Fanfiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Fanfiction
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 5:38am
26th Mar 2025 5:38am
This Old Mechanical Heart
A song comes on
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
Memories are sparked that were once lost to time
Wondering where my adolescence went
Bound by the bonds of a cruel fate’s design…
A glance leads to curiosity
When her eyes gaze closer at me in the dim light
The device ticks away behind a glass door on my chest
This old mechanical heart is wound every night
How old are you? She asks
I grin remembering my youth back in 1849
Too old, I reply with a smile, gazing into her eyes
A secret I carry with me after such a long time
The wrinkles on my...
#Fanfiction
#loneliness
#love
#scifi
#steampunk
93 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 3:16am
1st Mar 2025 3:16am
Saw Gene Hackman At A Friend's Party
I thought I
saw Gene Hackman at a
friend's party and figured that he faked
his own death in some way. But that was before I moved
for a closer look and saw that it
really was my friend's
own uncle.
saw Gene Hackman at a
friend's party and figured that he faked
his own death in some way. But that was before I moved
for a closer look and saw that it
really was my friend's
own uncle.
#confusion
#death
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
97 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 2:03am
27th Nov 2024 2:03am
What Are You Doing?! Giving Me A Heart Attack?!
"Let's
get it
on right here
and right now" was
what Carl heard Judy
say before he peeked in
and saw her naked on the
living room sofa with some guy
standing next to her also in the
nude and ready to hump her on that spot.
get it
on right here
and right now" was
what Carl heard Judy
say before he peeked in
and saw her naked on the
living room sofa with some guy
standing next to her also in the
nude and ready to hump her on that spot.
#daughter
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#home
#sex
191 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
We Saw Her Coming Out Of The Water
We
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
#aliens
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#friendship
169 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 11:24am
13th Sep 2024 11:24am
Kevin's One Admission Of Guilt
Yes, Alec. It's true
that I had sex with Leslie.
But it was only
because you don't care about
her anymore. That's the truth.
that I had sex with Leslie.
But it was only
because you don't care about
her anymore. That's the truth.
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#sex
#tanka
239 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 2:43pm
2nd Sep 2024 2:43pm
In Spite Of The Promise She Made To Mrs. Garrett
In
spite of
the promise
she made to Mrs.
Garrett, Blair went to
a pool party without
a swimsuit and finds herself
posing nude for another guest
with a camera and who said that
he's working for a fashion magazine.
spite of
the promise
she made to Mrs.
Garrett, Blair went to
a pool party without
a swimsuit and finds herself
posing nude for another guest
with a camera and who said that
he's working for a fashion magazine.
#deception
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#sex
#summer
268 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 2:31am
2nd Sep 2024 2:31am
What Was I Really Thinking?
Julia discovered she was naked.
She's also with Garbo and her client.
Julia got dressed and left.
She's also with Garbo and her client.
Julia got dressed and left.
#drugs
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#sex
#threesome
335 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 4:05pm
1st Sep 2024 4:05pm
To Give The Teen Modeling Competition One More Shot
Mandy decided to give the teen
modeling competition one
more shot by posing fully
naked on her bed and
keeping photos from
Kristin and their
parents or
they'll go
nuts.
modeling competition one
more shot by posing fully
naked on her bed and
keeping photos from
Kristin and their
parents or
they'll go
nuts.
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#parent
#sex
#sister
264 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Aug 2024 3:29pm
31st Aug 2024 3:29pm
She Should Not Tell Harry
Christine woke up so naked.
She saw Ian sleeping next to her.
She should not tell Harry.
She saw Ian sleeping next to her.
She should not tell Harry.
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#home
#lover
#sex
292 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 7:35pm
30th Aug 2024 7:35pm
Rudy Found Clair's Halloween Costume
Rudy found Clair's Halloween costume.
Clair also wore it during Brazilian Carnival.
It fits better on Rudy.
Clair also wore it during Brazilian Carnival.
It fits better on Rudy.
#daughter
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#Halloween
#motherhood
185 reads
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th May 2024 9:24pm
19th May 2024 9:24pm
The Whispers Of Bonnie And Clyde
Clyde, man we told you this dame is bad news you want to meet
If it is the same woman, signature, she is loose around these parts, if you know what we mean and known in the bedroom to spreads legs upon the greet
She was wanted for stealing Dillinger’s loot and his heart
He had to hunt her ass down to steal it back he had all his manpower on that bounty from the crack of dawn to dark
Stay away from that madness, she may be a beauty, but bad news, a mirage, an acid trip dream
Well, whoever sent this letter to his hotel room she intrigues me ...
If it is the same woman, signature, she is loose around these parts, if you know what we mean and known in the bedroom to spreads legs upon the greet
She was wanted for stealing Dillinger’s loot and his heart
He had to hunt her ass down to steal it back he had all his manpower on that bounty from the crack of dawn to dark
Stay away from that madness, she may be a beauty, but bad news, a mirage, an acid trip dream
Well, whoever sent this letter to his hotel room she intrigues me ...
#Fanfiction
#lust
#seductive
437 reads
7 Comments
ansh_chauhan
Ansh Chauhan
Ansh Chauhan
Poem Published
19th May 2024 1:33am
19th May 2024 1:33am
Sex with long distance friend part 1
#dirty
#Fanfiction
#orgasm
#erotic
#sensual
269 reads
0 Comments
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