Poems About God by Top Critiquers
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Poems about god by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
4th Nov 2022 1:39pm
4th Nov 2022 1:39pm
The reason I give!
I give because I care, that's why I share,
Not so I can throw it back up in your face later to make a point an to make you aware!!
Something given from the heart ❤ with love, is exactly what it means and sounds like, without any expectation fare exchanges or any of the above!!
For love sake, those who take gifts without given, always seem to face harsh criticism back lash, bad remarks, bad views usually from the one who's given!!
Well if it's really done out of love!
And you do it because you care thats why you share! Well if an when its not...
Not so I can throw it back up in your face later to make a point an to make you aware!!
Something given from the heart ❤ with love, is exactly what it means and sounds like, without any expectation fare exchanges or any of the above!!
For love sake, those who take gifts without given, always seem to face harsh criticism back lash, bad remarks, bad views usually from the one who's given!!
Well if it's really done out of love!
And you do it because you care thats why you share! Well if an when its not...
#God
#devil
#angels
#ghosts
#witches
478 reads
2 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2022 11:48am
22nd Dec 2022 11:48am
Birthed
There's something about a pair of pants
this blinding white's sheen and glow
the hidden softness beyond reach of hand
the arrousing mound so briefly shown.
'Tis such a little hill you know
but in mounting one, one can find
the wealth of ages hidden below
the mother of all humankind.
Those misogynistic old white men sat in Rome,
properganderized a man
but I believe God gave great joyous moans
as She birthed Eve, the first, human!
this blinding white's sheen and glow
the hidden softness beyond reach of hand
the arrousing mound so briefly shown.
'Tis such a little hill you know
but in mounting one, one can find
the wealth of ages hidden below
the mother of all humankind.
Those misogynistic old white men sat in Rome,
properganderized a man
but I believe God gave great joyous moans
as She birthed Eve, the first, human!
#women
#God
#rhyming
433 reads
19 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
14th Oct 2024 11:01pm
The Evolution Of A Mad Genius
energies felt and absorbed...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
was light the first technology based orb?
placed upon a grid of both math and molecule build
amassed locomotion to realize the visions being seen
building block by block
a mad genius of mass proportions
sound may have been the first break iin understanding
a language understood or sung
the sun is largely made of up nuclear energy
solar flairs tears apart mars
there was technology their at one time...it seems
as well as a healthy atmosphere
advanced...
#God
#metaphor
#philosophical
#technology
#universe
96 reads
2 Comments
darkcloud68
Poem Published
9th Feb 2025 10:25pm
9th Feb 2025 10:25pm
God Form
My flesh is weak and exhausted, and it has become weary on this journey through life. Trials and tribulations has become my lion tigers and bears. I once tremble at their booming roars. And fled into the darkness to hide my shivering spirit.
Fearing that my soul would be snatched and locked away in a terrible place, and when it is cold and hungry, and I shall find no comfort or warmth, as I am wrapped in a blanket of misery, and my everyday meal would a plate of pain.
And when I am done dining, I shall wash it all down with a cold cup of sorrows, and then I shall cry,...
Fearing that my soul would be snatched and locked away in a terrible place, and when it is cold and hungry, and I shall find no comfort or warmth, as I am wrapped in a blanket of misery, and my everyday meal would a plate of pain.
And when I am done dining, I shall wash it all down with a cold cup of sorrows, and then I shall cry,...
#angels
#devil
#God
119 reads
4 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
13th Jul 2022 12:05pm
13th Jul 2022 12:05pm
Closer To You
Someday, I'm gonna rise
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
#dark
#God
#spiritual
459 reads
8 Comments
Baldwin
Poem Published
6th Aug 2022 1:50am
6th Aug 2022 1:50am
God and suffering
If God were to inquire of me
what wounds I bear,
what pain I have endured,
It wouldn’t be to see how mine compare
with those his son withstood
or to determine if I possess
some quota that some sadistic
pope or priest
decreed be the necessary price
to move into the bright “up there”.
He’d do so to assess how much
of healing that he needs to bring
unto my soul and flesh.
For god is all compassionate
and wants all of his mortal sons
to have release
from their sad suffering.
what wounds I bear,
what pain I have endured,
It wouldn’t be to see how mine compare
with those his son withstood
or to determine if I possess
some quota that some sadistic
pope or priest
decreed be the necessary price
to move into the bright “up there”.
He’d do so to assess how much
of healing that he needs to bring
unto my soul and flesh.
For god is all compassionate
and wants all of his mortal sons
to have release
from their sad suffering.
#God
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