Long Poems About Deep Underground Poetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 11:34pm
16th Oct 2024 11:34pm
COUNTERWEIGHT OFF THE TAIL ME BOYS (Fri., 10-11-2024; Palm Springs, California)
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
just counterweight
off
the tail
or in other
words
to put it
more simply
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
counterweight
off
the
t
a
i
l
for i m afraid
there may not be
much
left of me
afterwards
here tonight
beyond
the resonant echo s
widely spreading...
off
the tail
me boys
just counterweight
off
the tail
or in other
words
to put it
more simply
just counterweight
off
the tail
me boys
counterweight
off
the
t
a
i
l
for i m afraid
there may not be
much
left of me
afterwards
here tonight
beyond
the resonant echo s
widely spreading...
#courage
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#heroic
#WritersBlock
#WritingPoetry
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
16th Oct 2024 1:23am
16th Oct 2024 1:23am
MY FEEBLE PEN'S UNCERTAIN, ATTEMPTED RETURN (5:25pm, 10-7-2024; at KOFFI North, Palm Springs, California)
pausing here
this afternoon
with pen
and paper
in hand again
in hopes
of tapping
back into
my innate
creative muse s
too long neglected
too long distracted
ever mysterious
inner realms
to try retuning
back into
channeling
and releasing
whatever spontaneously arisen
free flow purge
of perceptive
conscious
and subconscious
self expression
might
to my surprise
possibly arise
from...
this afternoon
with pen
and paper
in hand again
in hopes
of tapping
back into
my innate
creative muse s
too long neglected
too long distracted
ever mysterious
inner realms
to try retuning
back into
channeling
and releasing
whatever spontaneously arisen
free flow purge
of perceptive
conscious
and subconscious
self expression
might
to my surprise
possibly arise
from...
#aging
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeCycle
#nostalgia
#WritersBlock
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 7:18pm
25th Aug 2024 7:18pm
DUP Mafia Romance part 3
Frank
I need to get one of my best shooters on this case, and the only person who comes to mind is Big Red.
She's done some hits for me in the past. I need to remove some of these players from the roster.
I pulled out my cell phone and dialed her number. She answered on the 1st ring.
“Frank.” She said in a whisper, letting me know she's on a job right now and her sites are on her kill shot.
“Red I need you to come here as soon as possible.”
She did not utter one word, but I heard the audible sound of swisssshhhh from a...
I need to get one of my best shooters on this case, and the only person who comes to mind is Big Red.
She's done some hits for me in the past. I need to remove some of these players from the roster.
I pulled out my cell phone and dialed her number. She answered on the 1st ring.
“Frank.” She said in a whisper, letting me know she's on a job right now and her sites are on her kill shot.
“Red I need you to come here as soon as possible.”
She did not utter one word, but I heard the audible sound of swisssshhhh from a...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#dirty
#sex
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2024 5:12pm
23rd Aug 2024 5:12pm
First Date
"I'm going on a date tonight."
"Caw! With who?!"
"It's on a need-to-know basis and you don't need to know!"
"Is it serious, Jen?"
"It's just a date, Madeline."
“Awight, awight , don't get yer knickers in a twist! Show me the outfit then.”
"I was thinking of a white shirt and this blue skirt."
“Jenny, how old 'ar ya?”
"What does that have to do with anything?" ...
"Caw! With who?!"
"It's on a need-to-know basis and you don't need to know!"
"Is it serious, Jen?"
"It's just a date, Madeline."
“Awight, awight , don't get yer knickers in a twist! Show me the outfit then.”
"I was thinking of a white shirt and this blue skirt."
“Jenny, how old 'ar ya?”
"What does that have to do with anything?" ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
18th Aug 2024 1:44pm
They Called It Murder (Cozy Mystery)
This story starts quite odd, since I did not get involved until they called it murder.
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
My name is Kate Wells. I am the top investigative reporter of the Inwood Feline Gazette. You may not have heard of us since we are not nationally known, but the news must be reported, even if it’s mundane.
The incident became known at six-fifteen in the evening on October 23. I must print that since that is what they agreed to have on record. Off the record, it was a slightly different story that I would prefer you to know.
The chief of the gazette, Elwood Rimm, sent me to...
#cats
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#funny #mystery
#funny #mystery
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 4:14pm
15th Aug 2024 4:14pm
Murder at the Club of Hearts
The murderer is in this very room. Four suspects are in front of me, and one has done it. You may be thinking, Janet, you are in the room as well.
I’ve already deduced that I am clear. For my part in this case, other than to solve it. I was on the other side.
of the room, having a glass of wine and ogling the drummer in the jazz band.
There is a dead body lying in the center of the floor, with a white sheet covering it. There is a boyfriend who is bereaved in the death of the woman. There is the best friend who seems to be pissed off that she is being...
