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Lost and found
Lost souls
Lost opportunities
Lost love
Lost composure
Found pain
Found dope
Found escape
Found hate
Lost relationship
Lost esteem
Lost respect
Lost freedom
Found weakness
Found pain again!
Found helpless and hopeless
Found prayer
Lost opportunities
Lost love
Lost composure
Found pain
Found dope
Found escape
Found hate
Lost relationship
Lost esteem
Lost respect
Lost freedom
Found weakness
Found pain again!
Found helpless and hopeless
Found prayer
Published 15th Feb 2013
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15th Feb 2013 5:27am
I like the last line... it resembles a sort of reformat for the persona who came from losing everything and going into the dark side. Though I fear you need to put in more content in this one. Still, nice concept. I like this piece.
15th Feb 2013 5:31am
Maybe I will be able to add down the road right now that's about all there is, thanks for our input
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- Edited 12th Apr 2023 8:45pm
18th Feb 2013 3:24pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2023 8:45pm
18th Feb 2013 3:25pm
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