Halloween Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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halloween seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The cold.
Once in midnight
The the mail nails
The way you can
The cold chilling at📠
Work the creepiest
Walk in the
Pale morning . The
Grest and vienna.
Of the classic chips and
Fresh French beans
On bread for the break fast.
Walk the smooth
The Apple aircatches
A 🇷🇺 least arix.
In the cold
Jright and bright
Moonlight.
In the cold comfort you
Kite 📠 and the
Cold cilf in mountains
Arises blue.
Rew/Lema as pushed into
Deep water by...
The the mail nails
The way you can
The cold chilling at📠
Work the creepiest
Walk in the
Pale morning . The
Grest and vienna.
Of the classic chips and
Fresh French beans
On bread for the break fast.
Walk the smooth
The Apple aircatches
A 🇷🇺 least arix.
In the cold
Jright and bright
Moonlight.
In the cold comfort you
Kite 📠 and the
Cold cilf in mountains
Arises blue.
Rew/Lema as pushed into
Deep water by...
#Halloween
#holiday
#MothersDay
#NewYear
#ValentinesDay
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Halloween
And when spooky month is near.
We dress in costumes and produce fear.
We wear costumes,special gear.
To chase all the bad spirits away.
In order to collect as much candy as possible.
Knocking on the door,walking down the path.
We collect candy,a sweet delight.
Whether you are dressed as a vampire.
Or if you are dressed as a monster.
An egyptian mummy, makes people run faster.
In this town we call home.
Let's all sing along to the pumpkin song.
Jack'o'lanterns, orange and green.
With a light,a...
We dress in costumes and produce fear.
We wear costumes,special gear.
To chase all the bad spirits away.
In order to collect as much candy as possible.
Knocking on the door,walking down the path.
We collect candy,a sweet delight.
Whether you are dressed as a vampire.
Or if you are dressed as a monster.
An egyptian mummy, makes people run faster.
In this town we call home.
Let's all sing along to the pumpkin song.
Jack'o'lanterns, orange and green.
With a light,a...
#Halloween
#holiday
#inspirational #motivational
#inspirational #motivational
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Rudy Found Clair's Halloween Costume
Rudy found Clair's Halloween costume.
Clair also wore it during Brazilian Carnival.
It fits better on Rudy.
Clair also wore it during Brazilian Carnival.
It fits better on Rudy.
#daughter
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#Halloween
#motherhood
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Dumb Move
In the early 2000's a man by the name of Wilbur Gentry had a job scaring people at a haunted house. He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck. Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by. Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself. When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree. The branch whipped back and choked him to death anyway.
#dark
#fiction
#funny
#Halloween
#ignorance
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Bad Idea
In the early 2000's a man by the name of Wilbur Gentry had a job scaring people at a haunted house.
He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck.
Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by.
Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself.
When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree.
The branch whipped back and choked him to death...
He was to scare people when they rode by on the back of a hay truck.
Certain he can do it better, he climbed up a tree and took the place of a hanging skeleton that was rigged to drop down when the caravan passed by.
Wilbur carefully arranged the ropes to make sure his feet touched the ground so he wouldn't accidentally hang himself.
When the caravan approached, he leaped from the tree.
The branch whipped back and choked him to death...
#dark
#death
#Halloween
#fiction
#funny
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Even death falls in love;
``~~~…~~~```
Even death falls in love
though its not very nice
it follows, it stalks it traces your face
it is obsessed, forlorn, peccant
It wants to take you down
to a place made for them,
It is innocently invited in
by what is taken in
what is seen, what is heard, what is tasted what is felt
what is played, what is said,
even ones own thoughts betray unto death,
Death loves the scent
winds blow it heavy
onto the darken border lines
of sorrow ash and tears
It reeks of pleasant odor unto it
No, I will never...
Even death falls in love
though its not very nice
it follows, it stalks it traces your face
it is obsessed, forlorn, peccant
It wants to take you down
to a place made for them,
It is innocently invited in
by what is taken in
what is seen, what is heard, what is tasted what is felt
what is played, what is said,
even ones own thoughts betray unto death,
Death loves the scent
winds blow it heavy
onto the darken border lines
of sorrow ash and tears
It reeks of pleasant odor unto it
No, I will never...
#gothic
#Halloween
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Cracula
It was Halloween night, no Michael Myers in sight.
I was dressed up as a mime, ready to get high as a kite!
I was no juggalo, but I played ICP in the whip.
As I burnt rubber towards downtown to get me some shit.
With my barnett in platts, I headed down to the flats.
That was full of dope feins, like the roaches, and rats.
I was approached by a straggly haired lady, she looked like a banshee.
A hag of the mist type, and asked me for some Mandy.
I said "I've got nothing on me lady, now leave me alone!"
As I proceeded...
I was dressed up as a mime, ready to get high as a kite!
I was no juggalo, but I played ICP in the whip.
As I burnt rubber towards downtown to get me some shit.
With my barnett in platts, I headed down to the flats.
