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I SAW AN OLDER SOUL TODAY
I SAW an older soul today -- by grace
a withered hand across the face
and lines that told stories of chance
And in the eye of the ancient one
a glimmer of youth betrayed such age
the soul is ageless beyond congeniality
must we all be dead before we're born
As pity holds no truth against reality
We sour in youth and sweeten with time
-- // --
a withered hand across the face
and lines that told stories of chance
And in the eye of the ancient one
a glimmer of youth betrayed such age
the soul is ageless beyond congeniality
must we all be dead before we're born
As pity holds no truth against reality
We sour in youth and sweeten with time
-- // --
Published 27th Jan 2013
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2013 8:41am
WOW, this is piece is grand, I like what you say in this piece, true very true my friend!
30th Jan 2013 4:26am
Oh, thank you :) We are all on this ride in life, let us be kind to all creatures...great and small. Lucky souls find their soul mates...time passes by as a river, we ride the waves, tossing and turning, the dance of life. Let us smile through pain and cry with joy and, lest not worry grab us by the heart, only love dear beautiful soul, only love should have that opportunity! Thank you thank you thank you! Bless your light and kindle your soul. epr
6th Sep 2014 9:39pm
erobes a lovely write and in fact I am putting in my reading list for all to see!
Thank you for sharing ")
Zazzles
Thank you for sharing ")
Zazzles
