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Lonely Life Dancer
Fiery thoughts, with searing needs
Blanket nights in solitary prisons
Within the hearts the wants
engulfs, full might the needs
for answered calls
Alas the night is still
The cold wind blows
Toss the slumber to the side
No more warmth the cover gives
Nor comfort of similar needs
Nothing touches the shivering
Of deep desires to be heard
Or touch or feel or taste
Silent is the silver lighted night
A midnight walk, a slow dance
Rustling dead leaves
Pushed by lonely feet
On nightscapes of grey
Desires colours the air
Paint the world in violet
Yet Nature’s spirit is still
Sighs the heart in defeat
Falling robes on cracked
Dry soil
A slow dance to music
Unheard
But by the naiads
From the bubbly brooks.
Blanket nights in solitary prisons
Within the hearts the wants
engulfs, full might the needs
for answered calls
Alas the night is still
The cold wind blows
Toss the slumber to the side
No more warmth the cover gives
Nor comfort of similar needs
Nothing touches the shivering
Of deep desires to be heard
Or touch or feel or taste
Silent is the silver lighted night
A midnight walk, a slow dance
Rustling dead leaves
Pushed by lonely feet
On nightscapes of grey
Desires colours the air
Paint the world in violet
Yet Nature’s spirit is still
Sighs the heart in defeat
Falling robes on cracked
Dry soil
A slow dance to music
Unheard
But by the naiads
From the bubbly brooks.
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Re: Lonely Life Dancer
2nd Apr 2013 4:20pm
A most chilling write Dear Grace.
fiery thoughts with searing needs
Blanket nights in solitary prisons
Within the hearts the wants
engulfs,<----Hearts desire and Yearn to live...
A Beautiful painting of Longing my Dear...
keep the the Sun upon Your face at all times!!!
naiads:)
fiery thoughts with searing needs
Blanket nights in solitary prisons
Within the hearts the wants
engulfs,<----Hearts desire and Yearn to live...
A Beautiful painting of Longing my Dear...
keep the the Sun upon Your face at all times!!!
naiads:)
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re: Re: Lonely Life Dancer
2nd Apr 2013 4:40pm
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Anonymous
2nd Apr 2013 6:32pm
Incredible imagery Grace.
Strider....
Strider....
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re: Re: Lonely Life Dancer
2nd Apr 2013 9:51pm
Re: Lonely Life Dancer
2nd Apr 2013 8:24pm
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2nd Apr 2013 9:52pm
Re: Lonely Life Dancer
This was so lovely Grace
The imagery the feel of the poem was beautiful, just very beautiful.
Hugs dear friend
Much poem love
G
The imagery the feel of the poem was beautiful, just very beautiful.
Hugs dear friend
Much poem love
G
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Re: Lonely Life Dancer
3rd Apr 2013 4:16am
Re: Lonely Life Dancer
5th Apr 2013 10:26am
Ah, this poem reminds me of how I was feeling the other night, when I thought my darling love had abandoned me! But then he got a hold of me and we chatted, and the magic returned to my heart, the warmth to my soul, the life to my bones. Love is amazing because we can despair of it one minute and be cherished by it the next! Plus... it makes for beautiful poetry! Thank you for sharing your poem with us, Grace, it was indeed chilling, but also beautiful, honest, and from the heart as all your poems are. :D
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re: Re: Lonely Life Dancer
Thanks Jessica my dear, for reading and commenting. I understand what you went through and I hope you will persevere, always.
Re: Lonely Life Dancer
5th Apr 2013 2:32pm
Where is the knight in shining armor? Can't let that happen to you. If I were him, I won't let you dance alone, literally speaking.
It was indeed chilling and captivating!
It was indeed chilling and captivating!
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re: Re: Lonely Life Dancer
Knights in shining armour happens to a few, EngrVV, and blessed are those who get another chance. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Re: Lonely Life Dancer
5th Apr 2013 3:46pm
My Dearest Grace, you are undoubtedly one of my all time favorite poets. This piece is profoundly emotional without being syrupy or sappy, your elegance of pen is your trade mark.Beautiful.
Red
Red
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re: Re: Lonely Life Dancer
5th Apr 2013 4:12pm
Dear Gypsy Red, I am humbled by your kind words of encouragement. I am glad you liked the poem, dear.