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Not every one's a porn star
"She rung me up and said
that she was wearing
the underwear
i gagged her with"
"No shitting,
did you guys have phone sex
after that?"
"No, she just
kinda cried to me
on the phone
for an hour until
i hung up."
that she was wearing
the underwear
i gagged her with"
"No shitting,
did you guys have phone sex
after that?"
"No, she just
kinda cried to me
on the phone
for an hour until
i hung up."
Published 27th Jan 2013
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27th Jan 2013 9:25pm
I like this, 'cause it's kind of funny, but offbeat and embarrassing. And embarrassing stuff is probably the most essential thing to write about, I think. I wasn't sure about the title - I think that makes what follows into too much of a easy laugh joke, when what I liked about it was it's deadpan awkwardness.
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