Numb day

Nicely phrased Gigi, well done! :-)

Thank you Evan xoxo

....perfecting the art of a fake smile. It’s not so difficult when you are completely numb.

I love emotional Ink! This was written beautifully, Gigi! :)

I think I have that smile permenitly plastered on my face :-) xoxox Ty

This poem is very haunting and thought provoking, I also like the format, creative, but not over the top and annoying like some people do.

I really liked:

"it's over
but it
             Still
                      Hurts
                                  The
                                          Same"

the stepping down effect really added to this, making me feel as if your heart was sinking in spite of yourself, that even though something is done and over with it's still dragging you down.

Love it.

Caliban

I'm glad you liked it sweetie. And I'm so so happy that you caught on to the ladder effect. I wasn't sure if anyone would get it.. Thank you xoxo

'I feel like I died ten thousand deaths
but yet more alive then anyone else'

I can sympathize.
This poem seeps emotion,
I do like the ladder of words
it fit nicely.

Well written,
Scribbler.

Thank you love xoxo

Beautiful gigi. and i didnt know it was you for battle. baby i cant do that. im sorry. i love you too much. not even for fun .

That's why I didn't start it. Couldn't boo. Not my thing to just bash people xoxox Ty sweetie

That's why I didn't start it. Couldn't boo. Not my thing to just bash people xoxox Ty sweetie

Gigi
So well done
The formatting adds to the poem
Many will identify the way you feel
Peace
Kitty

Thank you kitty xoxo

love this a little bit too much, fantastic work, i absolutely love this :)

Ty xoxox

Gg lovely one I feel this haunting poem in my heart and soul..ty xoxo Crim

Ty beautiful lady xoxo

Really enjoy what I've found here Gigi, it's a feeling I can resonate with. You've expressed it well :)

Peace, Indie

Thank you love xoxo

Gigi...

This is a fine write, and I do so get it. This resonates Doll :)  

Thank you Maggie xoxo

Can't feel anything. This must hurt even when you are numb and can't feel. You do great work, and it is good.

Thank you Percy xoxo

This is a very good poem. I like the last line. Usually feeling more alive than anyone else is described as a good thing, but in this context I think it means that the narrator's more sensitive to pain and death due to their great aliveness. I don't think the listed words ("Still Hurts The Same") need to be capitalised, but that's the only real nit I have. Thank you for the read.

I will take your advice since I admire your writing so much and trust your opinion and change it.. Ty xoxox