Halloween Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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halloween seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
29th Oct 2023 9:14pm
29th Oct 2023 9:14pm
Platform shoes and other disasters
Come on down, baby, to the disco ballroom,
get in where you fit in, it's no small room!
We all laugh and the times are good
but don't go under the hood,
this engine is always roaring
cause baby our spirits are soaring!
Dead on the inside, that's our motto,
we guarantee you'll get lucky, like the lotto
Disco Stew is our famous dish,
and giving you a bite is our only wish.
We aren't too ghoulish to not have manners,
it's just you look so good in our disco manor
we may just have to nibble,
oh don't worry about my chin dribble! ...
get in where you fit in, it's no small room!
We all laugh and the times are good
but don't go under the hood,
this engine is always roaring
cause baby our spirits are soaring!
Dead on the inside, that's our motto,
we guarantee you'll get lucky, like the lotto
Disco Stew is our famous dish,
and giving you a bite is our only wish.
We aren't too ghoulish to not have manners,
it's just you look so good in our disco manor
we may just have to nibble,
oh don't worry about my chin dribble! ...
#Halloween
#scary
#horror
120 reads
0 Comments
HadesRising
Poem Published
29th Oct 2023 2:19am
29th Oct 2023 2:19am
HEART SO BLACK
The moon, she hangs over Haddonfield
On this night of revel, eventual horror
Children disguised laughing and screaming
Because the Boogeyman is here at last
RUN - there's nowhere to hide
Murder in a heart so black
CRY - there's no one who cares
Murder in a heart so black
And the silence is deafening
All your suffering will not be in vain
And the violence is pretending
To be heartfelt when I sever your veins
Jack-o'-lantern grins and skeletons
Galore celebrate the becoming of the slain
Babysitters and party...
On this night of revel, eventual horror
Children disguised laughing and screaming
Because the Boogeyman is here at last
RUN - there's nowhere to hide
Murder in a heart so black
CRY - there's no one who cares
Murder in a heart so black
And the silence is deafening
All your suffering will not be in vain
And the violence is pretending
To be heartfelt when I sever your veins
Jack-o'-lantern grins and skeletons
Galore celebrate the becoming of the slain
Babysitters and party...
#dark
#murder
#Halloween
116 reads
0 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
28th Oct 2023 3:35pm
28th Oct 2023 3:35pm
Slay Me!
(LibraSoul96/Billy Snagg)
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
Naked and vulnerable
Take me into your arms
Let the moonlit flood marinate our skin
Quench your undying desire for sex
As fangs sink deeper into my neck
Like a ravenous wolf howling at night
Make me moan and make me scream
Look into my eyes, devour my soul
Watch me gradually lose control
Gripping these red velvet sheets so tight
Everything about you feels so right!
There's only one thing spreading tonight
My legs, like an eagle, preparing for flight!
The room, it...
#love
#lust
#vampires
#passion
#Halloween
609 reads
32 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
28th Oct 2023 4:27am
28th Oct 2023 4:27am
Nails and Flowers (Halloween Syck House Series)
Wrapped in spiked metal, inlaid with runes of imprisonment
Demon stitched with a layer of angelic skin given by hell as a gift,
“From head to toe nails were hammered into warped flesh
Causing agonizing pain, never giving the imprisoned no rest,
“Ancient chains of binding were also applied
Entering the body through the groin, arms and third eye,
“Along with being drowned in blood until the last breath
As tears of brimstone long ago have already been wept,
“Every year when the celebration of Halloween was strong...
Demon stitched with a layer of angelic skin given by hell as a gift,
“From head to toe nails were hammered into warped flesh
Causing agonizing pain, never giving the imprisoned no rest,
“Ancient chains of binding were also applied
Entering the body through the groin, arms and third eye,
“Along with being drowned in blood until the last breath
As tears of brimstone long ago have already been wept,
“Every year when the celebration of Halloween was strong...
