Buddhist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Buddhist seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 4:27pm
19th Nov 2024 4:27pm
Journal Entry: An atheist's prayer
To the nameless entity that shaped my being and breathed life into this form, I come to you (or it) with a heart of longing and fear. Some say we're fearfully and wonderfully made, crafted with intention and care but I think probably not. I'm only clay in the random hands of nature and fate, given life one day and returned to dust the next.
How are we fired with complex threads of life? Through some divine mystery, we have been blessed with existence and have felt the heat of love's embrace. As humans, we cherish vessels of pleasure but continue on or our paths of aging and...
How are we fired with complex threads of life? Through some divine mystery, we have been blessed with existence and have felt the heat of love's embrace. As humans, we cherish vessels of pleasure but continue on or our paths of aging and...
#Buddhist
#death
#erotic #lust
#erotic #lust
161 reads
3 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Sep 2024 11:44am
13th Sep 2024 11:44am
Inside Your Soul
Can one
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
#Buddhist
#Christian
#Hindu
#prayer
#Taoism
107 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Aug 2024 4:06pm
8th Aug 2024 4:06pm
The kee beeper and the bee keeper
Yesterday,
I saved a bee from a fountain,
and it stayed in my hand until it was dry enough to fly away.
I would still save them all,
even if they all stung me.
I saved a bee from a fountain,
and it stayed in my hand until it was dry enough to fly away.
I would still save them all,
even if they all stung me.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
133 reads
4 Comments
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 3:27am
14th Jun 2024 3:27am
INSERT, POP-UP, REFLUX - PAUSE (12:30am, 7-3-2010; Palm Springs, California)
each day
i live
i see
i feel
i sense
i know
sometimes even
back and forth
a little more
a little less
through days
through weeks
through months
through years
i wake
to the east
spread roots
to the south
dream
to the west
gain strength
insight
wisdom
and power
from the north
when and with
my feet are in the earth
my head in the clouds
my heart in the sea
and my mind
my spirit
and being
are all filled
with radiant
life giving...
i live
i see
i feel
i sense
i know
sometimes even
back and forth
a little more
a little less
through days
through weeks
through months
through years
i wake
to the east
spread roots
to the south
dream
to the west
gain strength
insight
wisdom
and power
from the north
when and with
my feet are in the earth
my head in the clouds
my heart in the sea
and my mind
my spirit
and being
are all filled
with radiant
life giving...
#Buddhist
#Christian
#Hindu
#spiritual
#Taoism
85 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
12th Jun 2024 11:27am
12th Jun 2024 11:27am
Or Else
If you need violence to make religious converts,
you have no real faith,
because you have
no confidence, no comfort
in your own belief
and no way to speak
from your heart
about God.
you have no real faith,
because you have
no confidence, no comfort
in your own belief
and no way to speak
from your heart
about God.
#Buddhist
#peace
#religion
125 reads
3 Comments
Jasminewang
Poem Published
13th May 2024 7:47am
13th May 2024 7:47am
Mentor
I've never told anyone
that I have a mentor
who deliberately distributes
the philosophy of Buddhism
Someone may criticize
"Aren't you a Christian?"
"Yes, I was, but now indeed
I have converted."
It seems like a hope
I have found a way home
the home I once possessed
but I had long abandoned
Now I can stop drifting
being a Christian or a Buddhist
I would be settled down
in my lifetime pursuing
I know he will be there
patiently waiting...
that I have a mentor
who deliberately distributes
the philosophy of Buddhism
Someone may criticize
"Aren't you a Christian?"
"Yes, I was, but now indeed
I have converted."
It seems like a hope
I have found a way home
the home I once possessed
but I had long abandoned
Now I can stop drifting
being a Christian or a Buddhist
I would be settled down
in my lifetime pursuing
I know he will be there
patiently waiting...
#Buddhist
188 reads
14 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
3rd May 2024 9:26pm
3rd May 2024 9:26pm
Buddhist monk
In silent nights,
the Buddhist monk leans over
the ancient sutras,
between the yellowed pages,
he seeks answers
for the desires of his heart.
The moon, serene and silver,
lights up the temple
while he meditates
his thoughts wander
in search of understanding.
He recalls the words of the Buddha
that he taught about suffering
and detachment being like love,
regardless of its shape,
It can be a blessing or a trap.
The monk contemplates the duality of life:
desire and renunciation.
And how love, like a...
the Buddhist monk leans over
the ancient sutras,
between the yellowed pages,
he seeks answers
for the desires of his heart.
The moon, serene and silver,
lights up the temple
while he meditates
his thoughts wander
in search of understanding.
He recalls the words of the Buddha
that he taught about suffering
and detachment being like love,
regardless of its shape,
It can be a blessing or a trap.
The monk contemplates the duality of life:
desire and renunciation.
And how love, like a...
#anxiety
#Buddhist
#loneliness
#love
#sex
120 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 12:03pm
12th Apr 2024 12:03pm
Temporary Delay
I went to build a cairn
but could not get to where I know the rocks are.
Usually, a mandala is constructed
before we act like it never existed.
but could not get to where I know the rocks are.
Usually, a mandala is constructed
before we act like it never existed.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
154 reads
7 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 4:56pm
25th Jan 2024 4:56pm
Weight Loss
Since we don't own anything anyway,
Can't take it with us when we die
Or just go anywhere outside the home,
Sell or give to charity or someone who will use it
Everything that you
do not need
do not use
do not want
that does not bring you joy,
and you will suddenly feel
Lighter,
Lightly,
More like light.
Can't take it with us when we die
Or just go anywhere outside the home,
Sell or give to charity or someone who will use it
Everything that you
do not need
do not use
do not want
that does not bring you joy,
and you will suddenly feel
Lighter,
Lightly,
More like light.
#happiness
#Buddhist
#Taoism
252 reads
13 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
17th Jan 2024 1:15am
17th Jan 2024 1:15am
I died that already
Be a good student...
I died that already.
Be an athlete...
I died that already.
Be a tutor/professor/educator...
I died that already.
Be an operations manager...
I died that already.
When I chose there was nothing to be,
I achieved immortality.
I died that already.
Be an athlete...
I died that already.
Be a tutor/professor/educator...
I died that already.
Be an operations manager...
I died that already.
When I chose there was nothing to be,
I achieved immortality.
#Buddhist
#SelfReflection
#Taoism
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfWorth
194 reads
11 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
8th Jan 2024 3:54pm
Light Years
Light Years
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
The farthest back I can remember, there were already forms…forms, faces, locations. I remember seeing them and watching them like I was a viewer with no body of my own. It all felt familiar but mostly random. The people and the places didn’t seem to match and would often switch without reason. I remember feeling very strong connections to many of the images I saw, but I cannot refine a memory to a particular emotional reaction to a particular scenario.
I have no way to measure how long things went on like that, but, eventually, the forms and faces and...
#universe
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#philosophical
#scifi
168 reads
1 Comment
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
15th Nov 2023 7:01pm
15th Nov 2023 7:01pm
I'm Hebrew!!
I'm Hebrew a nation of people who's been treated unfair!!
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
In a world 🌎 were everyone's looking to prosper an gain dwelling in sin, without feelings and emotions or remorse to even care!!
Because being labeled as people behind two continents or even a color, now amongst the civilized, now our culture and brilliant minds your able to share!!
To the world 🌎 like precious jewels gems 💎 stones, pearl's and diamonds 💎 with no rewards being given or any thoughts of coming close to even being compared!!
Next to those whose...
#religion
#Christian
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#prayer
313 reads
7 Comments
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