Fanfiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Fanfiction
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 3:31am
28th Oct 2022 3:31am
The Result Of Opening One's Big Mouth
If
you were
to ask me,
I would say that
I'm okay with "The
One With The Ick Factor"
because... at first... age is not
a factor for both Monica
and Ethan... but that's before he told
her that he's still one of those high school kids.
you were
to ask me,
I would say that
I'm okay with "The
One With The Ick Factor"
because... at first... age is not
a factor for both Monica
and Ethan... but that's before he told
her that he's still one of those high school kids.
#corruption
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
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Sandals
Poem Published
11th May 2022 3:45pm
11th May 2022 3:45pm
Without U
Without U is terrible
Within theses ceiling lights
I can see this truly
At this epitome of pains heights
I beg u to love me
With girlfriend boyfriend love
Let me do the same
Massing within u my passions there of
Because without U
I just can't next daily ah last
Not having your love
Is putting me on my ass
WITHOUT U!
Within theses ceiling lights
I can see this truly
At this epitome of pains heights
I beg u to love me
With girlfriend boyfriend love
Let me do the same
Massing within u my passions there of
Because without U
I just can't next daily ah last
Not having your love
Is putting me on my ass
WITHOUT U!
#loneliness
#shadows
#Fanfiction #FallingInLove
#Fanfiction #FallingInLove
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The_Silly_Sibyl
Jack Thomas
Jack Thomas
Poem Published
26th Aug 2021 11:50pm
26th Aug 2021 11:50pm
Saturday the 14th
based on characters created by Sean S Cunningham and Victor Miller in Friday the 13th
"Camp is what the boy looks forward to in Scouting." - Lord Robert Baden-Powell, founder of Scouting
In the movie that girl chops my head off, but obviously that's bullshit, since you don't survive that. The movie had a lot of bullshit in it, right down to casting that old bitch Betsy Palmer as me. Did they really think that a pampered little actress like that would be strong enough to push an arrow through both a mattress and a young guy's throat? I doubt...
"Camp is what the boy looks forward to in Scouting." - Lord Robert Baden-Powell, founder of Scouting
In the movie that girl chops my head off, but obviously that's bullshit, since you don't survive that. The movie had a lot of bullshit in it, right down to casting that old bitch Betsy Palmer as me. Did they really think that a pampered little actress like that would be strong enough to push an arrow through both a mattress and a young guy's throat? I doubt...
#grief
#scary
#Fanfiction #PopCulture
#Fanfiction #PopCulture
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Jan 2021 6:28pm
29th Jan 2021 6:28pm
Gomer's Relationship With Sgt. Carter
It really is amazing
that Gomer is not
able to see that
Carter's being
churish.
that Gomer is not
able to see that
Carter's being
churish.
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#FreeVerse
#acceptance
#tolerance
470 reads
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TimWombles
Poem Published
21st Oct 2020 4:00pm
21st Oct 2020 4:00pm
Arrow In The Knee
I used to be an adventurer like you
Traveled as far as I could see
I wielded weapons that were true
Till I took an arrow to the knee
Someone stole my sweet roll
There was nothing I could do
It was only a sweet roll
What does it matter to you
From Solitude to Riften
My blade cut through many a draugr
Trying to save everyone
From the farmer to his daughter
Now I'm just a NPC
Working for the city guard
You'd think my life was easy
But it's really pretty hard
Now I face fierce dragons ...
Traveled as far as I could see
I wielded weapons that were true
Till I took an arrow to the knee
Someone stole my sweet roll
There was nothing I could do
It was only a sweet roll
What does it matter to you
From Solitude to Riften
My blade cut through many a draugr
Trying to save everyone
From the farmer to his daughter
Now I'm just a NPC
Working for the city guard
You'd think my life was easy
But it's really pretty hard
Now I face fierce dragons ...
#Fanfiction
#funny
432 reads
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Poetic_Strength
Poem Published
14th Jun 2020 5:30pm
14th Jun 2020 5:30pm
Through The Eyes of a Child
Clean and white like snow,
Fresh and transparent scent of radiant tones,
Smile of thousand Angel’s songs ,
caused acres to bloom.
While bees sipped honeys,
A laughter amid a walk
To plow seeds of joy along the coast,
Whispers of birds in forest trees,
Told stories of the ABC’s carved in their trunks,
Blown away by a breeze,
Happiness took flight in the midst of the blue...
A peek in the light of the sun....not pursued,
In need of a well to fill up a thirsty cup,
A gaze at grey clouds shaped like...
Fresh and transparent scent of radiant tones,
Smile of thousand Angel’s songs ,
caused acres to bloom.
While bees sipped honeys,
A laughter amid a walk
To plow seeds of joy along the coast,
Whispers of birds in forest trees,
Told stories of the ABC’s carved in their trunks,
Blown away by a breeze,
Happiness took flight in the midst of the blue...
