BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:23pm
Yesterday 11:23pm
Across your knees
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
71 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:53am
Yesterday 1:53am
Your turn today my turn tomorrow
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#sex
#temptation
88 reads
0 Comments
Kinkwizard_95
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:55am
1st Feb 2025 11:55am
Deviant slut (A lil limerick)
There once was a deviant slut
Except she was stuck in a rut
With no man to shag and
She can’t shag her dad
Her favourite sport went caput!
There once was a deviant slut
A collection of toys up her butt
Some gas did arise
It caught her surprise
Her sweet derrière did erupt!
There once was a deviant slut
No place could she ever be put
No rope tied her down
Always clowning around
I guess we best all wish her luck!
Except she was stuck in a rut
With no man to shag and
She can’t shag her dad
Her favourite sport went caput!
There once was a deviant slut
A collection of toys up her butt
Some gas did arise
It caught her surprise
Her sweet derrière did erupt!
There once was a deviant slut
No place could she ever be put
No rope tied her down
Always clowning around
I guess we best all wish her luck!
#BDSM
#erotic
#funny
#rhyming
#sex
91 reads
1 Comment
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 00:27am
1st Feb 2025 00:27am
Let this boy go free
#BDSM
#erotic
#passion
#porn
#temptation
86 reads
0 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 8:47pm
30th Jan 2025 8:47pm
Bitch On A Leash (part two)
As my spit-drizzled cock stood erect before her face, she looked at me and gave a smile that would show she was having childish fun.
So I pulled on her leash until she came face to face with me. I pressed my lips into hers and we laughed. There she reached down and started fondling my sweaty balls as she said, “I love how you taste. I want you to drain it down my throat.”
“Every drop?” I asked jokingly.
“Yes! I’m gonna suck it out like a vacuum.”
She slid back down between my knees and she gave quick licks over my balls as she grasped the base of...
So I pulled on her leash until she came face to face with me. I pressed my lips into hers and we laughed. There she reached down and started fondling my sweaty balls as she said, “I love how you taste. I want you to drain it down my throat.”
“Every drop?” I asked jokingly.
“Yes! I’m gonna suck it out like a vacuum.”
She slid back down between my knees and she gave quick licks over my balls as she grasped the base of...
#BDSM
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#sex
113 reads
1 Comment
runningturtle87
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 7:33am
30th Jan 2025 7:33am
Looking at Pools of Color
Looking at Pools of Color
Each
of these
seems
to be
a topological
depression
surrounded by
increasingly
higher ground,
a liquid
map
to the state
of mind
in
reflection.
Narcissis
or
Dionysus?
The spectrum
of the human drama
at the quantum level....
Was this
your
intention?
Each
of these
seems
to be
a topological
depression
surrounded by
increasingly
higher ground,
a liquid
map
to the state
of mind
in
reflection.
Narcissis
or
Dionysus?
The spectrum
of the human drama
at the quantum level....
Was this
your
intention?
#BDSM
#sensual
76 reads
0 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:00pm
28th Jan 2025 11:00pm
Drink me, kill me... (with Reading)
Especially cruel in the mouth.
You don't need to have mercy on me.
Sophisticated brain games
Make me forget my complaints
Cut my skin with a razor.
Like a hundred times before.
My soul is polluted
by a sadistic fantasy.
I have long been discouraged
by false emotions.
Broke all my dreams
Men's hands are sweaty.
Why do I need these...
sadists and animals! ...
You don't need to have mercy on me.
Sophisticated brain games
Make me forget my complaints
Cut my skin with a razor.
Like a hundred times before.
My soul is polluted
by a sadistic fantasy.
I have long been discouraged
by false emotions.
Broke all my dreams
Men's hands are sweaty.
Why do I need these...
sadists and animals! ...
#abuse
#BDSM
#conflict
#dark
#lust
182 reads
27 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:35am
28th Jan 2025 11:35am
FCKN
Deep inside you
And there's no place else I'd rather be
Tender touch be damned
I'm pouring on the coals
as this inferno consumes me
And
as the tremors take hold during my moment of greatest satisfaction
My fingers close fiercely upon her beautiful Brown neck
Stealing her air with force
nearly equal to the power of each pulse from her puss
as it greedily milks me of my steaming liquid seed
And there's no place else I'd rather be
Tender touch be damned
I'm pouring on the coals
as this inferno consumes me
And
as the tremors take hold during my moment of greatest satisfaction
My fingers close fiercely upon her beautiful Brown neck
Stealing her air with force
nearly equal to the power of each pulse from her puss
as it greedily milks me of my steaming liquid seed
#BDSM
#erotic
#love #sensual
#love #sensual
206 reads
2 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 00:33am
27th Jan 2025 00:33am
Top Shelf pt 3 (Twist and Final)
#BDSM
#dirty
#lust
#sex
#sexy
220 reads
14 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 11:57pm
26th Jan 2025 11:57pm
Role play swop
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
133 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 11:20pm
25th Jan 2025 11:20pm
First session
#BDSM
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#temptation
233 reads
0 Comments
MasterG
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 3:57am
24th Jan 2025 3:57am
My Queen
I take you as mine
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
There is nothing left but time
Your beauty is unmatched
Your spirit is unscratched
You now belong to me
There is nowhere to flee
I am your Master
You are my slave
I take what I want
You give without pause
I care for your wants
Strive for your needs
You submit to my lead
I protect your body and soul
You call me your Master
I call you mine
To protect and to hold
Come to your Master
My Girl
My Love
My Queen
#BDSM
193 reads
0 Comments
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