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which one are you
in this world there
are both givers and takers
which one are you
the same is true
for the winners and losers
which do you choose
i have endured
too many takers who
have abused my giving ways
and as for the losers
i haven't even space
in my head to rent to them
are both givers and takers
which one are you
the same is true
for the winners and losers
which do you choose
i have endured
too many takers who
have abused my giving ways
and as for the losers
i haven't even space
in my head to rent to them
Published 2nd Apr 2013
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2nd Apr 2013 8:27pm
It's about equilibrium, difficult to come by, but I do believe we all give and take, some just take liberties.
Great pen Faith. :)
Great pen Faith. :)
5th Apr 2013 10:25pm
Wow! I love how you put that, that some just take liberties. Many thanks for your wonderful comments! xo
Faith
Faith
I would say I'm a giver who allow takers to use me! I love giving but I admit, I'm gullible!
#StillWorkingOnME
I don't mind being a loser when the battle was fought with pride.
What's a man to gain/win and still have nothing?!
Thought provoking and lovely read, Faith!
#StillWorkingOnME
I don't mind being a loser when the battle was fought with pride.
What's a man to gain/win and still have nothing?!
Thought provoking and lovely read, Faith!
4th Apr 2013 00:54am
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Lady Rain. I enjoyed reading all you have shared here. You raise ssome very good points. Always a pleasure to see you have stopped by! xoxo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2013 8:46pm
Truly amazing work, Faith. I can so relate to every word, every line. So beautifully written & deeply thought provoking. Each stanza, powerful. And that last stanza & its last line is awesome! Thank you for sharing this little masterpiece!!! ON my reading list, for sure! :) xoxo
Carlene
Carlene
4th Apr 2013 00:58am
I'm so honored by your wonderful comments, Carlene. It really touched me to know you thought the poem worthy of your reading list. You are so sweet! xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2013 10:50pm
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5th Apr 2013 10:13pm
2nd Apr 2013 11:47pm
Indeed though we do each give and take, in essence each of us is primarily either a giver or taker. Most couples are comprised of a giver and taker...so when two givers bond... THAT is living large!
5th Apr 2013 10:12pm
You are so right, Ken. Great to see you have dropped by. Always a pleasure!
Faith
Faith
3rd Apr 2013 2:40am
OMG!! Faith, I love this one! The subject...wow, you read my mind, but certainly put the words much better than I could!
4th Apr 2013 00:59am
You are so kind, dear one! I'm honored you have put my poem on your reading list. Thank you for your most lovely comments. xo
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2013 11:21am
So nice to be reading your poetry again, dear Faith, it has been a while. Always a pleasure to have a reflectant observer!
4th Apr 2013 00:51am
Thank you so much, dear lady. It's good to be back. Have lots of catching up to do. It's nice to know I was missed. xo
Faith
Faith
3rd Apr 2013 6:26pm
I guess that makes me a giver, im a big fan of karma.
Fantastic write hope all us well
marcus
Fantastic write hope all us well
marcus
4th Apr 2013 00:48am
Thank you so much, Marcus. I'm a giver like you who also believes in karma. I'm ok, just got busy with life and working alot lately. xo
Faith
Faith
