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let's be real
Previously entered in the Cliche' Competition
baby, please don't
handle me with kid's gloves
fluff up my pillow
beat around the bush
sugar-coat your words
keep secrets and such
you should know
atleast this much
i have nothing to prove
and i can take anything
as long as it's the truth
baby, please don't
handle me with kid's gloves
fluff up my pillow
beat around the bush
sugar-coat your words
keep secrets and such
you should know
atleast this much
i have nothing to prove
and i can take anything
as long as it's the truth
Published 15th Feb 2013
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15th Feb 2013 4:34pm
I too would rather be hit with the truth then tickled with lies...
I dig this :)
I dig this :)
15th Feb 2013 9:29pm
Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 4:52pm
I really like the way you put this together, Faith. It reads so well & is so expressive! Very well done! :)
15th Feb 2013 9:33pm
Thank you, Carlene. I appreciate hearing that as I tried to put as many cliches I could think of into the poem and still make it work. :)
Faith
Faith
15th Feb 2013 5:43pm
The truth is what matters even if it hurts badly.... Well said and penned Faith. :)
15th Feb 2013 9:34pm
Yes, that is the point of the poem. Thank you for your lovely comments. :)
Faith
Faith
Anonymous
15th Feb 2013 8:56pm
Truth or dare, you have wrapped the message up in lovely delicate paper words...Nicely done, Faith!
15th Feb 2013 9:36pm
15th Feb 2013 11:02pm
Another wonderful write! Short, sweet (for the most part anyway) and very to the point! Thank you!!
Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 3:09am
So straight on. Truth is better than lies anytime. Love this!! :)
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