Buddhist Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Buddhist seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Oct 2023 10:41pm
30th Oct 2023 10:41pm
LOOK FROM WITHIN
From the beginning of your life there you will always have obstacles, in your daily routine of what is life, just to survive through the process of the traumatic, trails and tribulations that sometimes comes in waves. THAT will be way over your head, till you feel like your drowning in the seas of DEATH 🤔 JUST imagine how you felt in the mist, which the illusions seems to be which they seem so real to life. But yet there seems to be no escape🤔 But did you know that you, have the power to manifest your thoughts, 🤔 and create a wonderful and blessed place to escape,...
#Buddhist
#faith
#rebirth
#spiritual
#prayer
255 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
20th Sep 2023 2:47pm
20th Sep 2023 2:47pm
Zen Master
The lessonless teacher has
nothing
to teach,
but only encourages there is
nothing
to reach.
nothing
to teach,
but only encourages there is
nothing
to reach.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
200 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
29th Jul 2023 1:53pm
29th Jul 2023 1:53pm
Eternal
The universe did not begin...
It has always been.
It has always been.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
186 reads
3 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
28th Jul 2023 1:27pm
28th Jul 2023 1:27pm
nihilism, pessimism and buddhism
The nihilists are correct,
the universe is too big to care about you, individually,
and might become an anaconda that will eat you and your entire family,
or a world-killer meteor that could destroy the whole of the earth and all of its gods.
The pessimists are correct,
society is a cycle of less and more harsh oppression,
and authority will use any reason, reasoning, non-reasoning and sophistry to maintain itself.
However, after all this,
we are here anyway,
so working together to alleviate suffering and promote joy is...
the universe is too big to care about you, individually,
and might become an anaconda that will eat you and your entire family,
or a world-killer meteor that could destroy the whole of the earth and all of its gods.
The pessimists are correct,
society is a cycle of less and more harsh oppression,
and authority will use any reason, reasoning, non-reasoning and sophistry to maintain itself.
However, after all this,
we are here anyway,
so working together to alleviate suffering and promote joy is...
#Buddhist
#Taoism
203 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
1st Jul 2023 1:33pm
1st Jul 2023 1:33pm
To Zen and back
I came back to tell you
life is much easier without words,
without the impulse to turn everything into language,
limiting what things can be
and what you can feel.
life is much easier without words,
without the impulse to turn everything into language,
limiting what things can be
and what you can feel.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
179 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
28th Jun 2023 5:35pm
28th Jun 2023 5:35pm
The absolute value of material wealth
Your accumulated wealth
is the greatest sign of your karma...
the karma that got you that wealth,
and the karma you get to distribute through others.
is the greatest sign of your karma...
the karma that got you that wealth,
and the karma you get to distribute through others.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#responsibility #Hindu
#responsibility #Hindu
148 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 1:06pm
14th Jun 2023 1:06pm
The Past Imperfect, 2
What you were doing does not have to be who you are.
The past Imperfect is how you were acting,
but that karma does not have to endure.
Changing ourselves is harder than a diamond,
which is what you become when you accept
that all pasts are imperfect.
The aim of this change is the present perfect,
which we might never achieve,
but through our wholesome transitions,
we can learn to alleviate avoidable suffering
for others and ourselves.
The past Imperfect is how you were acting,
but that karma does not have to endure.
Changing ourselves is harder than a diamond,
which is what you become when you accept
that all pasts are imperfect.
The aim of this change is the present perfect,
which we might never achieve,
but through our wholesome transitions,
we can learn to alleviate avoidable suffering
for others and ourselves.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
#PersonalGrowth
130 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
14th Jun 2023 12:57pm
14th Jun 2023 12:57pm
The Past Imperfect
We do not have to be what we were being.
We do not have to do what we were doing.
We all have the past imperfect,
in which our actions were interrupted,
changed from corrupted and detrimental
back to wholesome and beneficial for everyone.
We do not have to do what we were doing.
We all have the past imperfect,
in which our actions were interrupted,
changed from corrupted and detrimental
back to wholesome and beneficial for everyone.
#happiness
#hope
#Buddhist
#SelfReflection
#Taoism
135 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th Jun 2023 2:16am
7th Jun 2023 2:16am
New Order
#relationships
#BDSM
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#lover
430 reads
13 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
1st Jun 2023 11:31pm
1st Jun 2023 11:31pm
Psychodelical
If you are running from something,
that thing will chase you.
If you are approaching something,
that thing will embrace you.
that thing will chase you.
If you are approaching something,
that thing will embrace you.
#Buddhist
#Taoism
150 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
25th May 2023 2:15am
25th May 2023 2:15am
Too drooly for schooly
What do you call it when
your artificial intelligence
is smarter than your
above average human ones?
your artificial intelligence
is smarter than your
above average human ones?
#school
#Buddhist
#Taoism #PersonalGrowth
#Taoism #PersonalGrowth
151 reads
0 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
24th May 2023 4:40pm
24th May 2023 4:40pm
Gentle Elephants
I could not extinguish my ego,
so I attached it to altruism,
and if you abuse kindness,
I will trample you like a herd of stampeding elephants.
so I attached it to altruism,
and if you abuse kindness,
I will trample you like a herd of stampeding elephants.
#kindness
#Buddhist
#Taoism #gratitude
#Taoism #gratitude
257 reads
3 Comments
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