blades of grass.
But it all stopped suddenly, so I sit here pondering and I ask,
"Where did my wind go? Why did it have to go by so fast?
I've contemplated plans of capture to perfection, baiting a kite for the next...
#IMissYou
#LongDistanceRelationship
#love
#relationships
#separation
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I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 6:26am
9th Nov 2024 6:26am
Cold cold flesh coils
Another day ends.
Another soul lost.
Just another peaceful winter night.
Just the streets and the crisp crisp air that pleases my lungs as they burn in cold contentment.
This isn't living.
Not just being alive...
Death is coequal with love and life.
Not a curse-
(Not a kindness)
I don't ask for much.
And I don't mind when I don't get much either.
It's these moments that I shall keep.
When my soil puppet like the snow fades away in the nice night air.
Don't remember me.
Wounds and loss deepest in my view.
To...
Another soul lost.
Just another peaceful winter night.
Just the streets and the crisp crisp air that pleases my lungs as they burn in cold contentment.
This isn't living.
Not just being alive...
Death is coequal with love and life.
Not a curse-
(Not a kindness)
I don't ask for much.
And I don't mind when I don't get much either.
It's these moments that I shall keep.
When my soil puppet like the snow fades away in the nice night air.
Don't remember me.
Wounds and loss deepest in my view.
To...
#emptiness
#ghosts
#IMissYou
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Li0nsWater
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 3:22pm
30th Oct 2024 3:22pm
SENSES
We all have eyes
But it takes time to see
What is good & bad for you and me.
We both have a heart
But it takes time to feel
Process,accept,or reject notions to heal.
We both have ears
Yet we’re reluctant to honestly take heed
2 concerned with transgressions& fears.
We all love the power of touch
Especially if it’s passionately convenient
Not realizing trauma bonding is a crutch.
We too have noses
Blind to the foul stench of stagnation
But even shit can bloom roses.
However, only...
But it takes time to see
What is good & bad for you and me.
We both have a heart
But it takes time to feel
Process,accept,or reject notions to heal.
We both have ears
Yet we’re reluctant to honestly take heed
2 concerned with transgressions& fears.
We all love the power of touch
Especially if it’s passionately convenient
Not realizing trauma bonding is a crutch.
We too have noses
Blind to the foul stench of stagnation
But even shit can bloom roses.
However, only...
#IMissYou
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Just-Rob
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 6:19pm
15th Oct 2024 6:19pm
Waiting
You are
An itch that can never be scratched
A hunger that can never be sated
A thirst that can never be quenched
A craving to which there is no fix
Every moment of silence is excruciating
As if my heart has been torn from my chest
Carved with cruel intentions
An empty hole in its place
Hollow
Barren
The full weight of emptiness bearing down on me
Pinned in place and shackled to desire
A prisoner of love and a captive to passion
Yearning, longing, wanting, waiting ...
An itch that can never be scratched
A hunger that can never be sated
A thirst that can never be quenched
A craving to which there is no fix
Every moment of silence is excruciating
As if my heart has been torn from my chest
Carved with cruel intentions
An empty hole in its place
Hollow
Barren
The full weight of emptiness bearing down on me
Pinned in place and shackled to desire
A prisoner of love and a captive to passion
Yearning, longing, wanting, waiting ...
#IMissYou
#LongDistanceRelationship
#love
243 reads
4 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 5:33pm
6th Oct 2024 5:33pm
I Still Remember Clearly The First Day We Met
Those were the days of happiness and sorrows.
When we had each other and we dreamt of tomorrow.
Ten years have passed since the last time we kissed.
But there are still days that I reflect and reminisce.
I think of your laughter and how you spoke with your eyes.
I loved how you'd be cooking when I'd walk inside.
Sex was incredible because you tended to me.
And at the same time I fulfilled your every need.
When you moved in you felt so sick. So at lunch time I'd rush home just to show you how much you meant.
We'd stay up at night and talk for...
When we had each other and we dreamt of tomorrow.
Ten years have passed since the last time we kissed.
But there are still days that I reflect and reminisce.
I think of your laughter and how you spoke with your eyes.
I loved how you'd be cooking when I'd walk inside.
Sex was incredible because you tended to me.
And at the same time I fulfilled your every need.
When you moved in you felt so sick. So at lunch time I'd rush home just to show you how much you meant.
We'd stay up at night and talk for...
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#IMissYou
#love
#relationships
209 reads
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dead_lluwi
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 2:57pm
5th Oct 2024 2:57pm
im yours
I'll give you my heart for you to hold.
Do as you do, I'll do as I'm told.
Your sickly sweet words that drown me down.
Pleasurable chains that kept me around.
Keep me chained to show me love.
Imprison me like a little dove.
Fill me with desire like a burning fire.
One thing’s for sure, you're my pacifier.
I can’t believe that I wrote this during the month of love. The month of love– the world has betrayed me by giving me the chance to talk to him again. The world has become cruel yet again. World, will you please spare this girl who’s lost...
Do as you do, I'll do as I'm told.
Your sickly sweet words that drown me down.
Pleasurable chains that kept me around.
Keep me chained to show me love.
Imprison me like a little dove.
Fill me with desire like a burning fire.
One thing’s for sure, you're my pacifier.
I can’t believe that I wrote this during the month of love. The month of love– the world has betrayed me by giving me the chance to talk to him again. The world has become cruel yet again. World, will you please spare this girl who’s lost...
#BDSM
#bittersweet
#IMissYou
#obsession
#passion
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 3:01am
25th Sep 2024 3:01am
Angels of Demons
I'm on the dark side of a two sided moon.
Trying to find the light that leads me back to you.
I pray to God that he leads the way.
Take the hurt and ease my pain.
Wipe the evil from my path and protect me from Satan's wrath.
If I may, show me your grace and allow me again to be embraced.
Wash way every earthly sin and walk with me to the very end.
Give me hope so that I may last, back to a love from a not to distant past.
Trying to find the light that leads me back to you.
I pray to God that he leads the way.
Take the hurt and ease my pain.
Wipe the evil from my path and protect me from Satan's wrath.
If I may, show me your grace and allow me again to be embraced.
Wash way every earthly sin and walk with me to the very end.
Give me hope so that I may last, back to a love from a not to distant past.
#angels
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
#love
#prayer
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u53l355
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 3:59pm
17th Aug 2024 3:59pm
James
#BestFriend
#death
#grief
#IMissYou
#murder
115 reads
7 Comments
yxuanmusic
Poem Published
10th Aug 2024 4:26am
10th Aug 2024 4:26am
Shining Stars
We are standing still
With our eyes shut close
Praying fate pulls us together once again
So come one step closer
Baby let’s run through
Forget the complications
Cause’ it's just you and me
Connected through the stars
We are standing, standing, standing far apart
But why does it seem like you’re right here
Staring right at me
Baby hold me in your arms
Look me in the eyes
Do you feel the love
The bond that we possess
Baby let’s run through
Forget the complications
Cause’ it's just you and me...
With our eyes shut close
Praying fate pulls us together once again
So come one step closer
Baby let’s run through
Forget the complications
Cause’ it's just you and me
Connected through the stars
We are standing, standing, standing far apart
But why does it seem like you’re right here
Staring right at me
Baby hold me in your arms
Look me in the eyes
Do you feel the love
The bond that we possess
Baby let’s run through
Forget the complications
Cause’ it's just you and me...
#IMissYou
#love
#separation
193 reads
1 Comment
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Jul 2024 9:34pm
29th Jul 2024 9:34pm
Call Home
Hello baby
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
#IMissYou
#love
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12 Comments
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