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The Lies That Bind
Roll a four, or a three. Six faces on that one, but
many more up the sleeve. A fitting occasion is
fitfully suited, custom-designed.
This one agrees, a short smile tugging the strings,
and that one is Zen, dispensing wisdom in
serene-coated hypocrisy.
This is the strong, competent one that brooks no
questions. Oh, and here is the gracious hostess
enshrouded in perfection.
Worst of all is the mirrored labyrinth, pulsing
with illusions that enter and reside, outstay
their uselessness
blank-flash and fracture
the remaining crystal-thin
dew drops of
authenticity.
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Re: The Lies That Bind
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 5:07pm
Nice true write Ataki.
Strider
Strider

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19th Feb 2013 5:14pm
Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 5:12pm
Darlin
I don't know anyone who hasn't felt this at some point in their lives, and if they haven't ?
Talk about some serious lying ;)
Damn fine read :)
I don't know anyone who hasn't felt this at some point in their lives, and if they haven't ?
Talk about some serious lying ;)
Damn fine read :)
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re: Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 5:15pm
Maggie, thank you muchlyyyyyyyyyy.
Weird mood hangover from poem, apologies.
*manic grin*
Weird mood hangover from poem, apologies.
*manic grin*
re: re: Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 5:33pm
I dig this...it has everything I like, sarcasm and honesty!
well written Atakti
well written Atakti
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Re: The Lies That Bind
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 5:36pm
Very beautiful, its both very strong and a bit vulnerable. The combination makes it even more powerful!

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Re: The Lies That Bind
Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 8:50pm
So true & nicely inked, Atakti! Fab last stanza, as well. I love the feel & the depth in this piece! Enjoyed lots! :)
Carlene
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re: Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 9:26pm
Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 8:51pm
'enshrouded in perfection.'
Loved how graceful your anger poem was,
power behind each line.
Much enjoyed :)
Loved how graceful your anger poem was,
power behind each line.
Much enjoyed :)
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re: Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 9:32pm
Graceful... well, maybe I have more than my fair share of angry poems *blush*
Thanks, Scribbler :)
Thanks, Scribbler :)
Re: The Lies That Bind
19th Feb 2013 10:12pm
A tangled web they do weave, and much corruptness afoot.
Great unique pen Atakti. :)
Great unique pen Atakti. :)
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Re: The Lies That Bind
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2013 6:08pm
:)This was Amazing! I Love It!

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