That was full of dope feins, like the roaches, and rats.
I was approached by a straggly haired lady, she looked like a banshee.
A hag of the mist type, and asked me for some Mandy.
I said "I've got nothing on me lady, now leave me alone!"
As I proceeded...
#Halloween
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Halloween 2023
Untimely in the coming
singing in the eternal dark yearning
sinister culted thoughts peak
then wane on a lunar afterthought
Bloodied moon with no taste for the tide
whether it rise and fall again
but still, it mesmerizes the waters
Sending vibrations, it pulls
slowly the waters come in and out
It makes no comment on the maddening way
tortured souls reeking havoc in the pale light
flicker a soul, then unfurl temptation
and for a moment the world turns crimson
Unhinged in the now
tomorrow the glow will have no...
singing in the eternal dark yearning
sinister culted thoughts peak
then wane on a lunar afterthought
Bloodied moon with no taste for the tide
whether it rise and fall again
but still, it mesmerizes the waters
Sending vibrations, it pulls
slowly the waters come in and out
It makes no comment on the maddening way
tortured souls reeking havoc in the pale light
flicker a soul, then unfurl temptation
and for a moment the world turns crimson
Unhinged in the now
tomorrow the glow will have no...
#dark
#Halloween
#vampires
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Stir
The madman weeps for scarred remains
with eager interest reaps the present
a lock of hair
something personal
gifted off the corpse...
his prized little gifty
a songbird singing sonnets for the damned
refuses the invitation
Her lips wet with lullabies
says goodbye all too soon
you think, how dare the tart?
Impertinent woman with childlike wonder
is it any wonder you dislike her
A door a jar
peek a boo
then she's gone again
No mortal can claim her
the sweet surrender of this darkling ...
with eager interest reaps the present
a lock of hair
something personal
gifted off the corpse...
his prized little gifty
a songbird singing sonnets for the damned
refuses the invitation
Her lips wet with lullabies
says goodbye all too soon
you think, how dare the tart?
Impertinent woman with childlike wonder
is it any wonder you dislike her
A door a jar
peek a boo
then she's gone again
No mortal can claim her
the sweet surrender of this darkling ...
#evil
#Halloween
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Luna Orionid
Across the zenith she progressed
with proud Orion just below
and in the full sky angel glow
slowly turning forever west,
through straying whiffs of vapored air,
imperceptibly suspended
in a matrix, halo splendid,
where only proper spirits dare
to slow the hunter's meteors...
blazing through diaphanous gold
and quenched in stratospheric cold,
like honey on plasmatic smores!
Which all the gods are sure to eat
since constellations need no meat:)
with proud Orion just below
and in the full sky angel glow
slowly turning forever west,
through straying whiffs of vapored air,
imperceptibly suspended
in a matrix, halo splendid,
where only proper spirits dare
to slow the hunter's meteors...
blazing through diaphanous gold
and quenched in stratospheric cold,
like honey on plasmatic smores!
Which all the gods are sure to eat
since constellations need no meat:)
#moon
#fall
#night #Halloween
#night #Halloween
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Fire Wizard
In the dawn of the day,
when the sky is ablaze,
a fire wizard warrior rises,
his amazing power.
With flames in his eyes,
and magic in his hands,
he strides through the desert,
across the red sands.
His muscles are taut,
his spirit is strong,
he battles with honor,
and never does wrong.
The heat of the sun,
is no match for his fire,
he burns with a passion,
that never will tire.
So if you should see him,
in the dawn's early light,
remember this warrior,
and his power so bright.
when the sky is ablaze,
a fire wizard warrior rises,
his amazing power.
With flames in his eyes,
and magic in his hands,
he strides through the desert,
across the red sands.
His muscles are taut,
his spirit is strong,
he battles with honor,
and never does wrong.
The heat of the sun,
is no match for his fire,
he burns with a passion,
that never will tire.
So if you should see him,
in the dawn's early light,
remember this warrior,
and his power so bright.
#environment
#Halloween
#mirror
#WritingPoetry
#dawn
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THE LEVIATHAN CONFIGURATION
I find myself within this infernal labyrinth
With the lamenting crux grasped in my hands
I have tasted the sins of the flesh
And stained your memories with my will
Buried hopes and dreams within the confines of nightmares
Familial blood tattoos these killing fists
Because my eternal endeavors
Have led me to a Hell that I call Home
I will save my breath
For screaming
This configuration Of desecration
Has given me insight
Of salvation
And ultimate damnation
The box has tasted blood
From...
With the lamenting crux grasped in my hands
I have tasted the sins of the flesh
And stained your memories with my will
Buried hopes and dreams within the confines of nightmares
Familial blood tattoos these killing fists
Because my eternal endeavors
Have led me to a Hell that I call Home
I will save my breath
For screaming
This configuration Of desecration
Has given me insight
Of salvation
And ultimate damnation
The box has tasted blood
From...
#evil
#Halloween
#hell #horror
#hell #horror
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DU Poetry : Halloween Seeking Honest Critique Poems