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How it is
Look into his eyes
and you can tell
that he's a angry and sad man.
Once a proud man
the fire in his eyes
has become stone.
He'd rather fight, than love.
Destroy, than create.
Pure anger,
for how wronged this man has felt.
He has become
bound to violence
and drained of all empathy.
Still living by his Code.
and you can tell
that he's a angry and sad man.
Once a proud man
the fire in his eyes
has become stone.
He'd rather fight, than love.
Destroy, than create.
Pure anger,
for how wronged this man has felt.
He has become
bound to violence
and drained of all empathy.
Still living by his Code.
Published 19th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 8:35am
A very nice piece there, Evan!
What I like is that it pictures or mentions many strong emotions without it being sentiment.
Its a strong piece and I know some of those that you have mentioned!
>Like John lydon sang, anger is an energy that is, be careful of how to use it...
What I like is that it pictures or mentions many strong emotions without it being sentiment.
Its a strong piece and I know some of those that you have mentioned!
>Like John lydon sang, anger is an energy that is, be careful of how to use it...
19th Mar 2013 8:42am
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 9:07am
The Code indeed!
Nice write Evan.
Strider...
Nice write Evan.
Strider...
19th Mar 2013 9:10am
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 11:47am
This is cool...
19th Mar 2013 10:25pm
Anonymous
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19th Mar 2013 10:26pm
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19th Mar 2013 10:27pm
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 7:19pm
Excellent poem, Evan. I particularly like this:
He'd rather fight, than love.
Destroy, than create.
Carlene :)
He'd rather fight, than love.
Destroy, than create.
Carlene :)
19th Mar 2013 10:27pm
20th Mar 2013 00:30am
I'd say something everyone would love themselves to hear but look at the comments doesn't seem like it would be worth it. So cheers.
20th Mar 2013 00:48am
17th Apr 2013 5:25am
It's been a while, I've missed seeing this particular brand of honesty.
