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coarsen graves
coarsen graves...
the blistering afternoon sun
baking the bouquets
ontop of them
left as lifeless as
those they were placed
to pay homage to
the blistering afternoon sun
baking the bouquets
ontop of them
left as lifeless as
those they were placed
to pay homage to
Published 18th Mar 2013
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2013 7:53pm
The title is perfect for this well-written piece, Faith. What a poetic choice of words, "baking the bouquets!" I also like the comparisons drawn & the photo complements the poem, perfectly. Great work, my friend! :) xoxo
Carlene
Carlene
9th Apr 2013 8:11pm
Thank you so much, Carlene. Must have missed seeing your response when I was a way for a short while. Always happy to hear from you, dear. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Mar 2013 00:04am
18th Mar 2013 11:33pm
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9th Apr 2013 8:12pm
18th Mar 2013 11:51pm
Realy like this peice faith short and straight to the point, loving the title to.
marcus
marcus
9th Apr 2013 8:14pm
Thank you, dear Marcus. Must have missed your wonderful remarks when i was away recently. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
19th Mar 2013 8:04am
Very beautiful,Faith! its written with a melancholic twist which i like a lot!
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