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Oh My...
Oh my dearest heartache,
How I love you so.
Oh my dearest heartbreak,
How I wish you wouldn't go.
Oh my dearest love,
How I hate you so.
Oh your kisses from above,
How they make me glow.
I glow with fury, glow with rage,
Hate your guts, although you say,
"I love you," at point blank range,
Hate you and all your ways.
Oh my, how I'd kill you
If ever I got the chance.
Oh my, how you'd hate me too,
If only I had the chance.
Because I love you,
And love is weakness,
So I hate you,
Oh my dearest.
How I love you so.
Oh my dearest heartbreak,
How I wish you wouldn't go.
Oh my dearest love,
How I hate you so.
Oh your kisses from above,
How they make me glow.
I glow with fury, glow with rage,
Hate your guts, although you say,
"I love you," at point blank range,
Hate you and all your ways.
Oh my, how I'd kill you
If ever I got the chance.
Oh my, how you'd hate me too,
If only I had the chance.
Because I love you,
And love is weakness,
So I hate you,
Oh my dearest.
Published 26th Mar 2013
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26th Mar 2013 1:41am
Please comment, I would appreciate advice as well as run of the mill, everyday, ordinary, common-place comments.
26th Mar 2013 5:03pm
Oh My!
Pun intended haha. Reading this reminds me of why I fell inlove with poetry.
This was deep and thought provoking from stanza to stanza. Then the ending just warpped my mind. It gave a whole different meaning to the poem. Had to read it again after that to fully appreciate it.
Kinda felt like I was looking at both sides of a sword. But such is the love hate relationship when inlove.
Brilliant write.
Pun intended haha. Reading this reminds me of why I fell inlove with poetry.
This was deep and thought provoking from stanza to stanza. Then the ending just warpped my mind. It gave a whole different meaning to the poem. Had to read it again after that to fully appreciate it.
Kinda felt like I was looking at both sides of a sword. But such is the love hate relationship when inlove.
Brilliant write.
26th Mar 2013 7:26pm
Thank you very much. I truly enjoy reading other people's comments on poetry, whether it's my poetry or someone else's. It's really nice to see other people's point of view, and I hope people continue commenting on my stuff, because I'd have to say that's one of the best ways I can learn how to do better next time.
27th Mar 2013 5:19pm
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5th Apr 2013 7:03pm
wow..totally dig the pace and emotion change in this..very cool-rollercoaster emotionally.
I like the structure and it's paced perfectly..nice pen.
I like the structure and it's paced perfectly..nice pen.
5th Apr 2013 7:33pm
Thanks for the input, I really appreciate any and all comments on my poetry, whether it's advice on what I did wrong or commendation on what I did right.
14th May 2013 9:31am
