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Envisioning...
Fallow fields falter under snowfall;
deer dig at forage freshly frozen
to a cold and barren plot of ground.
Brown ducks dive beneath the ice;
minnows swarm circling aghast
unwilling to drown in disharmony.
Ravens sit stoically in the treetops
awaiting nothing less than mice
crossing pavement slick with traffic.
Old man winter keeps his boots on
so he can run out all night long
fetching frail unfortunates faltering.
deer dig at forage freshly frozen
to a cold and barren plot of ground.
Brown ducks dive beneath the ice;
minnows swarm circling aghast
unwilling to drown in disharmony.
Ravens sit stoically in the treetops
awaiting nothing less than mice
crossing pavement slick with traffic.
Old man winter keeps his boots on
so he can run out all night long
fetching frail unfortunates faltering.
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Re: Envisioning...
Anonymous
4th Feb 2013 9:23pm
Beautiful alliteration & imagery in this lovely poem, MaryAnn. Very well penned! :)
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8th Feb 2013 5:50pm
Thank you my friend - frost on the punkin again this morning, can't wait till spring! LOL!
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6th Feb 2013 1:58am
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8th Feb 2013 5:51pm
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6th Feb 2013 9:59pm
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8th Feb 2013 5:53pm
How's it going there, my friend? Heard a blizzard's coming north of you? Ooo-wee, I hope it doesn't bury the Northeast! Warm hugs, Mary Ann
Re: Envisioning...
8th Feb 2013 5:54pm
*grins*
Trying to play catch-up while I am cleaning. Loved the image you present of Old Man Winter, a bit more of a cogger as opposed to completely cruel.
Much enjoyed Hun :)
Trying to play catch-up while I am cleaning. Loved the image you present of Old Man Winter, a bit more of a cogger as opposed to completely cruel.
Much enjoyed Hun :)
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8th Feb 2013 6:01pm
Yeah, just my job, mon... I actually enjoyed writing the mice most; just my current drift, I guess.
Hee-hee, thanks MaggieG!
ps: I'm behind, too... slowpoking through poems, LOL.
Hee-hee, thanks MaggieG!
ps: I'm behind, too... slowpoking through poems, LOL.
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20th Feb 2013 9:18pm
A very pretty work you have here, I found myself "envisioning" the scenery clearly while reading - well done x
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3rd Mar 2013 3:49pm
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4th Mar 2013 6:52pm
Not to be read whilst in a depressive state, eh? I hesitated to even post it - 'twas written on a dark and gloomy morn when nothing pleasant came to mind.
:-) :-)
:-) :-)