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Heart Of An Angel
A free spirit walking barefoot
across the moon,
I saw dolphins chasing off the midnight gloom,
She deserves worlds of sensual landscapes,
blooming flowers
brightly colored ornaments singing her praises,
She loves unconditionally
riding purple coated horses.
Just a kind soul constantly
rocked by male villainous forces.
(Silence transport my body away )
across the moon,
I saw dolphins chasing off the midnight gloom,
She deserves worlds of sensual landscapes,
blooming flowers
brightly colored ornaments singing her praises,
She loves unconditionally
riding purple coated horses.
Just a kind soul constantly
rocked by male villainous forces.
(Silence transport my body away )
Published 31st Mar 2013
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Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 4:19pm
A very nice write, feels mystical and magical ;-)
Little advice for an edit though- line one should be barefoot and line 4 add an "s" to deserve.
This really captures a magic in it
well penned
Little advice for an edit though- line one should be barefoot and line 4 add an "s" to deserve.
This really captures a magic in it
well penned
Anonymous
31st Mar 2013 9:31pm
Truly truly enjoyed this write!
Had the feeling of floating away into thin air.
Being weightless, like a feather...
Had the feeling of floating away into thin air.
Being weightless, like a feather...
