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Travel Destination
self-imposed crossroads
senses diluted
by legal corrosives
I incoherently veer
toward dead-end subConsciously chosen
direction frozen
suicide slow-ride continues
weakened by poisins
blocked from avenues
toward fragrance of blossoms
I dream of collision
a likely vain ambition
on this path much less taken
admittedly character driven
my one-way street so vacant
Once I arrive, hath Hell vacations?
senses diluted
by legal corrosives
I incoherently veer
toward dead-end subConsciously chosen
direction frozen
suicide slow-ride continues
weakened by poisins
blocked from avenues
toward fragrance of blossoms
I dream of collision
a likely vain ambition
on this path much less taken
admittedly character driven
my one-way street so vacant
Once I arrive, hath Hell vacations?
Published 21st Feb 2013
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21st Feb 2013 6:37am
"a likely vain ambition
on this path much less taken
admittedly character driven
my one-way street so vacant"<---love that!
Dark yet beautiful!
21st Feb 2013 6:50am
21st Feb 2013 9:51am
21st Feb 2013 10:37pm
I agree Grace !
what fun would Torment be for Satan
if IT never got a chance to give us
a false sense of hope once in a while ?
what fun would Torment be for Satan
if IT never got a chance to give us
a false sense of hope once in a while ?
21st Feb 2013 12:39pm
Lol drivel I like this piece its dark but still holds your sense of humor well done.....:)
21st Feb 2013 4:33pm
