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Silhouette
I feel like a silhouette
A shadow of myself
Disfigured in outline
A shape not defined
Just a line in profile
Shapes in shades of grey
outside myself, I see my
silhouette, it feels as if
I'm not here
A shadow of myself
Disfigured in outline
A shape not defined
Just a line in profile
Shapes in shades of grey
outside myself, I see my
silhouette, it feels as if
I'm not here
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Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 3:54am
I relate to this a lot. Feeling like an empty void but still here in this shell we call a body. Great write!
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re: Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 7:19pm
Thank you Caged_Raven
I love your handle, by the way
It's a dark lonely feeling, living inside our shell sometimes
Much Love for your comment and relating
G
I love your handle, by the way
It's a dark lonely feeling, living inside our shell sometimes
Much Love for your comment and relating
G
Re: Silhouette
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 8:30am
felt this too often, not a nice feeling. You have worded it beautifully. Well done, awesome piece. much love to you G
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re: Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 7:24pm
The world is beautiful and wondrous to behold, but it can be so dark, cold and lonely inside our silhouette.
Thank you for feeling me Miki
Much love to you my Sis
G
Thank you for feeling me Miki
Much love to you my Sis
G
Re: Silhouette
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 12:55pm
silhouette on the wall
will you dance with me tonight
sway your body to the candle flame
touch my shadowed fingertips
as it's now just you and me
GREAT INSPIRING WRITE!! LOL!! :)
will you dance with me tonight
sway your body to the candle flame
touch my shadowed fingertips
as it's now just you and me
GREAT INSPIRING WRITE!! LOL!! :)
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re: Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 7:38pm
Allow our shadows to intertwine
in this moment in time
moving with the flicker
like liquor, to a flame
we ingite
leaving our souls
to remain aflame
Much love Flower for you are the spark of inspiration
G
in this moment in time
moving with the flicker
like liquor, to a flame
we ingite
leaving our souls
to remain aflame
Much love Flower for you are the spark of inspiration
G
Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 1:40pm
re: Re: Silhouette
19th Mar 2013 7:42pm
Oh My Sister Grace
It's in the shadows of our Silhouette where our pain so easily seeps out.
I thank you for feeling me here, Grace
Much Love my Sis, my friend
G
It's in the shadows of our Silhouette where our pain so easily seeps out.
I thank you for feeling me here, Grace
Much Love my Sis, my friend
G
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27th Mar 2013 3:30am
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