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suicide night
Plot your death [/font]
Check it twice[/font]
No mistakes, this time is right[/font]
Seal it up[/font]
Tell no one about it[/font]
Carry on like nothings wrong[/font]
Gather supplies[/font]
For your ultimate demise[/font]
Find that place [/font]
Grab your case[/font]
Write your note [/font]
Sound remote[/font]
They can relate [/font]
But tell them its too late[/font]
Your choice is made[/font]
Your fate is sealed[/font]
A bang in the night [/font]
Would give anyone a fright[/font]
Go with a noose?[/font]
No, that would disturb even a goose[/font]
Just grab your knife [/font]
And end your life
Check it twice[/font]
No mistakes, this time is right[/font]
Seal it up[/font]
Tell no one about it[/font]
Carry on like nothings wrong[/font]
Gather supplies[/font]
For your ultimate demise[/font]
Find that place [/font]
Grab your case[/font]
Write your note [/font]
Sound remote[/font]
They can relate [/font]
But tell them its too late[/font]
Your choice is made[/font]
Your fate is sealed[/font]
A bang in the night [/font]
Would give anyone a fright[/font]
Go with a noose?[/font]
No, that would disturb even a goose[/font]
Just grab your knife [/font]
And end your life
Published 2nd Sep 2010
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2nd Sep 2010 10:23pm
the last line is short but it does not lack of meaning. it shows the simplicity of how a person can end their life. just grab a knife thats all it takes to breathe your last breath..
3rd Sep 2010 6:45am
3rd Sep 2010 5:48am
Haven't been on here in a while and just read your poem... i really really like this...
good job :D
good job :D
3rd Sep 2010 6:44am
3rd Sep 2010 9:18pm
I can relate
I like the way you put "and end your life" in a smaller font, it adds a good deal of weight to the poem...
I like the way you put "and end your life" in a smaller font, it adds a good deal of weight to the poem...
5th Sep 2010 10:23pm
10th Sep 2010 10:00pm
2nd Jun 2013 00:37am
