Christmas Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#Christmas
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2023 4:23pm
22nd Dec 2023 4:23pm
Pagan Carol
To Yule a good year
in the old Celtic way,
the Holly King rides
to break the last day.
The druids assemble
in pitch and in gloam,
to see the King’s train
ride onwards to roam.
So let us all stand
upon Charlemagne’s grave,
the pagan soul breathes
and clamours to save.
in the old Celtic way,
the Holly King rides
to break the last day.
The druids assemble
in pitch and in gloam,
to see the King’s train
ride onwards to roam.
So let us all stand
upon Charlemagne’s grave,
the pagan soul breathes
and clamours to save.
#winter
#Christmas
178 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2023 12:20pm
22nd Dec 2023 12:20pm
I HopeYou Don't Mind Me Unwrapping Your Present For You
David woke up one Christmas Morning and
took a shower before going into
the living room and seeing his roommate Gwen
sitting naked and backwards on a chair that
was in front of the tree and smiling at David.
took a shower before going into
the living room and seeing his roommate Gwen
sitting naked and backwards on a chair that
was in front of the tree and smiling at David.
#romantic
#home
#Christmas
#fiction
#sensual
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rainwriter
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 5:02pm
21st Dec 2023 5:02pm
Merry Christmas
A smiling Claus on the card
Makes little stitches in my heart
It holds the secret to some words
That are shallow, but still hurt
I cannot stop, you make me cry
The same card as... every time
You ask me if I was alright -
Oh, wait, a tear dropped on that line
For it is every other season
For no however reason
You compose this shallow poem
This charade of care and worrying
Pretend you've changed in words and rhythm
Gentle asking, no sin admitting
But you know real change from that fall
Would be sending no card at...
Makes little stitches in my heart
It holds the secret to some words
That are shallow, but still hurt
I cannot stop, you make me cry
The same card as... every time
You ask me if I was alright -
Oh, wait, a tear dropped on that line
For it is every other season
For no however reason
You compose this shallow poem
This charade of care and worrying
Pretend you've changed in words and rhythm
Gentle asking, no sin admitting
But you know real change from that fall
Would be sending no card at...
#father
#family
#Christmas #hurt
#Christmas #hurt
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 00:08am
21st Dec 2023 00:08am
Stuffing the bird
#sex
#erotic
#Christmas
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VeronikaB
Poem Published
20th Dec 2023 10:02pm
20th Dec 2023 10:02pm
·The Shepherds' Field ..
Candles nestle ˳·˖
into the nooks and hollows ੈ✦
of the vaulted limestone walls ੈ✧̣̇
flames flicker 𓆩 ੈ
filling the rocky womb ੈ ࿔
of Mother Earth with a warm glow ✶
aromas of freshly baked bread and roast lamb ࿐࿔
waft through the underground caverns ࿔ ✶
following the scent-trail ੈ✦
birthday guests ੈ✧̣̇
gather from far and near ੈ˖✶
to celebrate Jesus' special day...
into the nooks and hollows ੈ✦
of the vaulted limestone walls ੈ✧̣̇
flames flicker 𓆩 ੈ
filling the rocky womb ੈ ࿔
of Mother Earth with a warm glow ✶
aromas of freshly baked bread and roast lamb ࿐࿔
waft through the underground caverns ࿔ ✶
following the scent-trail ੈ✦
birthday guests ੈ✧̣̇
gather from far and near ੈ˖✶
to celebrate Jesus' special day...
#happiness
#childhood
#Christmas #magic
#Christmas #magic
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
19th Dec 2023 11:43pm
19th Dec 2023 11:43pm
Cannot sleep
#Christmas
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ClearmindedVillain
Poem Published
19th Dec 2023 10:25pm
19th Dec 2023 10:25pm
Family Christmas Car Rides From The Past
Sitting in the back was always my preference.
I couldn’t tell you why I just wanted to vibe.
Vibe alone at the time.
Big headphones blocked my ears.
Visualization at such a young age was really activated.
Back then I wasn't even over stimulated.
Like many today.
Overstimulated.
Who are we to blame them?
If I fell asleep I’d wake up after like I never slept.
Can’t wait to see Grandma and Grandpa.
The home cooked food would be eaten as long as I could handle.
I anticipated some really cool gifts.
I’d make sure my sugar intake...
I couldn’t tell you why I just wanted to vibe.
Vibe alone at the time.
Big headphones blocked my ears.
Visualization at such a young age was really activated.
Back then I wasn't even over stimulated.
Like many today.
Overstimulated.
Who are we to blame them?
If I fell asleep I’d wake up after like I never slept.
Can’t wait to see Grandma and Grandpa.
The home cooked food would be eaten as long as I could handle.
I anticipated some really cool gifts.
I’d make sure my sugar intake...
#family
#Christmas
#holiday #memories
#holiday #memories
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
18th Dec 2023 11:49pm
18th Dec 2023 11:49pm
The Twelve days of Kinkmas
#lust
#sex
#Christmas
266 reads
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PAR
Poem Published
18th Dec 2023 5:00pm
18th Dec 2023 5:00pm
Xmas
STAR
top
tree
three baubles
bauble tree bauble
bauble garland garland bauble
tree tree tree bauble garland tree tree tree
lights bauble tree garland tree bauble lights
stem
stem
POT POT POT POT
POT POT POT
POT POT
maybe gifts maybe love maybe peace maybe
top
tree
three baubles
bauble tree bauble
bauble garland garland bauble
tree tree tree bauble garland tree tree tree
lights bauble tree garland tree bauble lights
stem
stem
POT POT POT POT
POT POT POT
POT POT
maybe gifts maybe love maybe peace maybe
#hope
#identity
#Christmas
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Dec 2023 12:54pm
18th Dec 2023 12:54pm
Unlike Other Kittens
I don't know about you guys
but I really do
feel stupid standing
in
front
of
the fireplace with this
stupid Christmas sweater
on unlike other kittens.
but I really do
feel stupid standing
in
front
of
the fireplace with this
stupid Christmas sweater
on unlike other kittens.
#home
#cats
#Christmas
#fiction
#dialogue
206 reads
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
17th Dec 2023 11:54pm
17th Dec 2023 11:54pm
Mrs Clause
#lust
#Christmas
#sexy
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2023 2:02pm
10th Dec 2023 2:02pm
One's Personal Opinion On The Holidays
If
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
you were
to ask me,
Christmas shopping
could really be
causing strong damage to
one's sanity for you have
to find each of those on your list
the perfect gift, the right things for your
tree and other Yuletide stuff like that.
#trees
#Christmas
#MentalHealth
#dialogue
#nonfiction
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