I’ve already deduced that I am clear. For my part in this case, other than to solve it. I was on the other side.
of the room, having a glass of wine and ogling the drummer in the jazz band.
There is a dead body lying in the center of the floor, with a white sheet covering it. There is a boyfriend who is bereaved in the death of the woman. There is the best friend who seems to be pissed off that she is being...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#mystery
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
4th Aug 2024 1:57am
4th Aug 2024 1:57am
SOS Mercedes Benz pt 2
Carla
“The car sent out the SOS emergency call because it thinks the air bags have been deployed.
Looking under the hood I can see whoever drove this before you were messing with wires they shouldn’t have. In short, you need to call someone to come and pick you up, because the car will be coming with me.”
He looks as if he wants to yell or punch something or both.
“Is there another car at the shop? I have a long way to go and I can drop it off at the other dealer when I get there.”
I looked at him and considered saying no because I was in a bad mood but that was...
“The car sent out the SOS emergency call because it thinks the air bags have been deployed.
Looking under the hood I can see whoever drove this before you were messing with wires they shouldn’t have. In short, you need to call someone to come and pick you up, because the car will be coming with me.”
He looks as if he wants to yell or punch something or both.
“Is there another car at the shop? I have a long way to go and I can drop it off at the other dealer when I get there.”
I looked at him and considered saying no because I was in a bad mood but that was...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#lust
#sex
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 11:17pm
2nd Aug 2024 11:17pm
SOS Mercerdes-Benz pt 1
Carla
I cannot believe I'm back here in my old room. I shouldn't be here; I should be in my own office in the city away from my family.
She looked around the room and realized they had changed nothing. For years as she grew up they kept telling her that her room is going to be the guest room or her mother was in woman cave.
I want some of the past dad just left everything. The house is too much of mom. So he moved into the guesthouse in the back.
I had convinced him to rent out the house while he was back there to make some extra money....
I cannot believe I'm back here in my old room. I shouldn't be here; I should be in my own office in the city away from my family.
She looked around the room and realized they had changed nothing. For years as she grew up they kept telling her that her room is going to be the guest room or her mother was in woman cave.
I want some of the past dad just left everything. The house is too much of mom. So he moved into the guesthouse in the back.
I had convinced him to rent out the house while he was back there to make some extra money....
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Jul 2024 3:40am
27th Jul 2024 3:40am
Emergency Room
Am I moving
My body's moving
I'm just assuming
I'm moving
Intense reality
Crawling all through me
Slithering like leeches
Breaking the skin
Underneath and within
Am I moving
all-consuming
This...
My body's moving
I'm just assuming
I'm moving
Intense reality
Crawling all through me
Slithering like leeches
Breaking the skin
Underneath and within
Am I moving
all-consuming
This...
#dark
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#FreeVerse #sadness
#FreeVerse #sadness
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 4:11am
14th Jul 2024 4:11am
The Jinn's
Welcome
Did you rub the lamp?
Sit back and feel the heat from the fire
Did you think you were going to get
a regular genie story?
You thought wrong
Water Jinn
Lay back and let the smoke consume you
Let it waft around and go through you
There was a wish that I heard
Not from your lips
No, that’s just absurd
There is a woman hidden in the lake
She would come out but not for my sake
I tried to coax, with sweet words of deception
She still will not come out to give me her affection
I am the water...
Did you rub the lamp?
Sit back and feel the heat from the fire
Did you think you were going to get
a regular genie story?
You thought wrong
Water Jinn
Lay back and let the smoke consume you
Let it waft around and go through you
There was a wish that I heard
Not from your lips
No, that’s just absurd
There is a woman hidden in the lake
She would come out but not for my sake
I tried to coax, with sweet words of deception
She still will not come out to give me her affection
I am the water...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#erotic
#sensual
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ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
Ten Years of Posting to The Day
Ten years of words
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
#birthday
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#anniversary
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The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
13th Jun 2024 5:44am
13th Jun 2024 5:44am
From Dark To Dim
I think its pretty clear from my writes
The dark subject matter
That I was in a really bad place when I found DU
I needed an outlet badly
I needed to know that I wasnt alone
I was wallowing in self loathing
Death seemed like the only relief possible
In a little under 2 months this place has become quite a boon to me
Seeing others show support and share how they relate has been so therapeutic
My blunt nature and direct approach got me into some trouble
I briefly walked away because I questioned if I belonged here ...
The dark subject matter
That I was in a really bad place when I found DU
I needed an outlet badly
I needed to know that I wasnt alone
I was wallowing in self loathing
Death seemed like the only relief possible
In a little under 2 months this place has become quite a boon to me
Seeing others show support and share how they relate has been so therapeutic
My blunt nature and direct approach got me into some trouble
I briefly walked away because I questioned if I belonged here ...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#gratitude
#respect #support
#respect #support
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DU Poetry : Long Poems About Deep Underground Poetry
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