Fanfiction Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Fanfiction
dejure
vick
vick
Poem Published
5th Sep 2023 10:33pm
5th Sep 2023 10:33pm
Standing at the crossroads
send me the key
put down the rope
let me climb
to join halfway
where the fallen fell through
where the horizons broke
where darkness divided
the days and nights
I deserted the highway
before my disgrace
and built a stairway
till I saw the surface
but here at
the crossroads
of Nephilim's heart
with so little time
to decide
should I descend
or must I climb
...
put down the rope
let me climb
to join halfway
where the fallen fell through
where the horizons broke
where darkness divided
the days and nights
I deserted the highway
before my disgrace
and built a stairway
till I saw the surface
but here at
the crossroads
of Nephilim's heart
with so little time
to decide
should I descend
or must I climb
...
#dark
#death
#spiritual
#Fanfiction
#WritingPoetry
355 reads
14 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Aug 2023 2:57am
25th Aug 2023 2:57am
After Their Little Nightcap
#friendship
#porn
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#threesome
411 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
26th Jul 2023 9:19pm
26th Jul 2023 9:19pm
man in the moon
The moon is a reminder that no matter what phase I
am in, I am still whole.”―Unknown
the man in the moon
carried a bundle
of sticks on his head,
his banana-rush
katta cushioning
the brunt of the weight.
he whistled a tune
to keep his trundle
but one step undead,
for the evening blush,
by his reckoning,
could not lag...
am in, I am still whole.”―Unknown
the man in the moon
carried a bundle
of sticks on his head,
his banana-rush
katta cushioning
the brunt of the weight.
he whistled a tune
to keep his trundle
but one step undead,
for the evening blush,
by his reckoning,
could not lag...
#moon
#sky
#night #Fanfiction
#night #Fanfiction
276 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Jun 2023 4:42am
25th Jun 2023 4:42am
I Do Not Blame Both You And Jerry
You know, Elaine.
I do not
blame both you and
Jerry for having the
look of disgust on each
of your faces when you
both saw Michael and Carol's baby.
I do not
blame both you and
Jerry for having the
look of disgust on each
of your faces when you
both saw Michael and Carol's baby.
#friendship
#summer
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#dialogue
247 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Jun 2023 1:00pm
16th Jun 2023 1:00pm
The One Thing That I Do Not Like
The one thing that
I do not
like about this
one nineteen seventies
sitcom is that we have
to listen to some loud
jerk complain about every small thing.
I do not
like about this
one nineteen seventies
sitcom is that we have
to listen to some loud
jerk complain about every small thing.
#Fanfiction
#confessional
#dialogue
#ignorance
#nonfiction
246 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th May 2023 3:58am
26th May 2023 3:58am
I Don't Want To Be Superman Anymore
Clark Kent wants to grow old with
Lois and not be evigheden
anymore... but has no choice.
Lois and not be evigheden
anymore... but has no choice.
#romantic
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#lover
#scifi
194 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th May 2023 6:44pm
25th May 2023 6:44pm
Willing To Go Up Against The Batman
You
know, the
main reason
why criminals
like the Signalman
are willing to go up
against the Batman is that
those guys are too stupid to think
that they could commit any crime and
get away with it... but they would be wrong,
know, the
main reason
why criminals
like the Signalman
are willing to go up
against the Batman is that
those guys are too stupid to think
that they could commit any crime and
get away with it... but they would be wrong,
#regret
#city
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#scifi
191 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2023 9:32pm
3rd Mar 2023 9:32pm
One Cartoon Is Still Okay With Me
You know, the one cartoon
of the Seventies entitled
"Help!... It's The Hair Bear
Bunch!" is still okay with
me because it shows us
how Hair Bear and his
pals make monkeys out
of director Peevly and
his assistant Botch.
of the Seventies entitled
"Help!... It's The Hair Bear
Bunch!" is still okay with
me because it shows us
how Hair Bear and his
pals make monkeys out
of director Peevly and
his assistant Botch.
#animals
#narrative
#Fanfiction
#dialogue
#nonfiction
288 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Feb 2023 4:56am
26th Feb 2023 4:56am
What Wolfgang Says About Donald Trump
Very interesting and I truly
do mean it because the Donald is not
the President anymore but just like Carl
Reiner, he should also be considered to
be the one who is the only hairless Heir here.
do mean it because the Donald is not
the President anymore but just like Carl
Reiner, he should also be considered to
be the one who is the only hairless Heir here.
#fiction
#satirical
#Fanfiction
#funny
#dialogue
289 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Feb 2023 3:21pm
11th Feb 2023 3:21pm
If What George Had Said To Jerry Is True
If what George had said
to Jerry is true about his
problem with Susan, he
should break off the
engagement with her
in order to save
Independent George
from annihilation.
to Jerry is true about his
problem with Susan, he
should break off the
engagement with her
in order to save
Independent George
from annihilation.
#fiction
#Fanfiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#philosophical
215 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Feb 2023 8:58pm
10th Feb 2023 8:58pm
Turnabout Is Fair Play
If you were to ask me,
it really is a good idea
for Leslie to move out
of the apartment she
once shared with Alec.
It's bad enough that
he told the rest of the
group a lie about his
engagement with her
which made Leslie
get so pissed and
confront that prick
about his infidelity.
He also caught poor
Leslie doing something
behind his back with
Kevin and kicked her
out of both their pad
and his life all together.
it really is a good idea
for Leslie to move out
of the apartment she
once shared with Alec.
It's bad enough that
he told the rest of the
group a lie about his
engagement with her
which made Leslie
get so pissed and
confront that prick
about his infidelity.
He also caught poor
Leslie doing something
behind his back with
Kevin and kicked her
out of both their pad
and his life all together.
#fiction
#Fanfiction
186 reads
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Sandals
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 8:38am
28th Oct 2022 8:38am
Lips Within The Dark
#dark
#romantic
#gothic
#Fanfiction
#WritingPoetry
348 reads
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