Buddhist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Buddhist seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
prometheus5290
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 12:57pm
14th Jun 2023 12:57pm
The Past Imperfect
We do not have to be what we were being.
We do not have to do what we were doing.
We all have the past imperfect,
in which our actions were interrupted,
changed from corrupted and detrimental
back to wholesome and beneficial for everyone.
We do not have to do what we were doing.
We all have the past imperfect,
in which our actions were interrupted,
changed from corrupted and detrimental
back to wholesome and beneficial for everyone.
#happiness
#hope
#Buddhist
#SelfReflection
#Taoism
99 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Jun 2023 2:16am
7th Jun 2023 2:16am
New Order
#relationships
#BDSM
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#lover
373 reads
13 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 11:31pm
1st Jun 2023 11:31pm
Psychodelical
If you are running from something,
that thing will chase you.
If you are approaching something,
that thing will embrace you.
that thing will chase you.
If you are approaching something,
that thing will embrace you.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
91 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
25th May 2023 2:15am
25th May 2023 2:15am
Too drooly for schooly
What do you call it when
your artificial intelligence
is smarter than your
above average human ones?
your artificial intelligence
is smarter than your
above average human ones?
#school
#Buddhist
#Taoism #PersonalGrowth
#Taoism #PersonalGrowth
94 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
24th May 2023 4:40pm
24th May 2023 4:40pm
Gentle Elephants
I could not extinguish my ego,
so I attached it to altruism,
and if you abuse kindness,
I will trample you like a herd of stampeding elephants.
so I attached it to altruism,
and if you abuse kindness,
I will trample you like a herd of stampeding elephants.
#kindness
#Buddhist
#Taoism #gratitude
#Taoism #gratitude
193 reads
3 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
9th May 2023 5:18pm
9th May 2023 5:18pm
Did AI Write This Poem
No,
it did not,
but how would you know?
AI can do all the things
we wish it could not,
such as write poetry,
academic essays,
and computer languages.
it did not,
but how would you know?
AI can do all the things
we wish it could not,
such as write poetry,
academic essays,
and computer languages.
#technology
#Buddhist
#Taoism
183 reads
8 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
14th Jan 2023 5:30am
14th Jan 2023 5:30am
High, How Are You?
I am high
like how are you and how do you do...
High
Like low oxygen low gravity low gravitas
High
Like empty
Like negative infinity and beyond
But in a way that manifests compassion,
Like hydroelectricity.
like how are you and how do you do...
High
Like low oxygen low gravity low gravitas
High
Like empty
Like negative infinity and beyond
But in a way that manifests compassion,
Like hydroelectricity.
#Buddhist
302 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
26th Oct 2022 00:52am
26th Oct 2022 00:52am
Anonymity
I like that you all do not know who I am,
because then it will not hurt as much when I go-
you probably will not even know.
because then it will not hurt as much when I go-
you probably will not even know.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
206 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2022 3:33am
23rd Jun 2022 3:33am
This Is Not My Solipsism -1
Rattlesnake:
I definitely did not create rattlesnake,
or anything else that can kill me by biting me,
with my mind.
I definitely did not create rattlesnake,
or anything else that can kill me by biting me,
with my mind.
#Buddhist
#evolution
#Taoism
220 reads
5 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
30th Mar 2022 4:08am
30th Mar 2022 4:08am
Heirarchy of needs
All you
think-you're-thinkers
need to think
from the bottom up,
like Maslow,
or your thoughts
will just keep toppling over,
like the cities in America.
think-you're-thinkers
need to think
from the bottom up,
like Maslow,
or your thoughts
will just keep toppling over,
like the cities in America.
#Buddhist
#HumanRights
277 reads
0 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
7th Nov 2021 9:00pm
7th Nov 2021 9:00pm
Virupa
What has ever been the curse
of women since the dawn of life?
What is the fear they consider the worst,
calling out only piercing shrieks and cries?
It is their death. The ugliness.
A grave the swinging cradle,
turned to deathbed of loneliness,
genes displeased, karma prenatal.
Even the most affectionate soul,
the tender understanding angel,
would provoke rejection and foul,
disgust ridiculing the honest stranger.
It was Yordan Yovkov that said
Beauty is always a blessed exhuberance, ...
of women since the dawn of life?
What is the fear they consider the worst,
calling out only piercing shrieks and cries?
It is their death. The ugliness.
A grave the swinging cradle,
turned to deathbed of loneliness,
genes displeased, karma prenatal.
Even the most affectionate soul,
the tender understanding angel,
would provoke rejection and foul,
disgust ridiculing the honest stranger.
It was Yordan Yovkov that said
Beauty is always a blessed exhuberance, ...
#loneliness
#beauty
#God
#Buddhist
#despair
547 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
21st Oct 2021 4:58am
21st Oct 2021 4:58am
Growth is a Lofty Goal
My anger
is a sign
that I'm wrong.
is a sign
that I'm wrong.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
357 reads
5 Comments
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