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TepidAllegory, A'Musement , Comedicinal
remembering, nay! rec a l l i n g
(to this very day)
that defining moment when
a major dysentery swept thru
Heaven,
despoiling, making stain as w'ill
any
vile d i s'ease... all
yOur
crafty colours, theeradiant
vistas ran dull&fowle,
(d e a r lord d i r e ! )-
cry [s] moan s , wimper'd whine
c o m plaints of vainglory's
mismanag'd
c o rrupt i o ns,
[an]implosive
embowelment! ,
no thing left to [of] thee
i'magination ,
no thing left
wh'ere once was a dearest Heaven,
now only
[a]Garden'scaped [by/of ]thee
unlawful A'liens
[of]myself
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(to this very day)
that defining moment when
a major dysentery swept thru
Heaven,
despoiling, making stain as w'ill
any
vile d i s'ease... all
yOur
crafty colours, theeradiant
vistas ran dull&fowle,
(d e a r lord d i r e ! )-
cry [s] moan s , wimper'd whine
c o m plaints of vainglory's
mismanag'd
c o rrupt i o ns,
[an]implosive
embowelment! ,
no thing left to [of] thee
i'magination ,
no thing left
wh'ere once was a dearest Heaven,
now only
[a]Garden'scaped [by/of ]thee
unlawful A'liens
[of]myself
XXXXXXXdkzk2013xxxxxxpfoto:dkzkXXXXXXXXX
Published 8th Feb 2013
| Edited 9th Feb 2013
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8th Feb 2013 6:05pm
GREAT POEM!!!!!
the ending really delivers a punch
beautiful and sad I love it!
the ending really delivers a punch
beautiful and sad I love it!
8th Feb 2013 6:08pm
9th Feb 2013 1:54am
AH dear Daniel but you have made a thing of most awesomeness and so lovely awesomely at that!
9th Feb 2013 4:00am
9th Feb 2013 10:14am
Oooooh lovely to come back and fall onto this page. wow!
Dan man is [ON] form.
"a major dysentery swept thru
Heaven,
despoiling, making stain as w'ill
any
vile d i s'ease"
Al .
Dan man is [ON] form.
"a major dysentery swept thru
Heaven,
despoiling, making stain as w'ill
any
vile d i s'ease"
Al .
9th Feb 2013 1:08pm
yr 'too kind', mr.Plint....butthenagain
there is
no sucha kind as
'too kind'......
peace&blessings[&or]
peas & blintzes
there is
no sucha kind as
'too kind'......
peace&blessings[&or]
peas & blintzes
10th Feb 2013 00:04am
Ding, ding, ding. We have a winner, a winner over here. I was thus rewarded for taking the time to stop this way. You're truly demented, in the bestest sense.
10th Feb 2013 00:16am
& bless'ye & yr re-turn....
-demented ding'a'lingus-
yes, that's got a nice ring(a'ding) to it....
'ope things is re'latively okay wit yr portion'o this'ere La Vida Loca wee's in
-demented ding'a'lingus-
yes, that's got a nice ring(a'ding) to it....
'ope things is re'latively okay wit yr portion'o this'ere La Vida Loca wee's in
10th Feb 2013 2:13am
Holy dog fuck!
Even just one damn word: "c o rrupt i o ns" says so much.
Hate to be a me-twoer (ah, vanity), but this one's on my list as well.
Even just one damn word: "c o rrupt i o ns" says so much.
Hate to be a me-twoer (ah, vanity), but this one's on my list as well.
10th Feb 2013 2:39am
'Holy dog fuck!'.....
yea,
tha's my kind on compli'ment! love it....
hmmm...this may be a 'record' #of 'comments'... definitely
my top# of readlists....
thank you all for baring yr nerves t'these swervy words
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10th Feb 2013 4:34pm
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10th Feb 2013 7:37pm
wow...thank ye, Ru....so glad you've dropped by--
may yr dear heavy praise not derail my 'quest' for unconditional humility---
peace&Loveblessings
may yr dear heavy praise not derail my 'quest' for unconditional humility---
peace&Loveblessings
