BDSM Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BDSM seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Waiting
#BDSM
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Smile you're on camera innocence
twist the need a little deeper
lust of the flesh is superior when combined with the ethereal
combining the two you can go much deeper
penetration of the soul is always virgin territory
there are so many levels to reach
honesty of heart makes it sweeter
a challenge, a fight arouses you
but you can be cruel and withhold otherwise
enjoying the attention
while being groomed a companion
flickering on the horizon is your stoic dark
ever the Sadist you keep everything to the chest
I've tested other men,...
lust of the flesh is superior when combined with the ethereal
combining the two you can go much deeper
penetration of the soul is always virgin territory
there are so many levels to reach
honesty of heart makes it sweeter
a challenge, a fight arouses you
but you can be cruel and withhold otherwise
enjoying the attention
while being groomed a companion
flickering on the horizon is your stoic dark
ever the Sadist you keep everything to the chest
I've tested other men,...
#love
#lust
#BDSM
78 reads
4 Comments
Davina needs cock
#lust
#BDSM
#vampires
62 reads
6 Comments
Architecture of suffering
The darkness is thickening...
And the darkness craves bodies...
The world is filled with fragments of desires.
In the incomprehensibility of sinful thoughts
There is a limit assigned to purity...
The point of no return happens early...
Canvases of bodies...
With strokes of words - subjects of secrets,
Drowning in the pulsation of hidden moments
And the foreignness of a crumpled dream...
Dreams are cut... nightmares
To the touch...
And the darkness craves bodies...
The world is filled with fragments of desires.
In the incomprehensibility of sinful thoughts
There is a limit assigned to purity...
The point of no return happens early...
Canvases of bodies...
With strokes of words - subjects of secrets,
Drowning in the pulsation of hidden moments
And the foreignness of a crumpled dream...
Dreams are cut... nightmares
To the touch...
#dark
#secrets
#suffering
#emptiness
#BDSM
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37 Comments
Go Ahead. Do It To Me. You Know You Want To Do it.
Harrison finally opened his
eyes and saw himself stripped naked
and strapped to a table with
Joyce sitting on his lap
and allowing him
to start humping
her until
they get
tired.
eyes and saw himself stripped naked
and strapped to a table with
Joyce sitting on his lap
and allowing him
to start humping
her until
they get
tired.
#BDSM
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
#passion
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When Power Meets Power
Looking into a set of eyes that mirrors your own
Questioning can you concur someone who has concurred?
Can you tame one who is untamable?
One has to bend
or both will break
Strength
Power
The very essence of the brutal desire rises and crashes against skin,
Passion is palatable
“Kneel” one-word command, used with a tone that would elicit a response
“You kneel, now!” retorted through painted blood-red lips.
and the dance of wills begins.
Questioning can you concur someone who has concurred?
Can you tame one who is untamable?
One has to bend
or both will break
Strength
Power
The very essence of the brutal desire rises and crashes against skin,
Passion is palatable
“Kneel” one-word command, used with a tone that would elicit a response
“You kneel, now!” retorted through painted blood-red lips.
and the dance of wills begins.
#erotic
#BDSM
139 reads
7 Comments
Not Submissive
#sex
#erotic
#BDSM #dirty
#BDSM #dirty
188 reads
7 Comments
Ending of my day
#love
#lust
#sex
#dreams
#BDSM
144 reads
2 Comments
I Want to Play
I want to play,
Who is willing to take my hand?
This is no ordinary game.
I want you to understand.
The room will be dark.
The candles will be lit.
The cross is up,
your knees you will sit.
If you are scared
to have this kind of fun.
Maybe another time,
right now run.
Silence is required
until I say.
Follow my instructions
In this game I play.
There is a name,
I want to be called, understand.
It...
Who is willing to take my hand?
This is no ordinary game.
I want you to understand.
The room will be dark.
The candles will be lit.
The cross is up,
your knees you will sit.
If you are scared
to have this kind of fun.
Maybe another time,
right now run.
Silence is required
until I say.
Follow my instructions
In this game I play.
There is a name,
I want to be called, understand.
It...
#sex
#erotic
#BDSM
236 reads
6 Comments
Morning Bliss
sunset beginnings, morning bliss
my sensitive spots crave the touch of your manhood
the way you part my lips arouses
grazing my peach
creaming in desire
I wiggle with anticipation
the frustrated grind gets me frenzied
my wanton lust answers you in submission
yes, I need you I admit it
that's when you dominate me sexually
but Dominance happened long before the sex
it is a test of wills to get all my personas to answer you
finally, my alter egos relent
and confess you know what to do
my demons aligh ...
my sensitive spots crave the touch of your manhood
the way you part my lips arouses
grazing my peach
creaming in desire
I wiggle with anticipation
the frustrated grind gets me frenzied
my wanton lust answers you in submission
yes, I need you I admit it
that's when you dominate me sexually
but Dominance happened long before the sex
it is a test of wills to get all my personas to answer you
finally, my alter egos relent
and confess you know what to do
my demons aligh ...
#love
#lust
#BDSM
187 reads
15 Comments
Ardor
dragon's breath face your truth
you revel in anarchy
bedlam of soul, masochistic in nature
Sadistic Father is up for the challenge
greedy lust in which we trust
burning with the need
succumbing to the flame
that is your ardor
seeking your affections
altering according to your infatuation
steamy altercations you love my jealousy
stroking your ego I feed your passions
overthinking everything I place her on your plate
saying too much I give away the game
before it's even fully realized
you revel in anarchy
bedlam of soul, masochistic in nature
Sadistic Father is up for the challenge
greedy lust in which we trust
burning with the need
succumbing to the flame
that is your ardor
seeking your affections
altering according to your infatuation
steamy altercations you love my jealousy
stroking your ego I feed your passions
overthinking everything I place her on your plate
saying too much I give away the game
before it's even fully realized
#love
#lust
#BDSM
104 reads
8 Comments
Chaste Of Vision
letting go of the feeling
rising in my binds
flying high I realize I can shake the chains
conjuring my men back to me
stirring the dank black
sighing silently waiting to be sated
I extend my greetings
awaiting your pleasure
I'm Sadistic, I can be cruel when provoked
you desire the masochist who challenges you
I've set surprises all over
at one time no fascination with life could you find
now, sink your teeth deep darling this is intrigue
starving for my image
turning in the need bewitched ...
rising in my binds
flying high I realize I can shake the chains
conjuring my men back to me
stirring the dank black
sighing silently waiting to be sated
I extend my greetings
awaiting your pleasure
I'm Sadistic, I can be cruel when provoked
you desire the masochist who challenges you
I've set surprises all over
at one time no fascination with life could you find
now, sink your teeth deep darling this is intrigue
starving for my image
turning in the need bewitched ...
#love
#lust
#BDSM
89 reads
7 Comments
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