#dark
#Halloween
#hurt
148 reads
2 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
25th Oct 2023 4:58pm
25th Oct 2023 4:58pm
Baby Pussy (Halloween Syck House Series)
#dark
#evil
#Halloween #horror
#Halloween #horror
114 reads
10 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
21st Oct 2023 4:23am
21st Oct 2023 4:23am
Dirty Sugar (Halloween Syck House Series)
#dark
#evil
#Halloween
102 reads
4 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
19th Oct 2023 00:57am
19th Oct 2023 00:57am
Forbidden Treats
a Halloween tale
It’s been eleven autumns since
the toffee apples made their rounds
and all fell down, with two not getting up
again; the keening sounds
of parents filled the little neighbourhood,
but it’s been more than a decade now,
and trick or treaters must make good
the promise of sweets on Halloween night.
‘After all, McGillicuddy’s dead…’
kids heard their parents say behind doors,
the French teacher still in each head,
the night he went insane and gave
the apples a stench of bitter almonds,
ushering boys...
It’s been eleven autumns since
the toffee apples made their rounds
and all fell down, with two not getting up
again; the keening sounds
of parents filled the little neighbourhood,
but it’s been more than a decade now,
and trick or treaters must make good
the promise of sweets on Halloween night.
‘After all, McGillicuddy’s dead…’
kids heard their parents say behind doors,
the French teacher still in each head,
the night he went insane and gave
the apples a stench of bitter almonds,
ushering boys...
#Halloween
#scary
#ghosts #horror
#ghosts #horror
103 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
18th Oct 2023 4:27pm
18th Oct 2023 4:27pm
Queen of the 8th Surgery (Halloween Syck House Series)
#dark
#Halloween
#horror
112 reads
12 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
18th Oct 2023 6:32am
18th Oct 2023 6:32am
Slayer
#dark
#evil
#Halloween #scary
#Halloween #scary
107 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 7:01pm
17th Oct 2023 7:01pm
Someone Must've Spiked The Punch Last Night
Phylicia
woke up and found herself
naked and hungover on the day
after she went to her best friend Pam's Halloween
party and got hit on by some guy
wearing the sexy cop
costume there.
woke up and found herself
naked and hungover on the day
after she went to her best friend Pam's Halloween
party and got hit on by some guy
wearing the sexy cop
costume there.
#friendship
#Halloween
#alcohol
#fiction
#sensual
136 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 2:23pm
17th Oct 2023 2:23pm
What One Should Not Do At A Halloween Party
When
my best
friend saw this
chick in the black
start your engines
racing costume at a
neighbor's Halloween party,
he walked up and placed both hands on
her belly which made her kick that dumb
schmuck hard in the nuts and made that jerk cry.
my best
friend saw this
chick in the black
start your engines
racing costume at a
neighbor's Halloween party,
he walked up and placed both hands on
her belly which made her kick that dumb
schmuck hard in the nuts and made that jerk cry.
#Halloween
#fiction
#dialogue
#temptation
#hurt
86 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
17th Oct 2023 1:03am
17th Oct 2023 1:03am
Halloween villanelle
The pumpkin patch is where we go
to see the Jack o’ Lantern rise
and walk with eyes and mouth aglow.
The year before we saw him throw
his orange skull at Halloween skies,
and so the patch is where we go.
He clambers down from where the crow
would never dare to make its cries,
and walks with eyes and mouth aglow.
The town since Æthelred’s been low
in place and piety, a hive of thieves and lies.
It’s to the pumpkin patch we go.
We’ve long since buried God to stow
in each our hearts the elder gods, like...
to see the Jack o’ Lantern rise
and walk with eyes and mouth aglow.
The year before we saw him throw
his orange skull at Halloween skies,
and so the patch is where we go.
He clambers down from where the crow
would never dare to make its cries,
and walks with eyes and mouth aglow.
The town since Æthelred’s been low
in place and piety, a hive of thieves and lies.
It’s to the pumpkin patch we go.
We’ve long since buried God to stow
in each our hearts the elder gods, like...
#Halloween
94 reads
2 Comments
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