A peek in the light of the sun....not pursued,
In need of a well to fill up a thirsty cup,
A gaze at grey clouds shaped like...
#dreams
#Fanfiction
#ShortStory
#LifeAsAWriter
#daughter
18 reads
7 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
1st Mar 2020 4:37am
1st Mar 2020 4:37am
air on the g-string
grande petite
in scarcity revealing
front and rear triangles.
blind man's treat,
unpeeled and unappealing,
in his blindness dangles
(him cyaan seet!)
while others, glances stealing,
succumb to lust strangles.
bitter-sweet,
her pubescence concealing,
though she wears loose bangles
in the...
in scarcity revealing
front and rear triangles.
blind man's treat,
unpeeled and unappealing,
in his blindness dangles
(him cyaan seet!)
while others, glances stealing,
succumb to lust strangles.
bitter-sweet,
her pubescence concealing,
though she wears loose bangles
in the...
#music
#Fanfiction
#sensual #sexy
#sensual #sexy
583 reads
2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
4th Jan 2020 11:47pm
4th Jan 2020 11:47pm
"The Dark Wars" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 16/4/2017
Now Of COURSE I TOLD George ... !!!
About The ... " DARK Wars " ... !!!!
Before He Had Cause ...
To Take Me To Court .... !!!!!
Now By This I'm Meaning ...
That I Had Some Thoughts ...
About Some ... " Dark Wars " ...
That NEED ... " Movie Screenings " ... !!!
BLACK Actors OF COURSE ... !!!!
Born From African Shores ... !!!
Now For Star Wars Fans ....
Who Have PROBLEMS With That ...
Just Relax And Ease Back ...
Cos I'm A BIG Star Wars Fan ... !!!!
But Dark Wars Would Draw ... ...
About The ... " DARK Wars " ... !!!!
Before He Had Cause ...
To Take Me To Court .... !!!!!
Now By This I'm Meaning ...
That I Had Some Thoughts ...
About Some ... " Dark Wars " ...
That NEED ... " Movie Screenings " ... !!!
BLACK Actors OF COURSE ... !!!!
Born From African Shores ... !!!
Now For Star Wars Fans ....
Who Have PROBLEMS With That ...
Just Relax And Ease Back ...
Cos I'm A BIG Star Wars Fan ... !!!!
But Dark Wars Would Draw ... ...
#rhyming
#parody
#Fanfiction #ShortStory
#Fanfiction #ShortStory
535 reads
1 Comment
archetype23
Poem Published
24th Sep 2019 2:03am
24th Sep 2019 2:03am
SO MANY DIFFERENT DICKS THERE ARE (poor man's bump)
#lyrics
#Fanfiction
686 reads
3 Comments
berea440oh
Poem Published
25th Jul 2019 8:56pm
25th Jul 2019 8:56pm
My Main Sexual Fantasy
#sex
#dreams
#BDSM
#Fanfiction
#LifeAsAWriter
1049 reads
2 Comments
David_Macleod
14397816
14397816
Poem Published
23rd May 2019 9:56pm
23rd May 2019 9:56pm
The Fan
A strange fan letter was in my mailbox today
It was from Iraq but I opened it anyway
before I read I was curious and wondered
who still sends letters nowadays I pondered
the handwriting was tidy and neat
the punctuation was properly complete
it read:
I am your most avid fan
I always read you when I can
I very much like your digital art
and poems about people who fart
your dark poems are very dark
I like the one where the dogs just bark
I am always impressed with your angry...
It was from Iraq but I opened it anyway
before I read I was curious and wondered
who still sends letters nowadays I pondered
the handwriting was tidy and neat
the punctuation was properly complete
it read:
I am your most avid fan
I always read you when I can
I very much like your digital art
and poems about people who fart
your dark poems are very dark
I like the one where the dogs just bark
I am always impressed with your angry...
#animals
#Fanfiction
#funny
723 reads
12 Comments
spacemod69
Poem Published
14th May 2019 6:08pm
14th May 2019 6:08pm
A Love That Binds
Hey you!
Yes you!
You know who you are, the one whose hands are wrapped around me right now.
You want to have some fun?
What a silly question, of course you do!
Don’t deny it, I know you’re smiling.
Come lie down with me; let me feel your touch.
Run your fingers across me, just the way I like it.
Whisper those words to me.
You know; the ones I like so much, the ones that excite me.
Are you excited?
You squeeze me tighter, I love the way your body feels against me.
I’d...
Yes you!
You know who you are, the one whose hands are wrapped around me right now.
You want to have some fun?
What a silly question, of course you do!
Don’t deny it, I know you’re smiling.
Come lie down with me; let me feel your touch.
Run your fingers across me, just the way I like it.
Whisper those words to me.
You know; the ones I like so much, the ones that excite me.
Are you excited?
You squeeze me tighter, I love the way your body feels against me.
I’d...
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#ShortStory
750 reads
2 Comments
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