Buddhist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Buddhist seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
28th Feb 2021 2:51am
28th Feb 2021 2:51am
Don' Get Evolved
(Catfish>>>>>>>>>unfinshed>>>>>>>>
broken, broken
as if preeking thru
the portals,
ready glimmers, yet
...
broken, broken
as if preeking thru
the portals,
ready glimmers, yet
...
#jealousy
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#heaven
#hell
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2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
27th Feb 2021 1:39pm
27th Feb 2021 1:39pm
Motional Antipathy
so so many useless retreats retreated only on the foot'falls of
all
them long ago forgotten how can popopoem,
poemis
populous.......
pootin the clouds away , so's we can be
cloudless as far
sunny sundays,
after so many days of clouded
fruztrated visions for the for the...
all
them long ago forgotten how can popopoem,
poemis
populous.......
pootin the clouds away , so's we can be
cloudless as far
sunny sundays,
after so many days of clouded
fruztrated visions for the for the...
#God
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#Hindu
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7 Comments
nomoth
Poem Published
17th Dec 2020 8:22pm
17th Dec 2020 8:22pm
We are twenty becoming twenty-one
VIZ for #NewYear comp.
#angels
#NewYear
#hope
#separation
#Buddhist
530 reads
12 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
9th Dec 2020 7:35pm
9th Dec 2020 7:35pm
#3800 / PIECE (OF a) FRAGMENT'o'PEACE
WARNING: Please do not attempt to sing this song.
is a
personal refer'al to
such
an event,
(jn any way) necessary?
we canno rely on
we canno count on
we canno run on
so little data &......
(the da'ta ['s] connected to the DaDa )
( Praise the name of the Lord !)
.....then a thorough inspection beckons,
~~the prying eyes of officiality staring ...
is a
personal refer'al to
such
an event,
(jn any way) necessary?
we canno rely on
we canno count on
we canno run on
so little data &......
(the da'ta ['s] connected to the DaDa )
( Praise the name of the Lord !)
.....then a thorough inspection beckons,
~~the prying eyes of officiality staring ...
#love
#LifeStruggles
#Buddhist
#patience
#redemption
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4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
27th Nov 2020 8:55pm
27th Nov 2020 8:55pm
turning grief into the path
The hardest hurts in life come from grief
but the relief
is within the belief
that Love and Compassion
are positive forces
and the happiest endorses
caring for others
even if we will grieve their loss
since,
cosmically,
nothing matters,
but,
relatively,
everything does!
but the relief
is within the belief
that Love and Compassion
are positive forces
and the happiest endorses
caring for others
even if we will grieve their loss
since,
cosmically,
nothing matters,
but,
relatively,
everything does!
#Buddhist
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0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
8th Nov 2020 6:46pm
8th Nov 2020 6:46pm
What Do You Think? On 2nd Thought, Nevermind. (Thank you.)
This'ere is my goofball destiny, (and
it's not so strange that destiny and density
are so close to each other.
I must admit, I've always a bit skeptical of
human life possessing some destiny, while there's
no doubt at all about how we cling to a
density of which inhibits the cultivation of any free
flow of unbridled consciousness, such a free
consciousness requires a long cultivation. One might
say we're "hard wired" to keep consciousness safely
limited, mostly because that's how 1000s of years of ...
it's not so strange that destiny and density
are so close to each other.
I must admit, I've always a bit skeptical of
human life possessing some destiny, while there's
no doubt at all about how we cling to a
density of which inhibits the cultivation of any free
flow of unbridled consciousness, such a free
consciousness requires a long cultivation. One might
say we're "hard wired" to keep consciousness safely
limited, mostly because that's how 1000s of years of ...
#religion
#God
#Christian
#Buddhist
#morality
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8 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
30th Oct 2020 5:04pm
30th Oct 2020 5:04pm
PALOOKAVILLE EXPRESS or: Blues for Terry Malloy (& Groucho)
PHOTO: Karl Malden and Marlon Brando (as Terry Malloy) "On the Waterfront" 1954
Never let yourself think
that you're "sure" of anything
you perceive as "going on",
either in your mind, or
the (so'called) "real world" outside of
your mind.
More often than not,
to do so is likely to be
a one-way ticket to
Palookaville.
Ego is not your friend.
Ego is the source of most of our problems.
Ego is the source of most of our...
Never let yourself think
that you're "sure" of anything
you perceive as "going on",
either in your mind, or
the (so'called) "real world" outside of
your mind.
More often than not,
to do so is likely to be
a one-way ticket to
Palookaville.
Ego is not your friend.
Ego is the source of most of our problems.
Ego is the source of most of our...
#identity
#Buddhist
#confessional
#pagan
#philosophical
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6 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
20th Oct 2020 1:36am
20th Oct 2020 1:36am
COVID poem about humanity
At some point
this pandemic will end,
so then
we need to ask ourselves
"what will I have done?"
this pandemic will end,
so then
we need to ask ourselves
"what will I have done?"
#Buddhist
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0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
6th Oct 2020 3:36am
6th Oct 2020 3:36am
six examples of samsara
It's an act,
this balance between
good and evil
work and home
church and state.
There are none of those
for real,
but only where staged.
this balance between
good and evil
work and home
church and state.
There are none of those
for real,
but only where staged.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
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dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
4th Oct 2020 4:03pm
4th Oct 2020 4:03pm
Brooklyn Dodgers Vs New York Giants, Today, 2:30pm at The Polo Grounds, NYC.
do this
do this (or that)
(what is that?)
~~is that who/what I thought it was? ~~
this is better than that
( oh no doubt )
did you do that ?
it might've been my d o i n g ( all a l o n g )
if so
if not
why would some one do such as that ?
t h i s Than t h a t.............(Than a...
do this (or that)
(what is that?)
~~is that who/what I thought it was? ~~
this is better than that
( oh no doubt )
did you do that ?
it might've been my d o i n g ( all a l o n g )
if so
if not
why would some one do such as that ?
t h i s Than t h a t.............(Than a...
#love
#BestFriend
#identity
#Buddhist
#sports
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6 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2020 4:00am
2nd Oct 2020 4:00am
Matters Do
The most difficult
aspect of Buddhism
to teach
is not impermanence,
but that the reaction to impermanence
does not have to be nihilism.
aspect of Buddhism
to teach
is not impermanence,
but that the reaction to impermanence
does not have to be nihilism.
#Buddhist
#MentalHealth
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prometheus5290
Poem Published
27th Sep 2020 2:52am
27th Sep 2020 2:52am
Imperfection is a quality of the human condition
Buddhism isn't about
being perfect every time,
but it is about
trying
and admitting mistakes,
because they happen,
and we almost all make them.
being perfect every time,
but it is about
trying
and admitting mistakes,
because they happen,
and we almost all make them.
#Buddhist
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4 Comments
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