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done
You hurt me you hurt me bad
i hate this i hate it all
im sick of pretending that i hate you
im done
done with life
Done being in your shadow
Done acting...
acting like im not in love with you
i hate this i hate it all
im sick of pretending that i hate you
im done
done with life
Done being in your shadow
Done acting...
acting like im not in love with you
Published 18th Mar 2013
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18th Mar 2013 1:42am
I really liked this. I liked the emphasis you put on done by repeating. And when I read it, I was reminded of a situationI was in and I liked that you gave me emotion through it. Good job!
18th Mar 2013 7:16pm
