Poems About Forbidden Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about forbidden love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
A Freeze Dried Corpse
He used the same pleasantries to entertain me
As the lies he used to sustain me
My black butterfly heart yearning
A Devil in disguise
He became a god in my eyes
And when I required more than he could give
His pride suffocated both of us
As the lies he used to sustain me
My black butterfly heart yearning
A Devil in disguise
He became a god in my eyes
And when I required more than he could give
His pride suffocated both of us
#betrayal
#dark
#ForbiddenLove
103 reads
15 Comments
John and Jane Doe
We don't know each other
how our lives intertwine
a mystery to remain unsolved
and forever lost to time
He's John, and I'm Jane
Very ordinary common names
Met on an elevator ride
Standing close side by side
History has yet to be written
The present is what we're given
There could be a ring
on our fingers, and yet, tonight
this is not the question that lingers
Will he stay away
This is just for a night
A release to take the edge off
A release we both need tonight
Not...
how our lives intertwine
a mystery to remain unsolved
and forever lost to time
He's John, and I'm Jane
Very ordinary common names
Met on an elevator ride
Standing close side by side
History has yet to be written
The present is what we're given
There could be a ring
on our fingers, and yet, tonight
this is not the question that lingers
Will he stay away
This is just for a night
A release to take the edge off
A release we both need tonight
Not...
#ForbiddenLove
#lover
447 reads
32 Comments
secret garden of memories~with Newbeginnings
she whispered eternities under her breath
and in bated anticipation, she waited
before she faded into the ether
days grew long and ever bitter
the winter’s bane, it splintered bone
where sparrows cry and never twitter
on a path of stone and broken hearts
like a gateway to her private hell
spoken poems, like tomes to the dead
demons break into her mind
black clouds rain down on her head
midnight wept for her sorrow
for days when the sun still shined
waiting patiently, she bides her time
in hope for of a...
and in bated anticipation, she waited
before she faded into the ether
days grew long and ever bitter
the winter’s bane, it splintered bone
where sparrows cry and never twitter
on a path of stone and broken hearts
like a gateway to her private hell
spoken poems, like tomes to the dead
demons break into her mind
black clouds rain down on her head
midnight wept for her sorrow
for days when the sun still shined
waiting patiently, she bides her time
in hope for of a...
#love
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove #collaboration
#ForbiddenLove #collaboration
590 reads
10 Comments
We're kind of rough around the edges
Why do you love me ?
Poet asks
Is it the imaginary raw sex ?
Or my wisdom as an older bloke?
Maybe it's just my need
Colliding with yours
We're kind of rough around the edges
Beautiful to look at in a chain link way
Poet asks
Is it the imaginary raw sex ?
Or my wisdom as an older bloke?
Maybe it's just my need
Colliding with yours
We're kind of rough around the edges
Beautiful to look at in a chain link way
#identity
#lover
#ForbiddenLove #crush
#ForbiddenLove #crush
498 reads
14 Comments
MY BIG MANDINGO
#erotic
#ForbiddenLove
#passion
#sensual
#sex
194 reads
1 Comment
PLEASE DON'T BE COY
#happiness
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#ForbiddenLove
#crush
190 reads
2 Comments
Why we do what we do
There comes a time in each of our lives, that we have to learn to walk away from the very darkness of deepness, with it's negativity that draws us into a different kind of space that's out of this world. 🌎 For sure my question. ❓ TO you is more beneficial, to the well being of your insanity that has taken, over your life even your thoughts and dreams. For my question to you. ❓Why do we do that what we do 😞 when it comes to our relationships, as we choose to stay in a bad situation. For is it out of the love that you have not yet truly received, for is it that you...
#dating
#ForbiddenLove
#LifeCycle
#LookingForLove
#misunderstood
76 reads
0 Comments
Sangraal Asunder
It wasn't Eve who first ate the naughty fruit
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
or over-stoked it with a repeating dart
love god launched from Cupid's competition shoot
aimed at every heart.
Nay! It was man who first snorkeled muffs apart
and strapped them to his face, like a mask, for gas,
to sample it like a patisserie tart
served among an ass.
The aroma yield was as no other
and brought unto the man an enchanted bliss
which compelled him to forthwith fetch another,
kiss by non-stop kiss!
The practice was misattributed as...
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
240 reads
4 Comments
Possession
The night felt dark and depraved.
I thrashed restlessly with broken sleep.
My soul was sheer, stalked by his
lingering, morphine like, whispered roar.
Collapsing into the sinister warmth.
He knew everything beyond the lusting
language of my wounded cells.
I knew I should try to escape,
But did I?
I've never wanted anything more.
The monster appears through the door
that divides reality from dreams.
My heart was the midnight without any stars.
An ebony ecstasy spills throughout
My naked core.
Pierced by a...
I thrashed restlessly with broken sleep.
My soul was sheer, stalked by his
lingering, morphine like, whispered roar.
Collapsing into the sinister warmth.
He knew everything beyond the lusting
language of my wounded cells.
I knew I should try to escape,
But did I?
I've never wanted anything more.
The monster appears through the door
that divides reality from dreams.
My heart was the midnight without any stars.
An ebony ecstasy spills throughout
My naked core.
Pierced by a...
#lust
#dark
#ForbiddenLove
241 reads
8 Comments
If Only
If only love was true to life like a story in the pages of a novel
How many of us would have stood the test of time?
Which of us would still hold on to a dream
Even as innocence is lost
Hoping against hope
When the cards we’re dealt are not the ones we want
If only our devotion to a childhood love was like the chapters of a book
Would our story be as good
No –
As Great
As we come of age
Committed in the heart of hearts
Even when misfortunes set us back
They shaped us and helped us grow
If...
How many of us would have stood the test of time?
Which of us would still hold on to a dream
Even as innocence is lost
Hoping against hope
When the cards we’re dealt are not the ones we want
If only our devotion to a childhood love was like the chapters of a book
Would our story be as good
No –
As Great
As we come of age
Committed in the heart of hearts
Even when misfortunes set us back
They shaped us and helped us grow
If...
#memorial
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
514 reads
5 Comments
Not sailing on the ocean
Not feeling pretty safe at all
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
#alcohol
#butterfly
#ForbiddenLove
#mirror
#SelfDiscovery
134 reads
2 Comments
For You (i would burn)
for you ….
It’s out of control
I can't
resist
falling
plummeting
through
your
skies
in a friction
so
intense
but …
what
a way
to burn
It’s out of control
I can't
resist
falling
plummeting
through
your
skies
in a friction
so
intense
but …
what
a way
to burn
#love
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
#crush
474 reads
12 Comments
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